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Your treatment of Keith was so sensitive, loving and real. And the set up with Jon’s parents was perfect. Been there, done that. Have the scars to prove it lol. Extraordinary! Love your writing!
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Magnificent, painful honestly from Keith. So often we understandably get so tied up in our search for authenticity, to be honest with ourselves and others, we are unaware, ignore, or do not care about the impact it has on others. I am not saying remain closeted or in unhappy relationships, but the struggles we go through — the others in our lives are struggling as well. I know I am advocating the almost impossible for most of us as coming out is and must be a “self” centered experience and this chapter brings the impact into stark relief.
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Your use of the lexicon makes me think that Mickey Spillane lives somewhere in your family tree and Mike Hammer is about to make an appearance! It is a delightful read.
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Prologue: That Smile She Gave Us
starboardtack commented on Tomkin Watts's story chapter in Prologue: That Smile She Gave Us
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I am a little lost and need some guidance. I remember reading the early story or stories about William and Liam but could someone provide me with a list of stories and their order so I can reacquaint myself with the storyline and characters? Maybe reread them and pick up any I may have missed. I remember it was all worthwhile and I do not want to miss out on all that this new series has to offer.
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You know you could’ve put everyone out of our misery by letting the damned condom break lol
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Act II - The Point Of No Return
starboardtack commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Point Of No Return
I know this isn’t’ helpful but HOLY SH!T — and that is a phrase I never utter! -
Bless her heart!
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There's Something in the Wind
starboardtack commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in There's Something in the Wind
I came to this by way of Big Paws. The writing and creativity there were so strong that I was curious to see what else you had written. This first chapter further cements you as one of the best storytellers and literary craftsmen I have encountered. I do hope you develop this further. -
Act II - No Time To Die
starboardtack commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - No Time To Die
Your creativity and storytelling just gets better and better and better. This is an astounding tale that you are weaving. -
Wow! Effing intense chapter!
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Time for Jim to fish or cut bait.
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I guess you don’t know me that well, but I freaking hate cliffhanger!. Another great chapter. Many thanks.
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This just gets more and more fascinating!
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Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
starboardtack commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
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Act I - Live And Let Die
starboardtack commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Live And Let Die
Was kinda into the story until now but you caught me with this chapter! Well written and original. I am very curious. -
Bryce Easton Everard
starboardtack commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Bryce Easton Everard
Brings me back to when I found my son in the orphanage. Nice chapter. -
I am struck by how you put yourself (through your character) into what amounts to a different world view when you speak through Ryder. His naivete almost has the quality of someone with Asperger Syndrome or is on the Autism spectrum. I hope this comes across as a very high compliment as it is meant as such. Great writing.
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Can’t say why, but the end of this chapter brought tears to my eyes. ❤️
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I can’t forget the image of the credit card and all its implications and so I find the final two paragraphs reassuring. Great story and I really appreciate the regular and timely postings.
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I tend to read quickly but when you publish, my reading slows down to a snails pace so that I can savor every phrase and sentence.
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I am a bit slow and only just now realized that you also wrote Lucas. Your stories are a joy to read — just enough tension to move the plot but filed with love and optimism. Thank you so much!
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Ok, until now I kind of dismissed this story as a fun read in the style of an airport bookstand purchase — marshmallow or cotton candy. Nice writing, steamy — fun storytelling but quickly gone. The ending scene totally upended my assumptions and taught me to not to be so cavalier in my judgments. Thank you! This is really good and I am so looking forward to what you do with it.
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So glad your “family” and you are back. Looking forward to what is to come.
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“and knew that everything was going to be alright” Oh no — that phrase — it’s the kiss of death! Pandora’s box! The dark cloud behind every silver lining. The footsteps in the dark. Fasten your seatbelts because it is about to get bumpy! Kinda tried to slip than in at the very end but we know what you are about. LOL! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
