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    Part 2

    starboardtack commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Part 2

    The only criticism I have about your stories and your storytelling overall and this one in particular is that they end.
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    A stomach clenching chapter.
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    Your storytelling is complicated. I like complicated. Glad to have you back so soon.
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    Thanksgiving

    starboardtack commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Thanksgiving

    Thank you.
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    I’m Home

    starboardtack commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in I’m Home

    I'm not crying. It is jut the pollen ........
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    A perfect chapter. A perfect transition.
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    If I ever said or thought anything bad about you for any reason whatsoever, all is forgiven in light of how quickly you are publishing new chapters. You now are my favorite author/person. Lol
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    Two Worlds

    starboardtack commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Two Worlds

    I was wrong about the pacing of your story and I apologize. Not wrong about not liking how long it went on but that is more about me than about your skill as an author. I now realize that it was absolutely necessary to establish the depth’s of Kitt’s brokenness and to serve as a base for Matt’s encounter with Kitt. A deeply moving story by an excellent author.
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    I respect your process but it’s time……
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    Sitting in the corner of the dealership not caring whether people are curious about the tears in my eyes.
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    Sitting in the corner of the dealership not caring whether people are curious about the tears in my eyes.
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    There is a fine art to edging. You, sir, are a master. I hate the torture but love how it moves this story forward. lol
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    DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! Of all the plot twists I had in mind, I never imagined this. Good job.
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    Just so you know, my therapist told me I don’t handle cliffhangers very well! Lol
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    Beautifully descriptive, strong characters, took me a little while to get used to the sentence construction but that is my issue. It does add an authentic voice to your story.
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    I have a feeling I will be checking out a lot of your stories. Fluff or not!
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    I started reading this series thinking it would be a non-serious escape, a bit of fluff. What I have found is a compelling, well-written, complicated story. My hat off to you.
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    Love love love your storytelling!
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    I wasn’t sure how you were going to get Dean and Kris together but never expected that! Good job.
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    Chapter 41

    starboardtack commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 41

    “Spooning leads to forking” — I almost spit my oatmeal across the table. LMAO! Sorry though, no ideas about the sequel. My college years were pretty boring. Or they were exciting but I was boring.
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    Love Jack!
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    Great content, need to go back and run a spell check. Glad to be gifted with another chapter.
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    Chapter 6

    starboardtack commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Simply beautiful.
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    Chapter 34

    starboardtack commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 34

    I kinda hoped that the disgusting house parent would have shown up for the conclave. Bev’s and Mom’s reactions would have been priceless additions to the mix. Great story!
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    Late to the game reading this chapter. Enjoying the story a lot. One question about writing conventions — why do authors have foreign characters refer to themselves in the third person? Surely Slav knows I and me and possessives. I have travelled a fair bit and never encountered this in conversations, or at least not after the first few minutes. Is this a linguistics thing that I am missing?
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