So I've read this over the last couple of days and I have to say, that it is a fine written piece of work.
Not at all can you tell what'll happen next. Only few stories have that. Very well paced, which sure is an art itself.
Thanks for the effort. Can't wait to see where this is going
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awesome =)... haha. Sooo funny and well written (Avengers assemble - lol). Good thing I subscribed to your stories... would have been a bitch to find this on the side
And not about teenagers - so rare to find these days.... I can easily relate to the characters...
Good job... This earns a shout out... Thanks for sharing
i told myself to not start this, since it's not finished. But I reread desert dropping and I couldn't resist. So I read those 4 chapters and I hate that there aren't 35 more of those. But since I am no one to judge, having never written a story myself, I'd like to say thanks for those 4 chapters =)
I'm a dork, cause I actually checked my own profile and was wondering why you were on my favorite authors list. I haven't even read any of your stories, but I must have read a summery of one of them at some point and liked it so I added you, to not forget. But I did... But now I read this and it's really nice and all... so Thanks for writing it. Would love to read it from Jamie's point of view... just saying =)
interesting turn of events with cams mom and stuff. It felt a little rushed at the end, but nothing dramatic. I would have like to read a little more about cam and his dad and them rebuilding their relationship, but we need to leave some room for a sequel
Thanks a lot. It was a bliss =)