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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Sacred, for reading. Here's to Dimitri and Talin...and more fun surprises, lol.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you m.p.
  3. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you for reading LadyDe. Dimitri and Talin are fun, right? lol, I'll see what kind of trouble they can get into. Stay tuned.
  4. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    2 Dimitri tightened the last screw on the water pump he was fixing. Grabbing a cloth from the edge of the table, he wiped oil from the surface of the pump and nodded in satisfaction. Placing the screwdriver in his toolbox, he used the cloth to wipe his hands and was thinking of heading for a shower when his workshop door flew open. Talin Sato stormed in looking like an avenging angel. Brown eyes bright with anger, that handsome face flushed, Talin looked on the edge. Dimitri bit back the s
  5. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, Gene. Look forward to more.
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Hehehe Thank you for reading, Aditus.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    1 Talin Sato carried three garbage bags out of his club. It was drizzling, soft drops on skin. He jogged to the dumpster. Pushing the lid open, Talin swung the garbage bags on top of a growing pile. He hoped the garbage collectors would come early tomorrow. Otherwise, the garbage was going to take over his parking lot. Kicking the bin as he closed it, he pushed dark hair out of his eyes and reached into his pocket for a stick of nicotine gum. Gods, what he wouldn’t do for a cigarette. H
  8. Talin focuses on work, barely giving anything else attention. One encounter in his club's parking lot drags him out of his dull life. Dimitri has watched Talin for so long, when Talin storms into his workshop, Dimitri decides he won't stay in the sidelines any longer. He wants Talin for life.
  9. I'm just happy everyone knows the truth about Daryl, because Zune needed that. For everyone to know the truth,especially Kev. I was also relieved to see Jake saved. He didn't deserve to be lost to those bastards. Great chapter Sacred, keep writing.
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Yes, Yuriko suffered a lot. I wanted to show that even though Toshiro's dad was looking for him Toshi, that his mom was having a hard time too. Glad that came out. You know things always end up this way, one grudge, turns into decades and horrible things. Humans are scary, you know. Lol. Thanks for reading, Sacred.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Thanks Suvitar, it was fun writing Yuriko. She's really awesome.
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Lol, I'm writing, I'm writing. Jae is on a bender, guess he never had to deal with himself. Just dealing with work and music is not always enough right...? Anyway, thanks for reading, Sacred.
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    I'm not saying who the stalker is....lol I'm glad you loved Jae goofing around in the supermarket. Hehehe, I have fun writing those scenes too. Thank you for reading Sacred.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 11

    Thank you Sacred, I'm most touched. You know it right? I'll keep working hard. To more stories...
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 11

    Thank you so much for reading craftingmom. I'm happy you enjoyed this story.
  16. lilansui

    Prologue

    Our Sacred is back, hello!! Thank you for reading this story of mine. Yes, Jae and Dan stuck with me too. I'm glad you're happy.
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    What a wonderful story. I read this after I'd read Andrew and Jaime. I was glad this one was completed, because it was fun to get glimpses of Andrew and Jaime. I love the world you've created here, it's believable, and very entertaining. Your characters are so real. It's very easy to get inundated in them from the very first paragraph to the last. I loved it all. I'm with Cannd, I can't wait to read Casey and Jackson's story. It sounds like quite a ride for those two. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
  18. Interesting start. I love vampire stories. Seems I'm not the only one...I feel like I'm repeating what everyone is saying, but it's exciting. Can't wait to find out why Andrew gets so attacked.
  19. 6 “We can’t afford the risk,” Heloth declared when Midori didn’t answer his question. “We need proof you can’t offer. I have to protect my people. With the prince’s death, I have to take steps to protect our lands.” Midori held Yoshi’s gaze, willing him to step forward. When he didn’t, he sighed. “What does the Prince’s death have to do with me?” “Prince Meng takes over, and you’re automatically on his side. There is no telling the kind of damage you’ll do.” Heloth scoffed and motioned
  20. lilansui

    Intermezzo

    Awwww.....I like Michael, I feel he has been wronged here. He and Jonah are so good together. Moan. I'm torn between liking Jonah and smacking him over the head. Why is he so closed off, everyone who likes him is in trouble. Ranting aside, I love this story, more please. :-)
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 11

    Thank you Lisa for reading my story.
  22. Krista, I feel you on work schedules. I think 24 hours aren't enough. There are so many things to get done, I have to jot down notes in between work not to lose storylines. You must be very busy, between kids and seeing patients. How do you manage to keep up? Do you make writing schedules? I know you said you write in the early morning, so do you have a schedule to keep up with particular stories,or do you wing it?
  23. That would be crazy! Two sets would mean four days of clean up...lol. You know, it's that feeling you get, you just have to check every book. Haha. Glad to know I'm not alone, Yay for Wings!
  24. So,Today, I've completely undone the entire house looking for a short scene I wrote for one of my stories. It was insane, I was writing this story and I remembered I'd jotted down a scene from this story in a notebook. I just couldn't remember which one. Since I just have to know what it is I'd written on the notebook, I start looking for it. One second I'm on my computer typing away, the next second, I'm kneeling next to a bookshelf undoing notebooks and going through them, searching. I've checked every notebook I've owned, since....forever. Even some I'm sure I haven't touched in years, but for some reason, I just kept thinking I might have written this scene on them. I finally find the notebook on a pile on my desk, but now the entire house is a mess. All the bookshelves are undone. My friend who stays with me walks in and she just wants to kill me. If I'd just checked my desk first, and done it more slowly, all these would be avoided. The notebooks on the floor, and on the couches look like they're part of the decor but, since I have my scene now, I'm good. I have clean up duty for the next two days. Lol . My question is, does this happen to anyone else, or just me.. it's insanity I tell you. Do share your writing hang-ups and adventures with me.
  25. Jo Ann, I send you loads of hugs and wish you strength to endure it all. Lots of strength. You're okay.
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