What an emotional chapter. I have to say, I never expected this. Saint Barbara actually dealing and not issuing orders...WOW!!!
I had tears running down my face thru the entire chapter!!!
Well, we are going to have a whole little family of boys here also. This is great!!! I love your stories and can't wait for more chapters!!! What a great talent you have!!!
Oh wow...this is going to get a lot more exciting quickly, I have a feeling!!! I love how your stories involve animals, particularly horses. Thanks for creating another world I can get lost in!!!
This is going to get interesting. Daryl is gonna be in so much shit when the truth finally comes out. And what about the mysterious father of Edward...why do I think he plays a huge part in all of this? There is too much continuing mention of him not liking to be photographed.
I really hate what is happening here, but I can't stop reading!!! Kev is gonna be so hurt. I have a lot of sympathy for him because the same type situation happened to me with my ex.
I hate that all these reviews seem to be taking Zune's side in all this. I think he's an asshole for not telling Kev the truth.
I'm not happy with the way this chapter turned out. I am not happy that Kev didn't come running after Zune, but I also understand that what his ex was doing in the bathroom wasn't due to anything on Kev's part. So many relationships are ruined by someone else. Edward and Zune kissing? I knew this wasn't going to end well for Kev!!!
I am really enjoying this story so far, but I often wonder why a monkey wrench must be thrown into every good and loving situation. Why do I see this not ending well for Kev? I hope that Zune will be honest with Kev and tell him everything before it all goes awry.