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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    I love manga! too...lol. Thanks Peanut. I'll keep typing as fast as I can. Thank you for reading too.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Jim, welcome to the new story. Thank you for reading through, hopefully Dimitri and Talin remain as enticing and entertaining as ever... Thank you as always.
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    Chapter 4

    4 Dimitri couldn’t help smiling as he drove along Lakeshore Blvd later that evening, heading to a secluded restaurant he loved. Talin sat in the passenger seat, nervous and excited. Talin looked handsome this evening. Silky black hair fell around his face, glossy from a good brushing. Dimitri kept thinking of sinking his fingers into it just to feel how soft it was. Talin had chosen a white v-neck t-shirt, black jeans and a fitted black leather jacket that looked new. His smile widened at
  4. Lisa!! Happy Birthday!!! I don't think the exclamation points are enough to let you know how much I wish you a happy day! Thank you for Reaching out to me this year. You've been amazing!! I hope you have a really wonderful Birthday, and a smashing New Birthday year. Happy Birthday, Dear Lisa, Happy Birthday to you!!!!!! :wizard:
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you Nlaudenslager, for high praise, hehe...pressure...lol I'll work hard to keep the story interesting, intriguing...all of that. Thank you for reading.
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    Chapter 3

    LadyDe, your thoughts,...can I pay a penny for them.... Lol. I hope my idea meets up to your expectations. I'm nervous now. Lol. I'll get back to writing now...
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you Robert! I'm glad Dimitri is intriguing. There's so much to tell about him, that it can only come out as it is right now. So, thank you for reading, and for looking forward to more. Sui.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Hehe...Dimitri is my mystery too...lol. Don't worry, I won't make you wait too long on his past. I had fun writing Dimitri and Talin's scenes. It's always so interesting to see how their interactions turn out. I sort of let them go where the muse takes me...you know. Thanks for reading, I'll update soon.
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    Chapter 2

    Cannd! I'm glad to see your comments on here. So many questions, of which I hope to answer for you in the next few chapters. Dimitri's life is complicated. That's all I'll say for now. Developing him has been a bit of a challenge, as well as a fun experience. Hopefully his story will make everyone happy. Hehe..as for location, that was worked in a lot in chapter 3, hope it's more clear. Let me know. Thank you for always reading, Cannd.
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    Chapter 2

    Sacred, If I remember well, Ryo was your most favorite...lol. You've set a high bar for Dimitri, though he has his own uniqueness. I hope he comes into his own for you. Thank you for reading Sacred. I'll keep writing...get that plot as exciting as possible.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thank you Secretsides for your lovely comment. I'll keep working hard to keep it unique.
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thanks Gene! Kat and Lori are awesome, I'll try to give them more time...
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Questions....lol..answers coming soon. I'm glad for them too. Glad to see them as it means I've achieved my goal.. Thank you Lady De for reading.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thank you Six for reading my story. I hope you I can keep your interest as well. Sui.
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    Chapter 3

    3 Talin leaned on the bar counter, his gaze roaming the crowd of people in his club. It was only six o'clock, but customers were filing in. “Looking for Dimitri?” Lori asked coming up to the counter with a tray. She called out an order to the bartender, and then returned her attention to him. “It's too early for him, you know.” “I wasn’t looking for him.” Talin straightened and made a show of arranging the papers he’d printed out in his office. “I need to put these up.” Lori took one an
  16. Happy Birthday to You!! I hope you have an Awesome Day!!
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 9

    Chapter Nine “Where the hell are you? Answer your darned phone, Lev.” Haje huffed under his breath and the message ended. Levin deleted the voice message. He sat waiting for Jaxton Donovan in an expensive conference room at the Strassen Foundation building. Tired of sitting, he pushed his chair back and moved to stare out the glass windows. Colston City was bright this morning. Though the air was still chilly, the sun had chosen to lighten up the day. Yet, the sun’s warmth wasn’
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Sacred, for reading. Here's to Dimitri and Talin...and more fun surprises, lol.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you m.p.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for reading LadyDe. Dimitri and Talin are fun, right? lol, I'll see what kind of trouble they can get into. Stay tuned.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    2 Dimitri tightened the last screw on the water pump he was fixing. Grabbing a cloth from the edge of the table, he wiped oil from the surface of the pump and nodded in satisfaction. Placing the screwdriver in his toolbox, he used the cloth to wipe his hands and was thinking of heading for a shower when his workshop door flew open. Talin Sato stormed in looking like an avenging angel. Brown eyes bright with anger, that handsome face flushed, Talin looked on the edge. Dimitri bit back the s
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, Gene. Look forward to more.
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    Chapter 1

    Hehehe Thank you for reading, Aditus.
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    Chapter 1

    1 Talin Sato carried three garbage bags out of his club. It was drizzling, soft drops on skin. He jogged to the dumpster. Pushing the lid open, Talin swung the garbage bags on top of a growing pile. He hoped the garbage collectors would come early tomorrow. Otherwise, the garbage was going to take over his parking lot. Kicking the bin as he closed it, he pushed dark hair out of his eyes and reached into his pocket for a stick of nicotine gum. Gods, what he wouldn’t do for a cigarette. H
  25. Talin focuses on work, barely giving anything else attention. One encounter in his club's parking lot drags him out of his dull life. Dimitri has watched Talin for so long, when Talin storms into his workshop, Dimitri decides he won't stay in the sidelines any longer. He wants Talin for life.
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