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Bob, HI!! Sorry, I've been a bad girl, yes? lol. Putting you in such a position, all I can say is thank you for putting up with me. I'm going to take responsibility and post soon. I'll really do all I can. Thank you again.
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Hi Cannd, I'm sorry it has taken me this long to answer your review. First, thank you so much for giving me a glimpse into your reaction when you read this story. It gives me so much to work with, thank you for that. Yes, the story will be finished. I had a few personal problems crop up in between this chapter and the one I just posted, but all's well and I can finally concentrate on Toshi. He has so many problems, with no easy solutions...I can only say thank you for the questions and hope they get answered. And you're right about the different setting, it's a new challenge for me, I hope it works out. It's great also because i don't have to remember any culture issues here, it's quite as I want it. Lol Thanks for reading.
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Lady De, I love your imagination, I read this and kept thinking hmm, maybe I should go back and do some editing, lol...thank you for reading and for the wishes. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
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Chapter Six “No.” Jason shook his head and turned away from Toshiro. “There has to be another way, Toshiro.” “Another way for what?” Toshiro asked behind him. “You can't stand there and tell me you've accepted you might die. What's wrong with you?” “What's wrong with me?” Toshiro asked. “You heard me,” Jason said turning to glare at him. “Don't you want to live, Toshi?" “I'm just stating the truth,” Toshiro said. “Well, I don't accept that truth, Toshi.” Toshiro gave a soft sigh and
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First, I want to thank you for the dedication. Thanks, for the positive thoughts, Sacred. Now this chapter, I feel Zune is in such a fragile state, holding himself so tight in case he explodes. I just love how Edward is patient with Zune. Zune is going to need loads of time to heal his heart, his thoughts and memories this was a very well written chapter and I enjoyed it very much.Great Job!!
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Hmm...have you gone fishing Sacred? A friend took me a few weeks ago before I wrote this chapter. I'm a bit squeamish and didn't think the whole hook the worm thing was great, really, no way. So, out of that experience, the dialogue in this chapter was born. I had fun writing it. It's strange, now that I reread it again, Toshiro is this closed off person who wants to know more about Jason, but can't say much about himself just yet. Then there is Jason, this open fellow just trying to get to know Toshiro better. I think they'll need a serious supply of patience and trust, lol. Thank you for always reading my stories, Sacred. It means a lot to me.
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Speaking of bollywood, I've watched a few of those movies lately, lots of time at home, with nothing to do. You're surprisingly right, Kaito is so insanely like those villains. In a sense it comes from living that kind of life, crime becomes so much a part of the family, that it's normal, isn't it? Morality with a serious gray area...that's our Kaito. It makes him scary to me. That no matter how much you think he cares for you, he can drop you if it benefits him in some way. Jashiro, perhaps Toshiro will start learning there can be a different life from the one he's known all his life. Maybe with Jason he can start a fresh... right?
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I felt Toshiro was kind of detached when he was leaving the town. Jason is this anomaly to him, a guy who cares, no ulterior motives, and it just makes Toshiro feel like he's a bad guy or something. So, while Jason was disappointed by Toshiro leaving, Toshiro felt relief? That he'll preserve Jason's pristine nature...okay, I've had way too much time to think about this...lol. Just wanted to share a little insight as to why I wrote it that way. Fun right..
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Intrigued? Check...lol, glad you're hooked.
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Toshi's decision coming up on the next chapter. It's taken a while to get out...considering my situation. These last three days I've been working on this story and the other one happily, so an update coming soon. Thank you for missing me Sacred...I'm sorry I worried you, I'm doing better now okay.
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Sometimes a person needs to trust just one person in life, right, to make a heavy situation easier. Jason knowing will help Toshi make a decision on where he wants to end up I think. Lisa, thanks for always reading.
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This has taken so long to answer, so sorry, an update coming soon. I promise. Thank you for reading, Gene.
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Dan the angel...lol, hmmm the way he likes Jae, maybe he can be an angel with a wild side...lol. Funny, I reply to this after the story is finished, so I hope you like the ending... thanks as always for the re view.
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Wouldn't that be fun? Hmm...that's a thought, lol. Thank you for reading Gene.
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Thanks m.p. glad you loved it!!
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The One I Trust Most After rehearsal at the Su-Am Center, the Rebellion dressing room hummed with tension. Jae sat sprawled on the couch they had provided, Junghee was leaning against the wall toying with his guitar pick, and Andre was pacing the length of the room. Their make-up artist had come and gone; they were dressed for their performance. "What if no one comes?" Andre asked, stopping in the middle of the room. "I'm pretty sure no one bought the tickets. Not to mention Jaesun is havin
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Thank you for taking the time to read, Bob.
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Chapter Five “Open,” Toshiro said, holding out a small carrot cube. Jason grinned and obeyed. He took the carrot piece into his mouth crunching on the fresh vegetable morsel. They sat at the kitchen table. Toshiro was peeling carrots and dicing them while he sat writing delivery notes for the jewelry he'd drop at the shop later. Jason had woken up this morning to find Toshiro in the living room reading intently on his laptop, a small frown dancing on Toshiro's forehead. Jason had wanted t
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Thank you LadyDe! The bad guys have that bad habit for sure. We'll see what they'll do next...lol. I'm happy the chapter was good for you.
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Thanks Lisa, lots happening for Toshiro at the same time. So, I reread that part and I think I mentioned in quickly. Here's the line, tell me if you need that cleared a bit more.. Running cold water in the sink, he gritted his teeth as he inspected his arm. The bullet had gone through, thankfully no major artery was hit. So, Agent Baron doesn't sew the bullet in...lol Wouldn't that be a mess..lol..okay, not a laughing matter, very serious. Thanks for mentioning it.
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Thanks so much for reading
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Thank you too Writer JT!
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Thank you Bob for reading, and letting me know that you loved it, it makes my day.
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Chapter Four Time passed quickly the next week. Toshiro adjusted to a simple routine: waking up early in the morning to sit on the deck watching the sunrise over the lake. He made breakfast for Jason, who always woke up at around seven in the morning. They ate breakfast together. Jason helped with the dishes, and then disappeared into the workroom behind the house. Leaving Toshiro to fend for himself until lunchtime. Toshiro didn't mind the time alone. He'd taken on the house chores. The
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