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  1. Gene63

    Chapter 10

    Oh hell...this isn't good!!!
  2. YES!!! I hate that Michael had to get hurt for this to happen, but I'm glad he and Kendall are finally going to talk!!! I know they both have some issues to deal with, but it seems very good to me that this could turn out to be the HEA for both of them!!!
  3. Gene63

    Chapter 9

    I disagree with you and sammiam...Kayden is just learning about friendship and trust and has had no other basis of what is appropriate or not appropriate. Damien should have realized that Kayden wouldn't do anything to betray him. Almost everyone who has ever dealt with Kayden has betrayed him in one sense or another. I don't think Kayden has a bone of betrayal in his little body. How would Kayden know that his "relationship" with Finn was causing problems? Apparently no one else saw anything that was amiss. Kayden doesn't, at least to me, have a good idea of boundaries at this point. Damien does and instead of being upset and angry, he should have been teaching Kayden. This is 99% Damien's fault and 1% Kayden's fault, in my humble opinion.
  4. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you!!!
  5. Gene63

    Chapter 1 - Aki

    Ok...I'm hooked!!! Can't wait to see where this one goes!!!
  6. Gene63

    Chapter 11

    Poor Jack...he didn't deserve to pay that price. I'm glad Meko is gone, though. Now to see where the story takes us!!!
  7. Those have got to be the greatest parents in the world. Michael's mom is so understanding, caring, and beautifully works her magic to get her son to see the truth. His dad is a rock. I just hope it isn't too late for him and Kendall!!!
  8. Gene63

    Chapter 25

    Well, it sounds like the proverbial ca-ca is about to hit the fan! Liam's and Doug's antics were bound to get them in trouble eventually, but maybe this is a good thing in Liam's pursuit of Neil.
  9. Loving this story. It is totally beyond me how a mother can be so cold and unfeeling that she allows her child to be thrown out. I do agree that CJ got the better end of this deal. I hope that when he does face his demons, he confides in his dads.
  10. Gene63

    Break-in

    Love this chapter. I'm just sad that the governor's death wasn't more sadistic and drawn out. He didn't suffer enough, in my opinion.
  11. I'm really enjoying this story. I look forward to getting to know James, his mom, Casey and the rest. Casey definitely needs a friend. This town seems like a nice place with good people, at least the ones we've met so far.
  12. Gene63

    Tomorrow

    Oh, the governor needs to die very slowly and very very cruelly...then he needs to burn forever in the deepest, darkest, foulest pit of hell!!! There are so many unanswered questions and I can't wait for those answers to be revealed!!!
  13. Gene63

    Chapter 24

    I'm not sure I agree with another reviewer's assessment that Doug is trying to keep Liam in check. It almost seems to me that there is more there than Doug is admitting to or even knows is there. I really have to wonder if there is some denial going on... I do agree that the Liam/Neil line is fraught with lots of problems and the potential for a huge disaster, but we'll see how well Liam can convince Neil before that happens. Life is certainly complicated. I hope Deon's kicking problems aren't going to lead to him having problems with his dad...that little point about being sent on a wild goose chase by his dad made me worry a little bit. Just when things were really starting to get better...I guess time will tell.
  14. Holy crap, that was intense!!! I'm sitting here crying like a baby. The emotional response you pulled from me is so strong. This is a great start to what is going to be an epic story. Unrequited love is one of the hardest things to deal with and get over. I know...I've been in love with someone who doesn't return it for almost 30 years. You have managed in this first chapter to pull out so much emotion and anguish. I know Kendall's pain. I've howled and been sick because I was (and still am) in love with someone who couldn't love me back. Like Timothy, my consolation is that this story isn't complete and there is much left to tell. I always hold out hope for the HEA, but we'll have to wait and see what happens. Can't wait for the next chapter.
  15. I can't wait for the next installment. Miz Vivian is a hoot!!! We all should have a neighbor like her!!!
  16. Gene63

    Chapter 4

    OMG, I remember these feelings well...it happened in college for me. I fell fast and I fell hard. Almost 30 years later, I'm still in love with him. What a shame it was one sided...he liked me a lot, but that was all. I can't wait to see what happens with Deme!!!
  17. Gene63

    Chapter 21

    I love how you are setting up a confrontation between Liam and Neil and the boyfriend idea. This is going to get interesting. I also like how Neil is seeming to outgrow the "making Jim leave Tony for me" thing... I hope Dave can get the help he needs and get better. I know that a lot of people never truly get rid of PTSD.
  18. Love this story...I would love to see it continue. I have a young man I feel the same way about. He is like a son to me and I wouldn't want it to be more.
  19. YES!!! I knew Penelope would love the fan!!!
  20. Kayden melts my heart. He has a very charming effect on most of the household. Thank you for such a sweet chapter!!!
  21. Gene63

    Promise Stars

    What a beautiful story. I love that it is left up to the reader to decide what happened after the bonding. I choose to believe they lived happily ever after and that Lox's powers doubled. I am a cat lover and Toto and Plato were so cute.
  22. Gene63

    Chapter 1

    This story should be a wake up call to all of us. You can't judge someone by what you hear or have been told. A lot of good people are left alone because of something negative that someone has said. I would love to see a back story to this...
  23. Gene63

    Chapter 4

    A lot of mystery in this story. I look forward to watching it unfold and the answers come.
  24. Gene63

    First Contact

    This sounds like the beginning of a fantastic story!!!
  25. I really am enjoying the shorts!!! Kayden is adorable and I'm glad he's getting settled in!
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