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This is so intense....I never would have thought Emma would be the one to kill them....I hope Ethan figures it out.

WOW......that was intense, is Ethan maybe thinking of taking the Shinigami eye deal ??

Oh WOW......quiet little Billy, I did not see that coming. It shows their life spans in the millions how does it turn out in human years.

I agree a longer story is needed, I can wait BUT IDK how patient I'll be....lol

Thats sad I was hoping someone in jail would latch on to him and do to him what he did to his victims, I'm not a violet person...hehe, I just don't think he deserves to live.

I really enjoyed this story, there are very few stories that have made me cry, that have made me want to wrap my hands around a characters neck (<roger/michael) I would love a part 2 with MANY MANY chapters it just feels like there's more to be told, ALSO..... IDK IF I missed it but whatever happened to Roger/Michael, I'm assuming he went to jail....I know this story isn't about him but I'm curious as to how many bodies were found and how much time he ended up with.

I thought Harold was dead and that Kevin was the one who captured Daniel ??

I'm NOT trying to offend or upset anyone... What does antebellum have to do with slavery....I always thought it refered to a style of house NOT slavery. Can someone explain this to me ?? In simple terms please. Thank you

AMAZING.......I loved it, its true what Patrick said once your accused of something like that people don't care about the outcome there's no innocent until proven guilty.... I would LOVE to read more about them, I've got a feeling their story could really go far.

Yea I'm thinking Robbie is fixing to be a daddy.

I'm THINKING maybe Alex or Ryan got him to the motel and beat him up then planted the coke on him......in some way or another Don is definitely involved. In the next chapter, Nathan is charged with intent to supply narcotics, and the bank withdraws the funding for Conner's farm, leaving his family facing financial ruin. ^^^^^ I think Don also has something to do with Connors family losing out on the funding for their farm, poor Nathan is being charged with a crime ( innocent until proven guilty ) that he probably had nothing to do with. These people really need to get a clue on how corrupt Don is....he's probably sleeping with the sheriff taking it up the rear.....they both might have their hand in the jar of corruption. I'm so ready to see the tail end of Don, chuck him off the highest bridge with his hands and feet tied and lashed to a VERY HEAVY cinder block..... I'm so p.o'd right now 😡😡😡😡😡😡

WOO-HOO.......now lets take down that family and their supporters, they all need to DIE !!!!!!!!!

Katya....I'm missing the guys I hope you update this story soon PLEASE !!!!!

I was holding out hope that that would be the outcome....I'm happy that Levi got what he deserved.

I'm not happy that its over but I am happy that N'than and Smeeth can now live happily in peace. 💙💙 It is unfortunate that the general got to walk away....hehe, he deserved to lose a foot.

I LOVED IT !!!!!!! yes I finished the whole story in one night after that first chapter I was so hooked I read it all, I just couldn't stop reading !!! The visuals you gave made me feel like I was there, I think I said it once before but I'll say it again, you are truely an amazing story teller.

Interesting very, very interesting I'm hooked....curious as to who or what the man-boy is that Stravor's father felt the need to give him a warning about him.

Exactly, I feel like there is still more to be told...more that needs to be said, I just wasn't ready for the story to end 😭😭

Sorry but I'm disappointed (not in the story, I LOVED the story) just sad that it was so short I wasn't prepared for the ending. I hope Peter finds someone to love him like he "loved" Simon, he deserves that after all he's been through and all that he has lost. As far as Simon I'm on the fence about how I feel about him.......

Well it certainly looks as though Theo/April/Wednesday (<snicker) has some explaining to do, not just to Jett but the Dads too. Poor guy he really is up the creek without a paddle....and Jett grounded until he's 25, that killed me. Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm going to miss the guys when the story is over, can we have a story about Zane and Dan ?? I think that would be an interesting story.

Maybe he gets it from his dad....

Thats what I thought Simon was trying to do, get her close enough then stab her. Poor Peter....he lost his friend and his crush who it looks like was using him to get to Angela, SSMH, this just broke my heart.

General Jeptha needs to disappear 😡, from the 1st and 2nd chapter you can tell that N'than has no desire to tell about any relationship that he had with Junias so why can't he just leave N'than alone let him be happy. I hope Smeeth is able to protect N'than from all those that wish to harm him. Will we find out what happened to Barrukinda, I think he should be taken to shark infested waters and dropped overboard.

That sounds lovely, I never thought about that.

Let the war begin.....I can imagine the entire pack, with the exception of levi's family of course, is ready for blood. Poor Levi (LOL) looks like he's going to die, better late than never.