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    Chapter 7

    As much as I wish Kevin could find peace within himself, I feel that until he faces and conquers those demons within, he will be forever broken......Adam seems to be too rigid and controlled by opinions of others to be a supportive and nurturing partner.............That being said............I truly want them to find some common ground on which they can develop a healthy relationship; both need the other..........the hell to all who would interfere............. Great chapter, as always..............Love these guys, even when they (you) make me crazy.................Mike
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    Chapter 1

    GREAT START.................:)MIKE
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    What I Leave

    Well said. my friend.................Simply beautiful...................Mike
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    Chapter 6

    I feel a dark foreshadowing for any happy outcome for Kevin...he always seems to choose a potential partner who will not commit to the relationship.....whether intentional or not on Kevin's part, I don't know. As I have learned (the hard way) the best way to get over someone is to get under a new one.......Kevin wants things from his lovers that they cannot give him......Until he realizes this, the pattern will continue.......I wish Kevin all the best in figuring himself out.......maybe Becker will grow up as well...............Great character insight although somewhat depressing.......I love this whole arc in the saga............Thanks. Mike
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    Chapter 5

    One word..............EXCELLENT...............<3mike
  6. Although more than twenty years have passed since Mom died, I still feel her presence......My autistic granddaughter insists on sleeping with the Nette bear when she visits; Jeanette was her name, Nette to her siblings, Mom and Nanny to her children and grandchildren......Some might wonder how her great granddaughter (who was born years after her death) would know her childhood nickname.................I smile each time I hear that little voice asking for her Nette...........Beautiful poem Gary....you have touched my soul yet again..............Mike
  7. I've always felt like a broken toy......no repairs for me.......tim, thanks for sharing........it just helps to read this...........Mke
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    A New Day

    I have no words; just deep sorrow for you ....and Jeff; you show such hugeness of spirit when describing the relationship. You are a remarkable man tim. I AM BLESSED to have read this memory....Beautifully written with knife sharp honesty......Thank you..............Mike
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    Chapter 1

    I;m so happy to find you here today......It's a great start.....intrigue already.....YAAY...........:)Mike
  10. Hi John, I think you have touched every human emotion in this chapter.....perfectly..............and......... I LOVE IT :)Mike
  11. Gary, I sincerely hope that this story isn't too close to your own reality...only those who know a misery and hopelessness of no end can truly appreciate the Chester we only just met.....I am hoping that your gift of writing has captured this hell. Great chapter, awesome beginning....Beautifully written.....................:)Mike
  12. You have captured the magic of Ben and Jamie's romance perfectly ......and then set it free for this pre honeymoon celebration through Europe......Thanks for the lift, it was epic...........:)Mike
  13. John, I really enjoyed the fun and uplifting feeling of this chapter......so nice after all the bad news of the world lately.....Also, it was nice reading the German dialog; kinda reminded me of my Oma (Grandmother) Danke fur diese Gescchlichte....es gibt mir Hoffnung.......................:)Mike
  14. I recall while in college, having many of the same hopes, dreams,fantasies, fears (even some naughty experiences) as Adam has experienced......Hopefully he will survive this explosion of self awareness and grow to accept who he truly is without useless baggage......AND, being a romantic at heart, that he and Kevin find their individual paths converging again. This is a well written story; the characters are compelling and flawed....I love it...............:)Mike
  15. What the .......... Shane and Donovan are like a bad car crash.....you don't want to see it.......but DAMN, you can't help it......you MUST take in all the gore OK.....need more gore.........................:)Mike
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    A morning storm

    AAAAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH................Why can't these guys talk to each other......They continually have some issue arise, explode, and then shut down to the other......very immature. If you are trying to get me angry at both , congratulations, you have succeeded..........AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH Mike
  17. Exquisitely perfect 😙😙😙 <3Mike
  18. I find myself looking for your next posting....today, I am going to start my day with a great big smile......Weaving humor with naughtiness and respect for your BOYFRIEND is spot on....I actually found myself among this group rolling my eyes at their antics............Wonderful chapter !!!!!!!!! :)Mike
  19. Well worth the wait, John.........excellent excellent excellent..............<3Mike
  20. Great chapter......Love it 88/12%...................Mike
  21. I don't get why Donovan thinks that Shane is an asshole. The guy is plainly attracted and doesn't feel that Donovan needs to go to extreme measures to impress him. This should tell Donovan that Shane is interested in him as he is......not a perfectly put together version of male beauty. I would think that would be a good thing......to have someone that wants you as you are, warts and all...........Relax Donovan!!!!!!! :)Mike
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    Chapter 3

    “Kevin: you in danger, girl.” This quote could possibly summarize the whole of Kevin's life......such a tormented soul.....:(Mike Very strong and emotional chapter......I had to read it twice before commenting
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    First Dates

    Sweet, sexy, and a smart ass to boot...........Love it.....................:)Mike
  24. Evil cliffy queen............lol Mike...........GREAT CHAPTER......:)
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