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    I love summer nights, all the light and the sun.
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    Fifteen to Life

    Suvitar commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Fifteen to Life

    Great chapter! Must say felt sorry for them all. Poor Kevin, Button seems sure he prefers girls, hopefully Kevin finds someone nice. Even though you write only one short chapter about each year in Button´s life, you still manage to tell enough, so it feels like much more and I feel like I know the characters. Really like this story
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    Chapter 7

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Such a sweet story, I could have read more
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    Chapter 6

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 6

    I was sitting in my garden, enjoying the sunshine and reading your lovely story....and you or rather Pete made me cry Really beautiful chapter and so very sad.
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    Chapter 5

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I almost went back to check if I had missed Pete, but I don´t think I did, so I´ll read on and find about him in next chapter. A week seems like a very short time to go all the way to Australia and pack your old life and say all the goodbyes. They definitely needed to go together.
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    Chapter 4

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I seem to be all out of "likes", so I´ll just tell you that I like this story Owen and Cooper are such a lovely couple, glad they managed to clear the little misunderstanding and go house hunting together.
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    Chapter 3

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Ok guys, more talking and less presuming what other might or might not be thinking. Now they are both disappointed
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    Chapter 2

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Sorry, I got the names mixed up. Couldn´t remember Cooper´s name when I wrote the first chapter review and saw Conner in some else´s review
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    Chapter 1

    Suvitar commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Last year I met some of my Facebook friends, some of them I had known for many years and never met before, everybody from different countries and it was so much fun. Some people in my real life didn´t think it´s a good idea to go to a foreign country to meet people I did´t actually know and others thought it was a great idea. I thought it was a wonderful idea. There´s always a risk when you meet new people, you might not get along with them. Reading on to find out how things develop with Connor and Owen,
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    Poor boy! How embarrassing for him, he´ll never forget it and neither will anyone else
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    Welcome Hanna and have fun
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    EPILOGUE

    Suvitar commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

    Absolutely fabulous story
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    There´s still an epilogue and I want it to have a happy ending Let´s see what you have wrtitten
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    Good thinking, Derek, finding your uncle
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    What a ghastly father! And if Derek´s mother knew what had happened all those years ago or even suspected, why didn´t she ask Derek. Now Derek´s walking away again, that is so sad.
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    Ch 30: Suicide

    Suvitar commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 30: Suicide

    I was crying until Rebecca cam in with the axe I´m glad Derek was in time to safe Charlie.
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    That was a really sad chapter Poor Derek!
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    This was even worse than I thought it´d be. Absolutely heartbreaking chapter. You got me crying now. Derek was so scared for Charlie and just wanted to make sure he was safe, and Derek himself really should have gone into a hospital.
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    This story keeps getting more horrible. Past secrets will be probably revealed soon and those won´t be nice. I hope Charlie is okay and Derek, too.
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    Derek´s life is getting worse and worse
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    Ch 25: Spiral

    Suvitar commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 25: Spiral

    I´m slowly starting to feel sorry for Derek, his world seems to be crumbling down and he´s not in charge of it anymore. Unfortunately that´s when someone like Luke can talk Derek into something really stupid. I´ve been wondering for awhile now if Derek´s ill. Brain tumor or something like that causing the memory losses and blackouts.
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    Derek´s mum takes one look of Dr Baker and decides that she no good and doesn´t want Derek to see her again. Weird Derek´s dad doesn´t have time to call his son and asks his PA to do it. And he wants Charlie and Mrs C out of the neighbourhood. Weird Derek gets back his very old jacket and sees blood in it. Weird Obviously something very bad happened in Derek´s childhood. Why else would he not remember everything? This is a very intriguing story
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    Dr Baker....what an interesting character and she seems to know what she´s doing.
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    Loved the ending, very surprising and totally weird
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    Suvitar commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    It´s very slow progress for Derek, but at least now he has admitted to himself that he misses Charlie and he told Mikee that he is sorry. Now he just needs to tell it to Charlie. He needs to take the first step, not expect Charlie to come to him.
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