Mateo was so happy to be found and have a new home with his mates. But I liked him most for saying he wants to talk to Elias about feeling scared. This way he'll be able to treat his mate right and let him have the independence he needs. Pax has done well so far.
It was a good story until I got to the twist in the tail. It didn't make sense to, perhaps because you hid the fact he was dead too well. But otherwise I enjoyed seeing everything from a father's perspective.
I forgot how annoying he could be, forcing his nose into my business
Ha, ha, sometimes JJ does have a good point. Brad would agree so much, as would a bunch of other people. Will likes to know what's going on, mostly because he wants to help, but also because he really wants to know stuff, the way Brad hates secrets.
Vermin extermination plans are coming along nicely, but some of your readers have a good point about the strategic advantage of further joining. Any excuse to get some of your heady mix of sex and romance. Even dughlas can't help taking a peek while
Yikes, that was some adventure, both in his travels and in his dream. There are advantages to being apart it seems, if you get to dream like that. Nice to meet Finian and Alistair. And it's good they're warned against the dangerous usurper.
LOL, Penni definitely needs a keeper, and I happy he's found one who cares about him and treats him gently. I hope Renke doesn't choke when he finds out who Penni is, or rather who his parents are.
Great chapter apart from the fact Robbie still hasn't told Nathan about Alex. Nicola was being nosy, but Robbie should simply have told her he was getting a BJ. For all the sex he's getting, he's a bit of a prude about something so natural. For once I agree with Nicola, she's cool about such matters.
It's rather ironic that Karen's religious mania is what may end up saving shifters. Warren wouldn't have had a pure silver cross if not for her need to impress her church with her (family's) piety.
If you had told us at the beginning that we would see two whole chapters devoted to Warren later in the story, I don't think anyone would have believed you. And we sure wouldn't have guessed we'd all be rooting for Warren as Kellars brother.
The Brother interview still makes me chuckle, but it was nice to see Kellar's gamble pay off. Warren's efforts to connect with Adelin from the second he saw her were hilarious, and she felt the same. She can clutch his arm instead of poor Kellar's.
I hope Kellar remembers to heal Warren's kneecap and liver.
Yes, yes it did. The explanation didn't surprise me, because I would have been just as horrified and mortified at having my own stupidity slap me in the face in public like that. Poor Tobyn, even if he did bring it on himself by telling Kellar to answer the question.