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Lovely, heart-warming story. Very well done. Every emotion is sharply felt without being overly wordy.
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To repeat, great chapter. Look forward to more of the finals.
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One of the few non-HEA I liked. I hope there's someone out there that deserves Dan,
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It was good the family is getting along; Chipper doesn't need any more pressure. As to the fathers, it would be nice to see them resolve things but I don't think they'll ever get together again. I wonder how many people the contestants are allowed to invite? Could be a problem for Chipper!!
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Another great chapter. It's good Chipper and Bliss worked things out.
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I think Chipper already realizes there's no future with Bliss as he doesn't mention wanting one but it doesn't mean they can't be be friends or friendly rivals. Both of them need to concentrate on their music in the foreseeable future to see where it takes them. I look forward to the finals.
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Great wedding. Their words for each other were beautiful and I liked that the ceremony, though serious, had room for humor. Looking forward to the party.
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Good chapter. We're getting closer and it is edge of the seat time.
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Epilogue and Author's Note
avidreadr commented on kbois's story chapter in Epilogue and Author's Note
A great story. I am impressed you were able to do it with so much going on in your life. Take your well-deserved break and enjoy the rest of the year. In case I don't get another opportunity, happy holidays until 2020! -
I loved the story and look forward to the epilogue. I'm a sucker for a happy ending!
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I admire Chipper's business sense. He has been talking to the right people and getting, and following, some good advice. If he does win, while some contracts might be based on current conditions, I believe those contracts don't last forever and he'll be free to renegotiate.
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Wednesday without Denied? Talk about being denied! A good story and I have enjoyed it. Thank you.
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It's good he has Ethan with him. As for winning, it would be great but what he needed more was the exposure. He will definitely be going further and he will find his career taking off. He will need a good manager and now might be the time to find one.
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I've worked in Manhattan, but I've lived in Queens - my current home - Brooklyn and Long Island. We all say NYC when we mean just Manhattan. Drives me crazy but I do it, too. Some of my favorite chapters of CJ & CO take place in the city.
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The Firework Committee
avidreadr commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in The Firework Committee
A well-written story but if it wasn't for the story listed as complete, I wouldn't know it was the end. I just seems there were some loose ends that I wish were finished, but I guess this is like real life and some of those loose ends never close. -
A great chapter, a great song and a great city My city, actually.
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Aww. Happy Anniversary! Loved the chapter. I always like when a story can bring me to tears.
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Nalbo is discovering he threatened the wrong person and it's all coming back to bite him in the ass. Hopefully, his threats end here and he'll go away.
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Sweet is the perfect word!
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Loved the chapter and especially the showdown with Kyle. Good all round.
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No surprise that Chipper is doing excellently on the show. As to the blackmail, Chipper should distance himself from Zion and Bryce; I'm not sure they can be trusted.
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To look at it another way, it's possible the captain wouldn't let them tell Kohen because he felt guilty about everything. The crew had to wait until the captain could no longer protest before getting Kohen. The captain had his whole crew to worry about help, as well as Kohen. I believe the two do love each other but don't many people go through rough periods? In real life, I would have sent these two for relationship counseling!
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The art for Liam's room is great. The story's pace might be fast but it gets the story moving. And to Liam and Keon, they are young, imho, for a serious relationship. Being close friends is better and will lead to more if it's destined to be.
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Good song. I'm glad Chipper didn't let the stylist shave him as some of us prefer fur.
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