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    Chapter 14

    Lovely chapter. Hunter´s very nice and Danni´s so happy. More twins, how sweet and uncles will have more practice on kids before having their own
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    Chapter 13

    I´m glad about Jon and James, they´ll make a lovely couple. Poor Marcus, he seemed so perfect in every way but he has his flaws after all. It´s great to agree to talk about things but not so easy to do it. They got over this and hopefully talk more in the future.
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    Chapter 12

    That photo Sam sent them sounds very beautiful. James and Jon...why not? I think I still have few chapter left before I catch up with the latest.
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    Chapter 11

    Marcus seemed a bit jealous at the end, he must be feeling a little insecure about their relationship. Tony, on the other hand, didn´t seem to notice how gorgeous everybody else though Keith was. Somewhere at the beginning of this chapter, you mentioned their first fight, I was looking forward reading more about it, but it never came up again. Main thing of course is, that they made up
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    Chapter 10

    Twins are just so adorable, and in time Tony and Marcus will make lovely parents, I think they should have a house full of kids. Good for Tony for getting a dream job One thing, though, I would have thought 6-year olds spoke better English. Different country and different language, but I work with under school aged children and to my experience 6-year olds use their own language pretty well. It sounded like twins' spoke as they did when they last appeared and then they were just 3.
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    Chapter 9

    I like the way you tell about Tony´s past. Little by little there´s more about what happened during those three years. At the very end, there´s You're love is the greatest gift I have ever received. Lovely sentiment but I´m sure you notice what´s wrong with it.
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    Chapter 8

    Tony´s parents are great and I´m glad that Sam had such a successful exhibition. Poor Tony, but he did good, he did fight. I hope there won´t be more nightmares. Marcus was perfect as always. He just knows how to handle things, both good and bad. Really enjoying the story
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    Chapter 7

    It´s nice that Tony and Jen have been able to stay as friends, you can never have too many friends. Scott obviously have some issues to deal with, hopefully he´ll be able to find a happiness with Justin. Tony and Marcus.....they are so cute together
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    Chapter 6

    I knew they´ll make an adorable couple
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    Chapter 5

    What a ghastly thing to happen and how sweet was Marcus. Wonderful chapter even if it was so sad.
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    Chapter 4

    You mentioned this is your first story, you write very well, it´s easy to read and the story is great so far. Now, we just need Tony and Marcus together as boyfriends, they´ll be a perfect couple. I need to read on to find out what you have thought of them, together or not together
  12. Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 3

    Tony and Marcus have a wonderful relationship, they seem very comfortable with each other and they seem closer than Tony and Brian do. Marcus just took charge and knew what needed to be done. Really great friend. Still not sure about Brian. Brilliant chapter!
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter! Amazing characters, I like Tony and Marcus, but there´s something about Brian that I´m not sure about, I hope he´s ok. Love the friendship Tony and Marcus have.
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    Chapter 1

    Great start for the story, looks interesting. Jen seemed like she was just looking a way out of a relationship she didn´t want, but didn´t want to blamed for breaking it up either. On to the next chapter
  16. Anything´s possible in football
  17. I wish I could, I really do. England team keep disappointing me, it´s about time they won something and winning their games would be a good start.
  18. Haven´t seen Velvet Goldmine in several years, should watch it again. I liked Undertow. Few of the films I´ve seen and liked: Juste une question d´amour (Just a question of love, France 2000), Sommersturm (summer storm Germany 2004), Patrik 1.5 (Sweden 2008), Yossi & Jagger (Israel 2002), Priest (UK 1994), La Cage aux Folles (Birds of a Feather, France - Italy 1978. I´m sure at least some of them still have a subtitled youtube video.
  19. Welcome zaf89! There really are a lot of great stories here
  20. Congratulations!!!! It´s like Gary Lineker said "Football is a simple game. Twenty-two men chase a ball for 90 minutes and at the end, the Germans always win." Today it took more than 90 mins.
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    November 20th

    This has been such an amazing story, I´ve really enjoyed "watching" Button grow up to be a fine young man and I´m sure he´ll be a great dad. Looking forward to the sequel
  22. Brazil has a lot of good players but someone needs to teach them how to play as a team. Luis Felipe Scolari couldn´t do it.
  23. Very thorough review of a lovely film. Only like to add that James Wilby and Rupert Graves are great actors and nice to look at, too.
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    Chapter 10

    Poor Alex! Perfect plan for the evening and then it all goes wrong Mason is a strange man, he seems very confident and strong, but then he just goes to pieces when his ex-lover shows up.
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    Chapter 21

    I was thing the same as Cole, everything has been so smooth lately, that something is bound to go wrong soon. I´m glad it wasn´t Greg, though. Nice chapter
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