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The only criticism I have about your stories and your storytelling overall and this one in particular is that they end.
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Chapter 8 - In The Cold
starboardtack commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 8 - In The Cold
A stomach clenching chapter.- 9 comments
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Homecoming, Without Home
starboardtack commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Homecoming, Without Home
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I'm not crying. It is jut the pollen ........
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A perfect chapter. A perfect transition.
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If I ever said or thought anything bad about you for any reason whatsoever, all is forgiven in light of how quickly you are publishing new chapters. You now are my favorite author/person. Lol
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I was wrong about the pacing of your story and I apologize. Not wrong about not liking how long it went on but that is more about me than about your skill as an author. I now realize that it was absolutely necessary to establish the depth’s of Kitt’s brokenness and to serve as a base for Matt’s encounter with Kitt. A deeply moving story by an excellent author.
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I respect your process but it’s time……
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Sitting in the corner of the dealership not caring whether people are curious about the tears in my eyes.
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Sitting in the corner of the dealership not caring whether people are curious about the tears in my eyes.
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There is a fine art to edging. You, sir, are a master. I hate the torture but love how it moves this story forward. lol
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Chapter 7 - The Letter
starboardtack commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 7 - The Letter
DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! Of all the plot twists I had in mind, I never imagined this. Good job. -
Crossroads in Two Towns
starboardtack commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Crossroads in Two Towns
Just so you know, my therapist told me I don’t handle cliffhangers very well! Lol -
Beautifully descriptive, strong characters, took me a little while to get used to the sentence construction but that is my issue. It does add an authentic voice to your story.
