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Chapter Nine “You’re dead,” Sakura said. “So are you.” Sakura’s voice sounded far away. Unreal, yet it was so final. His body felt numb, stuck in one place. “I wish you’d stop pointing guns at each other,” Pakino said, drawing Toshiro’s attention to the workstation. “I can’t figure out these accounts with this ruckus.” Toshiro’s gaze swept to the two men aiming guns at him. Taki seemed to have stepped out. He had minutes if that was the case, minutes to end this for good. The accounts
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I'll answer your questions next time...lol. Thanks, Lisa!!
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Thanks Gene!! Look forward to more.
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Thanks Bob, again, I'll keep working hard.
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Thanks Lisa! I'm glad you're loving the story. Thanks so much for the thoughts.
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Thank you for always commenting Gene. Thanks,
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Thanks so much Bob. I'm glad you're reading. It makes my day. Thank you.
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Thanks so much Bob. I'm glad you're reading. It makes my day. Thank you.
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Chapter 8 “Jason, answer my question,” Michael Baron said. “I don’t understand why you've spent the past four hours asking me questions. You’re the one at fault here. Why didn't you protect him? Toshiro came to you for protection!” Jason glared at the older man, tired of this senseless roundabout discussion. Twenty-five hours ago, he’d happily let Toshiro go to the grocery store, gods, maybe this was his fault. If he’d just— He scowled, just what? He couldn't even fight against the men
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Chapter Seven Toshi grabbed the wrist holding the knife against his neck. He ignored the painful cut on his neck, turned and pressed his gun into his assailant’s thigh. He took two shots, the man dropped to his knees and Toshiro kicked him on the head. The bastard fell back to the ground with a painful groan. Toshiro kicked the workroom door open and rushed in. “Jason!” The room was empty. “Jason,” he whispered. He turned back to the man groaning on the ground. Falling on his knees, To
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I feel the same way about the worms and fishing. I can't handle the wiggly things in the can thing..lol. Thanks again Blankpage.
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I feel the same way about the worms and fishing. I can't handle the wiggly things in the can thing..lol. Thanks again Blankpage.
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Thank you for reading, Blankpage. I'm glad you liked my story.
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Lisa, 'Omg, what a cliffie!!!!!' lol, this kind of ending came by surprise for me too. It's a source of stress, what can I do but keep writing, lol. I can't wait to see if your questions get answered as you expect. Thank you for reading and commenting. As always...
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Thank you Gene. I'm glad you love the story. Keep reading...
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Thank you for reading m.p. The cliff hanger just happened, lol, look forward to more. Thank you.
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Bob, HI!! Sorry, I've been a bad girl, yes? lol. Putting you in such a position, all I can say is thank you for putting up with me. I'm going to take responsibility and post soon. I'll really do all I can. Thank you again.
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Hi Cannd, I'm sorry it has taken me this long to answer your review. First, thank you so much for giving me a glimpse into your reaction when you read this story. It gives me so much to work with, thank you for that. Yes, the story will be finished. I had a few personal problems crop up in between this chapter and the one I just posted, but all's well and I can finally concentrate on Toshi. He has so many problems, with no easy solutions...I can only say thank you for the questions and hope they get answered. And you're right about the different setting, it's a new challenge for me, I hope it works out. It's great also because i don't have to remember any culture issues here, it's quite as I want it. Lol Thanks for reading.
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Lady De, I love your imagination, I read this and kept thinking hmm, maybe I should go back and do some editing, lol...thank you for reading and for the wishes. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
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Chapter Six “No.” Jason shook his head and turned away from Toshiro. “There has to be another way, Toshiro.” “Another way for what?” Toshiro asked behind him. “You can't stand there and tell me you've accepted you might die. What's wrong with you?” “What's wrong with me?” Toshiro asked. “You heard me,” Jason said turning to glare at him. “Don't you want to live, Toshi?" “I'm just stating the truth,” Toshiro said. “Well, I don't accept that truth, Toshi.” Toshiro gave a soft sigh and
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First, I want to thank you for the dedication. Thanks, for the positive thoughts, Sacred. Now this chapter, I feel Zune is in such a fragile state, holding himself so tight in case he explodes. I just love how Edward is patient with Zune. Zune is going to need loads of time to heal his heart, his thoughts and memories this was a very well written chapter and I enjoyed it very much.Great Job!!
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Hmm...have you gone fishing Sacred? A friend took me a few weeks ago before I wrote this chapter. I'm a bit squeamish and didn't think the whole hook the worm thing was great, really, no way. So, out of that experience, the dialogue in this chapter was born. I had fun writing it. It's strange, now that I reread it again, Toshiro is this closed off person who wants to know more about Jason, but can't say much about himself just yet. Then there is Jason, this open fellow just trying to get to know Toshiro better. I think they'll need a serious supply of patience and trust, lol. Thank you for always reading my stories, Sacred. It means a lot to me.
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Speaking of bollywood, I've watched a few of those movies lately, lots of time at home, with nothing to do. You're surprisingly right, Kaito is so insanely like those villains. In a sense it comes from living that kind of life, crime becomes so much a part of the family, that it's normal, isn't it? Morality with a serious gray area...that's our Kaito. It makes him scary to me. That no matter how much you think he cares for you, he can drop you if it benefits him in some way. Jashiro, perhaps Toshiro will start learning there can be a different life from the one he's known all his life. Maybe with Jason he can start a fresh... right?
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I felt Toshiro was kind of detached when he was leaving the town. Jason is this anomaly to him, a guy who cares, no ulterior motives, and it just makes Toshiro feel like he's a bad guy or something. So, while Jason was disappointed by Toshiro leaving, Toshiro felt relief? That he'll preserve Jason's pristine nature...okay, I've had way too much time to think about this...lol. Just wanted to share a little insight as to why I wrote it that way. Fun right..
