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Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
Smoothy commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
Fast and furious 👏👏😅😛!! Wow!! Awesome start!! Grabbed my attention immediately. I love your characters already. Vrrroooommmmmm! You fulfill my need for speed 🤣🤣🤣🐽🐽🤣🤣! 😊🤪 I truly embarrass myself 😋!- 63 comments
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Super hot chapter 😅😅😍😛🤩🥳
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Nooooooo!!!!😡😡😡🥵 You better be in hiding cause I’m coming for you!!!!!! How can you be so cruel!!!
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Aaawwwwhhh I need a gran like that!!! There’s another person to look out for them. Certainly she’s got Drew’s back too🤗
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OMW!!!!!! What is going on? Why is the Order involved???😡😡🥵🤬!!!! Well they better have their big men panties on cause Nico and Sjo are going to kick their arses!!! Vat hom flaffie!!! Leave only corpses behind!!!
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Wow 😮!! Gran Jane is definitely not as I pictured her! I think she’s going to be awesome but strict with everyone. She’ll love Drew and Cerrian! Don’t know about Jay though. She definitely cares about the twins.
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I’m so excited to about this tattoo!! Can’t wait to “see” it. Wonder how he got those scars......
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I missed a couple of chapters 🤧 But at least I had more than 1 chapter to read!! 🤣🤣🐽🐽🤣🤣 Ok so the master has spoken!! Love it!
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Hopefully the device is working!!!!! Go get them!! Leave nobody alive!!! Clean up properly!!!! Just get the 2 men back at any and all cost!!!! Grrrrr kill the traitors DEAD!!!😡😡😡😡
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Thank for this conclusion! Now I know that Riley is fine and he’ll stay that way. Grayson is awesome! Just like his dad 🤗
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At this moment this is one of my favorite stories! You have a way with words and writing this story, that’s awesome. The way you describe certain acts and processes are outstanding. You create this urge to keep on reading because I don’t want to miss anything! Great story and I can barely wait fot the next installments 🤗🤗 Keep it coming please 🙏🤧
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but I think we’re more like a press stud. We need each other to be completely whole, but when we’re apart, neither of us is actually broken.” What a beautiful description!!!!!!!
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Yeah me too. But we gotta play the lotto first 🤣🤣🤣🐽🐽
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I don’t think any old soul was born too late to live a hippie life! You just need the vibe inside!!
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If I close my eyes I can see that buss - purples and pinks and claustrophobic!!! But I love it 💕!! I want one when I retire 🤗🤗 This story is awesome 😎 and I love every chapter. Ok it’s confession time: I want the bus, the twins, Jay, Cerrian, Drew and his mother!!!
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Oh boy! Reading this chapter at work was not a bright idea!!! I want to jump and holler!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤧! I will realy receive weird looks!!!! What an amazing chapter. 👀🥰
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Don’t be sorry!!!! 🤣🤣🤧👀. It was time for something to come out!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🐽🐽🤣🤣
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My heart nearly stopped! A few callous words could have far reaching consequences! Thank goodness Noël decided to open his mind and let it all out!!🤗🤗
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Skirmish in the Chambers
Smoothy commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Skirmish in the Chambers
I’m sooo glad you got the writers block removed 👏👏👏🤧🤧!!! I hope it hurt like hell so that you’ll refrain from going that route ever again!!🤣🤣🤣🐽🐽🤣🤣 I love your stories and your characters so please don’t make me wait so long again? -
I would also love to read about the grandchildren!
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Awesome to read such a nice and light story! Thank you so much for sharing it with everyone 🤗🤗
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I hope they catch the asshats behind the killings! Love this story as much as the previous ones 😍😘
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Bitch bitch bitch!!!!!!😡😡🤬
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So glad the truth got aired!! If Paul knows anything about health and safety, he’ll stay on his ass for a long time!!!!! Ember better pull out all the stops to right his wrong!!! Yeah go Ember!!🎉🎉💖👀
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It seems as if Simon had a tragic life until he met Kitryn. I really hope they have a future together 🤗🤗
