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Hello BlackInkRain and welcome
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My very first werewolf story, oh rather second, I did read one of your short stories by accident Looks like an interesting story, loved the flashbacks, great way to give background information about how Oli became who he is now.
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Colin was so sweet and an angel Glad Jared found Jeff, he sounds like a lovely man
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Genie with three wishes...if only that´d happen in real life, too But as what happened to Ben showed us, it wouldn´t be always harmless
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Chapter 1 - The Bear Named Bear
Suvitar commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Bear Named Bear
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Took me a long time to read this chapter, it´s difficult to read and cry at the same time Very powerful and touching chapter. Poor Brent and poor Button, losing a dear friend is never easy and when you´re so young it´s just heartbreaking.
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Happy Birthday!
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Happy Birthday! I hope you´ll have a wonderful day!
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Tough Game - Uncertain Results
Suvitar commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Tough Game - Uncertain Results
How nice to read about twins and their friends again, I´ve missed them. Totally understandable that your studies come first and you´ll write when you have a chance. I could just see Josh playing, all sweaty, scared of the ball, full of lust and jealously. It´ll be interesting to see if he ends up with Ethan or will Ethan choose Cody. Wonder what was going on in Washington with Josh´s father. -
And we have Pori Jazz Festival and I´ve heard that Pet Shop Boys will be there this year, very jazzy, I´m sure http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pori_Jazz
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The whole lifetime in few short sentences and it was very touching.
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Lovely story and great characters, especially Hercules was cute
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As Lacey said, they have a lot to learn about each other. Sacha is so scared that he´ll do or say something wrong and is punished. Frank seems to understand better what really is going on in Sacha´s mind than Lacey. James sounds like a handful and will probably cause trouble and heartache for Sacha. Another great chapter!
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Lacey is really trying and she wants everything to be perfect for Sacha, but she doesn´t realise how confined his life has been. Sacha doesn´t understand her jokes, he feels threaten and overwhelmed by everything and feels he needs to be careful, so no-one gets upset with him. The way you write about how Sacha experiences his new surroundings makes it very real. He´ll need a lot of time before he feels comfortable in his own home. Wonderfully written chapter
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Quite a household There´s so much that is totally new to Sacha, so much he needs to get used to, so many new people and he is feeling so insecure and vulnerable. Lacey is great but she doen´t understand how Sacha´s mind works. To Lacey the lock and key thing was a joke, to Sacha it was more like a threat. Brilliant chapter!
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They play well together, 7-2 is a great score, well done and the game sounded very exciting. Great chapter
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Happy Birthday!
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Can´t really explain why, but the scene between Ty and Tony in Tony´s office got me in tears. It was extremely touching and felt very real. Your writing is very easy to read and your characters usually don´t leave me guessing why they did or said something, you have a way making everything clear. When I started and read the list of characters, I was convinced I´d never be able to keep up with them all, but in the end I had no problems. Another one of your amazing stories. this really is a wonderful story, looking forward reading the sequel.
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There´s so much happening in each chapter that I never know what say after I finish reading. And that´s a positive thing I´ve really enjoyed this story so far. Only thing making me sad, is to think how difficult life can be when you´re gay and want to be professional footballer. It should be possible to be both without it even being an issue to anyone. I hope Ken can find the happiness he wants, needs and deserves.
