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I like how this story is developing and I can relate to Casey, having been in a similar situation myself at the same age. It's difficult joining a family that you have never met before, but in my case, my new siblings were very welcoming. I didn't have a jerk like Curtis to have to deal with, but I'm sure that Casey will be able to put him in his place, somebody needs to! Another great chapter.
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Good for you Casey, it seems that you're doing a better job at parenting Lane than his mom and stepdad. As for Mr Goodwin, this is exactly how lowlife like him manage to get away with crimes against children. Casey seems to be the only one so far to pay any attention to Lane's complaint about the man. With a mental age of six or seven, he needs a little more protection than his mother has been providing. A part of me wants to see Casey visit the evil Mr Goodwin and take him out back for a little 'chat', but that's probably not such a good idea. Best to tell Karen and hope that she manages to step up to the plate. Nice chapter.
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Another good chapter; I'm warming to Casey, but while I can understand why he's so angry, I think that he needs to give his father a chance before jumping to conclusions. He seems to know little of the reasons behind his parent's divorce, although it is strange why his dad made no attempt to stay in contact with his son. Fathers have a lot of rights these days. Why wasn't Casey already spending time with his dad? Weekends, school holidays etc. this is the way it usually works.
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Just started reading this story today, although I've read a couple of your other stories that are not posted on GA and enjoyed them. I'm liking this one too although Casey seems a little headstrong. Clearly, his relationship with his mother has deteriorated to the point where it is no longer an option but running away with barely any money and no place to stay is definitely a recipe for disaster for a sixteen-year-old and rarely ends well. Probably best that he wasn't able to do this although he won't appreciate it at the time. He should at least give his dad a chance, there are always two sides to a story.
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Well done Krista, this has everything that I like in a story. Like many of the comments above, I like the way that Jackson and Luke's characters are evolving. I liked this chapter a lot.
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Thanks, Dave. I love your comment and I would really like to say that this was the intention when writing this chapter, but I wasn't looking that deeply into it and Nathan's flirting was only a sideshow. However, your explanation makes total sense and it would definitely be something that Nathan would do to throw Daniel off the trail. I'm convinced now that this is why he did it. Haha, am I getting a little carried away here? I have to remind myself sometimes that this is fiction, sort of. Thanks again for sharing your insight and helping with the story. I need more of these comments.
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Good chapter Carlos. One of the best things about reading a completed story, of course, is I don't have to wait until the next chapter posts. I'm enjoying it and I feel for CJ, who will always hurt because of his mom's rejection. He's much better off in DC. Oh, and I like the way you added the bit about the exorcist stairs. They are indeed very famous but I had no idea where they were. The other famous steps that come to mind are the ones in Hollywood that were used for the Laurel & Hardy piano film. Even after all these years, they are still a bit of a tourist attraction. Anyway, back to the story.
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Even better, although I won't be catching any games until the summer.
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I've missed watching baseball, the offseason is way too long for me. My team will start the regular season in Baltimore and I'm looking forward to the warm summer evenings and a few visits to the Rogers Centre. Have I given you enough clues for you to figure out my team?
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Just re-reading this story and enjoying it as much second time around. I like Jackson's character, a bit of a rogue, but he develops well.
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Thank you Solarmaxx. Next chapter coming soon; I appreciate your interest and encouragement, which makes it all worthwhile.
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Thank you for your comment and kind words Arran. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. This chapter was held up a little by a personal health issue, which forced me to take some time off from a hectic lifestyle. Basically, I needed a rest. I'm well now, though, back to work and back to my favourite hobby and pastime, The Cockney Canuck. Next chapter soon, I promise.
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Thank you for the comment. You raise some good points. You're right, it's time for Robbie to look ahead and talk to the people around him. It will make it easier in the long run. Even if he doesn't want to come out yet to everyone. He could confide in and trust his family, definitely Daniel and probably even Nicola. Rory too could prove to be a good ally and we will see how this goes in the next chapter.
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Thank you, Wesley. Robbie and Nathan have assumed that Nicola is indoors and in bed because it's past her curfew, but neither of them actually saw or heard her come in.
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Thank you for your comment. I hope he doesn't get his hands on Zanex, or he'll definitely get addicted. but he is a worrier and a bit of a drama queen. We will have to wait and see about Don.
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Daniel is the quiet kid but he's smart and Robbie could do himself a favour by sitting down and having a friendly one to one chat with his brother/cousin before things get out of hand. Daniel may have been dropping these hints for a reason. Will Robbie be smart/brave enough to do this?
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I agree, there was no need for that and Robbie didn't really deserve that treatment. Robbie is always too quick to overlook Nathan's flaws. A sign of insecurity perhaps? Maybe he will be able to address a few issues with his boyfriend later. Thanks for the comment.
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I cheered enthusiastically as the curtain fell at the end of the final number, and again as the cast were led out for an encore by their teachers. It was a full house in the auditorium, with an appreciative and lively audience made up of friends, family, teachers, and students. Don had driven Daniel and I back to the school that evening, where we met Rory to watch the end of term musical. As a member of the school board of governors, Don was expected to be present for these occasions, even t
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OK, Carlos, you've finally got me on board. I've been eyeing this story for quite a while, but with little free time, I've held back on taking the plunge, until now. It looks as if I've got a lot of catching up to do and I like to take my time reading a story, so I don't miss anything. Should be up to date by the end of the year, I guess. Good start, I already like CJ. I'll keep you up to date with my progress via the chapter comments.
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This is a totally absorbing tale that will pull on your emotions and leave you longing for the next chapter. A despicable villain, a very likable hero and a happy ending to a well-written story. Say no more!
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One of the best stories that I have read over the past year. A real rollercoaster ride that you won't want to get off. I went around for a second time. A great ending and a clever title. Well worth reading.
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A great story, nicely written and well worth 122 chapters of anybody's time. I loved the characters and the storyline. I didn't want it to end. This wonderful story is a fitting tribute to very talented writer and a friend of everyone on this site. Skinnydragon's work will continue to inspire me.
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Chapter 62 A Man About a Dog
Dodger commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 62 A Man About a Dog
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Chapter 62 A Man About a Dog
Dodger commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 62 A Man About a Dog
Although Robbie is certain that Daniel isn't the least bit homophobic, he's not sure how he will react to him dating his best friend. He's convinced that this will be a problem when it comes to light, not just with Daniel, but with the rest of the family too. -
Thank you for your review, I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story.
