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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 21

    Thank you for your patience and your review. They will definitely get back together, so look forward to it.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 21

    Thanks Ninecila look forward to more. Thank you for the review
  3. lilansui

    Chapter 21

    An impasse is right, Josh and Alexi will be talking soon, hopefully they find a semi-solution... For now, thank you for your patience, and I'll work harder.
  4. lilansui

    Chapter 21

    Deer caught in the headlights moment for me...lol I'm halfway through ch. 22, will send it to my editor so he can tear it apart in the next two days. I hope that's better than last time. I have things under control now.
  5. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Leshwar, a big virtual hug to you, Thank you so much, glad you liked this story. In some ways I sometimes wish to come back to the place I was when I wrote this, the emotions and the characters were so fun for me. I'm happy they left an impression for you. I'm so happy to have gained a reader, and I hope to keep entertaining you forever. lol I should send K.C a gift lol. Thanks again.
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 6

    Hi Leshwar, I loved reading your review, because while the story was about Ziyu and San, the main character was the teahouse, and reading your thoughts made my day because I was glad that came out to the reader. The teahouse embracing San and taking him in, Thank you for your review, and I'm very happy that you loved The Precious Teahouse. Very lovely review.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    You nailed it Sacred, this story came so fast for me, no underlying villains coming to bite the main character when he least expects it, just life and decisions. I'm happy you loved the ending it was my pleasure to share and thank you so much for your enthusiastic reviews. I loved them. Cheers.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    I once had to do that, make a decision to leave or stay...it's very hard to go. Especially when you've been working toward something and suddenly you have to leave it behind. I think I understood Liron's decision to a point too, he chose to stay, I left right away...hmmm free spirit anyone.lol. Happy Ending coming up.
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    I'm lovin' it...lol Alright, I'll be good from now on, I have my crazy life under control now so, Haje ch. 4 is in the works, promises. Thanks Sacred. you're lost too, pm me sometime tell me how your summer is going...lol
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Vincent and Haje are like that jigsaw puzzle that drives you nuts when you pour it on the table and there are a billion pieces. I'm glad you like it, thank you Lisa.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Milo was fun to write, it was so hard to keep to Liron's POV, kept having moments of what would Milo say right now...hmmm..lol
  12. Chapter 21 He dreamed of his beach house in Osaka. The beach in the early morning right before the sun broke over the horizon. Waves of water washed on to the sand, his bare feet sinking into the cool wet sand, not a soul in sight. There was peace in the early morning. Alexi. He forced his gaze away from the colorful horizon and turned to find Joshua running toward him. He knew it was Joshua, the familiar dark curly hair, tall physique in white shirt and slacks and the way Joshua called h
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Missed you too, Sacred Liron, I got that name from a friend of a friend, one of those intros you get and you go like, oooh wow, I love your name, I'm going to use it somewhere...lol. Thanks for loving it too.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much, I will.
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Hi Daithi, I'm sorry for the delay before, a few scheduling problems caught up with me that's why I've been so out of the loop. I think I should start an update blog on GA lol...As for Haje and Vincent, their relationship is on the rocks before it ever gets off the ground... so many reasons not to trust each other, but it will come together soon. Thank you for your review as always.
  16. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Leshwar, Thanks so much, I'm so happy you loved this story of mine. Yeah, I think there was so much I could have added in and so much I could have left out, but it worked out in the end. I'm so grateful for the positive response to Blu Dream and your remarks, they give me a different perspective and most of all, I'm happy to see you voice the end result I was going for. So thank you again for the review and I hope to post another short soon.
  17. Happy Birthday Tucker!!! :wizard: :wizard: I'm late to the party, but I'm with Kitt, hope you're still celebrating.
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Vincent sat in the armchair across the leather couch watching Haje. Peaceful in sleep, dark hair spread on the soft pillow he’d found in Shin’s bedroom, Haje seemed too young to have suffered so much. It couldn’t be easy losing a twin brother. He didn’t have siblings but he had lost friends along the way. Good friends, Vincent thought, memories of his military days flooding him. His teammates were men he’d considered brothers. He’d lost most of those brothers during missions, each death le
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    thank you Lisa, you made my day, I'll definitely see if there's more Liron and Milo in my head somewhere, for your reviews as always Thanks.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you Cannd, I'll definitely work on that last gesture for Milo and Liron and update this chapter. Thank you so much for your insight, and your reviews, I love reading them. Thank you again.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you vinnyvin, for reading and reviewing.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thanks Daithi, I'm glad you loved this one too.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much Quietman.
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    I love your wild spirit, lol, Liron should have taken it and run right...I'm with you, but Liron is a stubborn git. Lol.
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Liron is a bit stubborn, in a way he's had to prove his own merit for so long, (paying for his school, and working to get through and find a good job) that I think when he's offered such a chance, it's difficult for him to think he could up and leave. You're right about his sister not wanting him to give up the chance, but I think Liron's decision was because he was afraid to trust himself, a little of Milo and just the thought of leaving home. You always get me thinking Cannd, now that I read this reaction, I see a whole lot of other places this story could have gone. I get the itch to twitch it a little, hahaha... thanks so much and I'm happy for your reaction and thoughts and enthusiasm for Milo and Liron.
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