Thanks...this is a great story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing the relationship develop between Gabriel and Ryle.How terrible to be so mistreated.
I spoke too soon about Marjorie coming back to town. I'm sad for the occasion. I love the way you had J meet the others. This could be an interesting side story.
Loving this.
Got behind a chapter!!! Thank god, Marjorie is gone...for a while!!! I'm pretty sure Tony's words will get thru to her and she will be back!
Tony and Marcus are so good together. It is very nice to see the love portrayed between them and the love they have for their family, even Marjorie.
Something smells rotten here...that whole line about "Devyn being family" isn't ringing true. If he is family, why is Sam allowed to smack him around? And why is Devyn so afraid of and hostile toward Brad? There is way more going on here than Jason is seeing.
I also have to wonder if Devyn is truly mute or just doesn't wish to speak. Is his vocal paralysis truly infection related or is it traumatically induced?
Methinks answers will come...probably not as quickly as I would like, but they will come. Looking forward to more!!!
Nice to see Damien letting go of some of that tension. I think Kayden will be good for him if they can get past the skittishness. I hope that Damien will want to talk to Kayden and find out about his past and then he might understand why Kayden is so scared.
Oh my. I certainly am hoping that Roman gets his sooner rather tahn later. He is nothing but a bully and an ass. Harrison, while a bit kinder, isn't much better. Making a joke of another being, even a slave, is cruel.
I only hope that Damien will see something in this little Neko!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. It made me smile. I love it when just a smile or a random act of kindness makes such a huge difference. Thank you for your RAOK!!!
I love this story!!! Jay's g-mother is a freakin hoot!!! I wish I'd had one like her growing up. Jay seems to be getting more comfortable in his skinand Scott is certainly helping.
Can't wait to read more!!!
Demon? I'm not sure...you certainly have raised my curiosity level. I love the angst and the denial that Erin is going through right now. Becoming aware of who we really are and what we want is a huge step.
Oh, so cute!!! I love Derrick's mom...she and Tanner are going to be so cute together. Love the way Tanner took care of dinner with Derrick and his mom!!! I'm waiting for the bomb when Tanner decides to tell his mom.
Let's have something evil and sinister happen to Johnson and his gang very soon. They are long overdue for the karma train to hit them.
Mitch needs to pull Chris aside and lay one on him like Chris did to Derrick.
I love that Tony isn't taking any shit off Marjorie. I also love the way he is well thought out and speaks assuredly but without raising his voice or yelling.
I am so in love with this story. Ben and Asher are perfect. It pains me to think about what is going to happen at the end of the summer and their lives are torn apart.
I also wonder how the kids in town are going to feel about the pairing. Are the girls going to be spiteful about not getting the hot boys?
This is a fantastic story, well written and so funny in spots. I love that Ben's parents are so accepting and that Asher and Tommy have this wonderful banter that keeps going on.
Thank you!!!