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The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
starboardtack commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
Nice. Very very nice. Maybe it is just me, but the thing that really distinguished the two worlds that you brought together was not the obvious ethnic differences through their last names and other devices but the times you described one circumcised and one uncircumcised. Not sure what to do with that, it is just something that seems important to your storytelling. -
Beyond awesome! Way way way beyond.
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The Saturday Boy, Part One of Three
starboardtack commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part One of Three
Anticipating the arrival of the aunt. So many deliciously wicked possibilities. -
The Truth of the Prophecy
starboardtack commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Truth of the Prophecy
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As the father of a son adopted at an older age (both him and me), all I can say is I am not crying, I just have something in my eyes. Must be the dust around here.
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Ah the fine art of edging — not between Tag and Ash but between you and your readers. Exquisite agony?
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So we have moved from tornado to earthquake. Gotta catch my breath!
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Hysterical! Fantastic storytelling.
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Aftermath is an end, a closure for me, and that is appropriate — for the storm front. Good choice. But the storm clouds have not really moved on for Ash and Taggert, have they? This is a beautiful chapter both as to the descriptions of the ranch, weather, and setting, and as to the relationships between and among the men. The whole story is achingly well paced and you have captured the turmoil beautifully.
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What a gentle, beautiful touch you bring to this story.
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Just realized how tense my muscles are. Great writing!
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This is so lovingly crafted.
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I always enjoy your storytelling and am enjoying this as well. Worried about Rob as a spoiler. Only issue is that with my aging brain. having the two main characters have last names that are so close is a bit of a challenge. Something to think about for your NEXT story as I do hope many more are in the offing.
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I am sure you took a page out of the Book of Patrick: Always leave them wanting more!
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The only criticism I have about your stories and your storytelling overall and this one in particular is that they end.
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