Timothy M.

I like the fact D'gar thinks for himself and questions matters. He'll be less hidebound than other old-timers in the future.

A brown is a very good option for Detgar, and more likely to win a mating flight for a green every time. I'm glad the boys are weyrlings together and have a chance to be weyrmates.

I like that Detgar is loyal to his friend and lover. I hope they Impress togther.

I hope for H'rek's sake he'll find a solution to this issue. Getting some non-dragon-flight experience with sex would be a good idea. He should find an experienced green rider (who is not an old-timer) and ask for advice.

I finally caught up with reading and commenting on Sidewinder, so now I can look forward to a new chapter on Monday.

That lawman gave good advice and I hope the boys take it. They're rewarded for honesty and integrity, and I think the sheriff is right about We, Lee and Dan wanting their friends to have the gold. It was nice to meet a proper sheriff of the wild west. He might be hard, but he's sensible too and as he said, a good judge of character.

I like the proverb. Coy was the one who whetted Boone's appetite for same-sex love as more than just a convenience. And now Boone is keeping Coy's conscience and integrity sharp. The gunny sack has given up its secrets and Coy must once and for all face the fact his brother was an evil dude. And he also has to understand how three good guys died, because he let Will tag along and kept bailing him out of trouble.

Well, we know now Will did his best to destroy Coy's friendship with Boone, and he and his mother made sure Coy never dared to take it further than friendship. Also, it's pretty obvious Will killed Wes and Lee not just for their gold, but because he hated them for being a couple. Is Boone a fool for having stuck around, for not taking Dan up on his offer ? Maybe, but I think he preferred the gold of his friendship and love for Coy, rather than pretending his liking for Dan could be a substitute, even if he thought he might have come to love Dan eventually. But Coy was definitely a fool to pretend his brother had a heart of gold beneath his nasty behavior. I'm glad Boone confronted him with the falsity of that belief. Maybe Coy will finally learn to distinguish between the fool's gold of caring about the opinion of people who hate without reason, and the real gold of someone who cares about his happiness. But maybe it's too late.

I know your chapter title refers to Coy's trying to cope with his sadness about his brother's (well-deserved) death, but there is also another end to mourn. Boone seems ready to end their partnership in panning for gold, and the heart ache over liking Coy 'that way' without having his feelings returned. I'm also thinking of another meaning of Wake - waking up. Coy is finally waking up to the truth about Will, that he was a killer and hated Boone. And maybe he is also trying to wake up to another truth, but it may be too late for Boone to believe him. Perhaps Boone needs to wake up to the idea not everyone knows for sure about liking guys from the start ?

I'm trying to work out, what animal this is supposed to be. A skinned elephant ?

Absolutely wonderful !

it's beautiful in some ways, but all I can think about is the destruction of the natural vegetation of those slopes, meaning all the creatures also lost their homes.

Thanks for reminding everyone about the possibility to promote a favoite story via the GA blog. We have a couple of open spots in the last months of 2020, so please consider sending a review to me or Renee. It doesn't have to be long - in fact, a slightly expanded story review you've already written would be fine.

Somebody needs to stick a dagger in Nisa's back asap. But at least Firuz will be more vigilant than ever.

Great chapter, and I'm pleased all the generals are aware of Nisa's ambitions. And that Kastan is starting to pay more attention to his spouse.

How about getting access to security cameras in the bank and look for pack visitors ? Fergus might be able to do that - or he could ask his pack members who has been at the bank recently.

I can see we're on @Reader1810 page of this chat - but only for a few more posts. Hope you have a nice weekend. Gary, I sent edits for ch 4 to you.

Nice sunny warm weather in Denmark

Well done, Robbie. I'm glad he confided in Rory, and he helped with the barn and was honest with Conner.

Back at ya, buddy.

I loved that Jimmy won the fight with the queen bitch, politely but firmly.

I'm looking forward to the story continuing.

Turned out I hadn't read the story before. I enjoyed it, so thanks for the recommendation @spikey582

LOL, i took a little break at some point, but I had time to finish the story. Maybe I should have been slower, to get reactions and replys in return.

That was a lovely surprise, both the frank talk with Brandon and Alex' friends turning up for the summer. Great story.