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    Thanks for a grand story. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
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    In these chapters you created a story line that remained consistently strong. I look forward to seeing what you do with this. Two caevats that I offer after having read many other works. First, please keep the story flowing by posting regularly. Irregular posts or long periods between posts are quite destructive and I would hate to se you waste such a good start. Second (and I do not know how to give content to this) I hope you can avoid so many of the "gay love story" cliches upon which less skilled and imaginative writers fall back. Again, this is too good a start to throw away in such a fashion. Good luck and thanks for the great read.
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    Chapter 1

    starboardtack commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This looks like a good start and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. One request -- please get rid of the script font. It makes it hard to read thus distracting from your storytelling. Of course, that is just my opinion.
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    I am not sure how to contact the author directly, but perhaps this will get through. Thank you for an utterly delightful read. When I started reading the series, I believed this would be just another predictable gay love story. How wrong I was. The twists and turns in the plot were unexpected but most welcome. It is clear that you have a respect for your craft, your characters, and your readers. Again, many thanks.
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