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    Chapter 1

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for the feedback.
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    I've been to most places I want to go to (Australia, New Zealand, all of Europe, USA). But of those left: 1. Canada 2. Russia 3. Japan 4. Belarus 5. Egypt - once things settle down
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    Chapter 1

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and for the feedback Taliesin. I don't think Kim confesses all either. I left it open so that my readers can make that decision for themselves based on their own opinions and experiences. If you read some of my other stuff, you'll find this was one of those rare darker stories I write.
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    We promise not to ruin the neighbourhood Lil
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    Chapter 8

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Thanks for the review Tom. Glad you're enjoying it. They are slightly more mature than you'd expect, but I like to think they still have their moments. They have been influenced by my own childhood; I was thought to be mature in many ways, but I still had my child-like moments of pure insanity.
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    Chapter 2

    Andy78 commented on Kiltie69's story chapter in Chapter 2

    The whipping scene was well written, as was the final sex scene. Looking forward to chapter three.
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    Prompt #114

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #114

    Thanks for the feedback. I was listening to Boney M at the time and that influenced the story.
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    And people ask me why I am in favour of the death sentence. The perpetrator of this crime is the scum of the Earth, and my tax money is going to keep him in the lap of luxury for the next god knows how long. Those like him deserve to fry. This reminds me of the Jamie Bulger murder back in 1992, where the perpetrators (two ten year olds) served a sentence of eight years. My thoughts and prayers are with Jack's family.
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    I don't have a big team either but here goes: I thank my BF who has been my support through the good times and the bad, and who has been great in allowing me to bounce ideas off him I'd also like to thank Cia for all her help and input and for the occasionally deserved chastisement It's with her help that I feel the technical side of my writing has improved. And of course I thank everyone here who has read and provided feedback on any of my stories. Without all you and your feeback, I would not develop as a writer and my stories would never get read.
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    I saw Mischa in his front yard shooting hoops. I’ve fancied him since I first saw him six months ago. My name is Samuel and I’m thirteen. His family have lived here for years and everyone in town seems to know Mischa and nobody seems to have a bad word to say about him. I think that’s why my parents don’t have a problem with us being friends. I walked down to his place. “Morning Mischa.” “Good Morning Samuel.” I love his Russian accent; I think it was either that or his pale violet eyes
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    Congratulations KC. It's great to see someone succeed at something they enjoy. I hope this will be the first of many for you.
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    Prompt #31

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #31

    Thanks for the feedback Cia. I've added in the comma - I still get those pesky punctuations confused at times
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    I'm sure you'll have no problem having your application accepted
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    Congratulations to all the winners, and everyone who was nominated.
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    Prompt #24

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #24

    Thanks. It actually sounded a lot easier than it was.
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    Have a great day Chris
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    Happy birthday. Enjoy.
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    I'd like to say hi to all the new members. Hope you all enjoy GA.
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    “I am not well known; nobody eminent, renowned,” Stephanie internally deliberated inconsolably. Link to prompt
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    Juilliard School rules. I play the xylophone zealously, yet love both harpsichord and glockenspiel wholeheartedly; no kettledrums. Can everyone forgive my uniform dislike of violin quartets? Link to prompt
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    Red

    Andy78 commented on comicfan's story in Fiction

    I really enjoyed that one. A nice retelling of a classic, with a few interesting spins.
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    Prompt #103

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #103

    Thanks for the feedback. I really enjoyed writing that one; though I'm not quite sure where some of my character ideas came from (lol).
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    Prompt #91

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #91

    That's what I like with the prompts, they usually lend themselves to topics outside of my usual genre of writing. I'm really enjoying them, long may they continue.
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    Prompt #71

    Andy78 commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #71

    Thanks Dolores. Glad you enjoyed.
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    Chapter 8

    Andy78 posted new chapter in Kyle and Kodi

    I rang the doorbell. Richard Waughrin opened the door. “Good evening, Mr Waughrin.” “Kyle, you’ve known me for thirteen years and now you’re going out with my son. I think the time has come for you to call me Richard. Come on in.” “Thank you . . . Richard.” I couldn’t help but smile; it just felt so weird me calling Kodi’s dad by his first name. We walked into the living room just as Kodi yelled, “Kyle, can you come up here for a minute.” I walked up the stairs and opened the door on Ko
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