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    Chapter 25

    Solus Magus commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 25

    Well, this is quite getting spicy. 🤣
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    Though I cannot imagine how these misfits could gain an advantage over the Justice League. The game looks really great though!
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    "I knew it." Jaden whimpered. His voice shivered, and his skin went slightly pale. I could taste the fright at the back of my mouth. "My dream was right. All this crazy talk, and I ended up being right!" "I'm sorry I kept it from you. But I think I am ready to tell you everything what's going on." I expressed as I collapsed my dagger back into my shadows. "Please believe me when I say that I've hidden all of these to protect you." But Jaden just glared at me as if I was some sort of murd
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    I wonder how far are they willing to go for their friendship. Hmm. 🤔🤔
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    Thank you! I really wanted to make sure that the momentum pays off in this chapter. Though this chapter also broke my heart when I wrote this down.
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    Yeah. This chapter was quite an emotional one. Regarding the VIP Badges, I forgot to edit that one. Oops! The Valentine fam was supposed to get the “X-VIP Badge” while his friends only had the normal “VIP badge.” Still expensive for a freebie though. Tbh, I’m not a concert person (I get awfully dizzy when surrounded by hundreds of people. Then I get a fever the day after. Lol.) but I think most of VIP Tickets with backstage passes are extremely expensive.
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    No comment on Samael and Eran except they can be quite complex characters. I’ll leave it at that. 😏
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    Ventus is a really loyal character. But loyalties must be anchored on someone. Hmm. 🤔
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    I’m not a big fan of Tim Drake’s costume design here. Robin just isn’t Robin without the cape. And I’m lowkey pissed that Damian isn’t in it. Nevertheless, still excited for the game!
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    Thank you so much for that compliment. Yes, I really wanted to make this story complex. But the challenge here is breaking them down properly so it would be understood. There are a lot of things going on in the plot and there are strong emotions I wanted to draw from the readers along the way. And I also want to question certain beliefs, too!
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    Yup! I’m happy that I got to communicate it out well that Chance and Jaden are really close buds. During the earlier versions of this story, that was not fleshed out too well. It was a wasted potential to tell about a good story of friendship.😁
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    Taking note of that! Maybe I should expand this chapter further. Flesh out the scenes some more. But so far who between the two POVs is more lovable/relatable? 🙃
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    Well, I consider Nikki to be one of the smartest characters for the whole series. So, it should be natural for him to be quite the geek. 😅
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    Though I've always pondered about Jaden if he's too...wild. 🤣
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    Ah, yes. The power to protect everyone is quite enticing for a boy like Chance.
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    Well, that's what I was going for. I was always worried that it might end up too predictable. So, thank you so much for that. 🤣
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    Experimenting with archetypes of personalities is also something I am really fond of. Bringing out unique dynamics between characters is the goal. But thank you so much!
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    Thank you so much! World-building is something I am really fond of. But efficiently incorporating them into the story is a different craft altogether. Add complex characters into the scene and you got yourself a headache. 😂
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    Hmm. May I ask which one? Or is it because of the amount of characters being introduced? I want to take note of those.
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    Hmm. I think it's a good thing that some would love certain characters. And some would not so love them. I actually thought that Ven is too much of a Gary Stu and that kind of the character is the one I want to avoid the most.
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    Thank you so much. That means a lot to me! It's completely understandable. Grammatical errors can really be a huge weight in enjoying the story.
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    "We need to talk about this, damn it." Ven urged before Rei. His boyish face was gone from the frown on his face. "Listen to us! We are already being given a huge advantage. It would be idiotic not to consider this at all!" All of us were there. Morsus sat beside me as I silently stared at the buildup of tension in the room. The blonde teen's hand was shaking behind him, but Rei seemed to be very firm in his decision. "We will not ask help from the Council until we have set our facts str
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    Mr. Rutherford didn't show up. Zion just assured us it was normal. The man was most likely tremendously busy due to the demands of being one of the leading intellectual driving force of a multi-billion international company. Zion mentioned that Mr. Rutherford was the head of the multiple divisions on Research and Development. We couldn't really demand much since we were already treated like VIPs in a private luxury unit. But my patience was tested. A couple of days passed by, and we stil
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    Not familiar with these games though. I really tend to stick with the mainstream games before. Since I didn't have great control over my gaming habits during my teenage years, I deliberately chose not buy any console games or a gaming PC. (It's for my sake as well as the electric bill, LOL). The game that got me really pulled into RPGs was Kingdom Hearts. And I'm still aching to play the latest game. 🤪
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    Was not expecting a bromance right off the but okay. Looks like this something I'm looking forward to. But alas, I have no means to watch this.
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