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Smoothy

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    Jeremy Proctor

    Oh I love Jeremy and I hope he'll have a future there!
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    Lost and Found

    Ooooo! Love the beginning of this new story and will be waiting for the next chapter!
  3. Love it! As always.... I hope they get hold of Train and take him down!😡
  4. I really enjoy this story 🤗 I hope his family will accept him
  5. Oh noooo! What's going on down there? And the door locked???? Can't wait for the next chapter!
  6. Yes depression can take hold of you without any cause. The deep dark pit which endeavor to swallow you at times. I really feel for him and I want Teddy to just stay there on the perimeter, moving in and out as required. Pop in and shake him up a bit and then move back. Depression hates being "mocked". Cant wait for the next chapter 🤗🤗
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    School's Out!

    Ok.... you've got me hooked!!! Thank you for sharing your brainchild with is. Looking forward to the next chapter
  8. This can't be the end!!! I need to know what happens after rehab! Riley must be ok! He must have his happy ever after! He must become a dad - the best ever!!!! Please give us an epilogue..... or maybe two or three??????😱
  9. Gary, this story is awesome and I'll miss my weekly dose of excitement. Please don't stop here? A whole new chapter is there for our heroes and I surely hope they don't let you sleep until you've written their story!
  10. The bad boy going in to rescue the enemy! Boy oh boy! That little punk will keep on hacking at his ass, but there comes the real Riley to the front. I do hope that he'll be able to get out unscathed because he deserves it!
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    Suspicion

    Oi! A nonexistent David!!!! They better be very careful cause this spells trouble!!😱 Love this story very much
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    Chapter One

    Oooo shower buddies! Luke a blind shower date?? Love your story so pls continue!
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    Chapter 53

    Terrific chapter! Silas's pot got it's lid! Now just Daniel and Toby. Come on!!!! They need their lids as well!???
  14. Your story is now getting the body it lacked in the first few chapter! Now it's become a story I just can't miss!? Since they've been abducted it became a total suspense story and I love it ?
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    Journal 2

    I really feel for Chris and I hope he will successfully integrate with the new pack. He owes it to himself to find happiness ?
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    Ruben Chance, FBI

    Oi! They should'nt trust anyone! Way to dangerous! Thank you for regular updates It ensures readers commitment to read more and not loose interest. Even though you are going through tough times, you keeps the readers entertained. It is good therapy as well. Thank you
  17. Ooooo and when do we see the next chapter? I'm always scared that I'll miss the notification ?
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    Journal 1

    Doing your mojo again and I love this series. Hopefully Chris will get his happy place?
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    Chapter 15 Final

    I see this story has already been labeled as a masterpiece, but I want to tell you it is! I've never cried while reading a story, but here I cried snot and tears ?. I knew there would be a twist, but I never imagined the end. Thank you for sharing it with us ❤️
  20. I love your story and your writing style. You've got a vivid imagination and your characters are so real! Can't wait for the next chapter ?
  21. My sentiments exactly! From orphan to alpha! Triple ?!!! Such a good chapter! I can even feel the emotions from everyone present!
  22. Oh I love ❤️ this story! I can just imagine the excitement Cy is feeling! A jersey to top it off! I hope their "date" turns out perfectly!
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    Chapter 13

    Great chapter! So glad Kian is awake? Wonder what that cube is all about?
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    The best news ever

    I like your story and your writing style. I'm sure to follow Winning the Lottery and look forward to the next installments. Thank yoy for sharing it with us ?
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    Dyexslia

    Poor Cy? On top of all his issues, dyslexia? Carter will need all his wits to keep Cy off balance and curious.
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