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    Chapter 16

    Luke and Erin are so cute together and Erin´s family is absolutely brilliant. Luke even got his own lunch to take to school
  2. Where´s Michael? I was so sure he´ll be there with Asher when he collapsed, but now he´s been missing for days. Did he have something to do with Mrs Allen telling the truth? Another great chapter
  3. Two weeks have past. Derek didn´t even try to talk to Charlie, would have thought that he´d want an explanation or something. And where´s Derek´s father? Not at home and didn´t even phone home, very strange. Derek really needs to see a psychiatrist, he is losing it.
  4. Derek´s an idiot to listen someone like Luke who clearly is bad news. For someone so self-centred Derek is very insecure and that´ll cause trouble for him.
  5. Derek´s father has been mentioned only few times and everything I know about him makes me think he´s not a nice man. And now Derek isn´t a nice person.
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    Fabulous Mrs C
  7. I really wanted Derek to have a different reaction, when he finally found out his best friend and brother was gay. But no, he sadly is a homophobic idiot.
  8. Luke´s a creep and Derek shouldn´t listen to him. I´m a bit surprised Mikee was let into the secret.
  9. Luke will be trouble....just have to wait and see how much trouble.
  10. So, at least one more chapter before I can go to sleep. I just couldn´t before Derek finds out about Charlie and Travis
  11. Derek surprised me there, he can be nice if he wants to
  12. I was the hottest man in existence. For another, it was just Charlie.... Oh Derek, sighs Loved Travis, he seems like a great guy. Charlie almost introduced him as a boyfriend Is Derek in denial or just plain stupid? How can he not see that Charlie is gay?
  13. So, everybody knows that Charlie is gay but Derek.
  14. So they are still friends, hopefully they´ll be friends even after Derek finds out that Charlie is gay, they are best of friends and brothers after all.
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    Ch 07: The Spot

    This chapter made me cry. I don´t understand why Derek thinks it´such a bad thing to keep using the nicknames they have used all the time they´ve known each other. I mean, it´s quite common to use a nickname, there´s nothing gay about using a nickname. And anyway he should have talked about using their real names, not just stop calling Charlie Big C without a proper explanation.
  16. I felt so, so sorry for Charlie. This was such a sad chapter. No more Big C, just Charlie.
  17. Andrew gave some very good advice to Derek, but I got a feeling he wasn´t really listening. For being such a "perfect" person, Derek is surprisingly insecure. He thinks being gay makes a person less important and he or Charlie can´t be unimportant, so neither of them can be gay.
  18. I went from cute and adorable to damn sexy and adorable. ... I know I get hard when I see myself in the mirror. No, Derek really isn´t modest at all. But I think the main question in the future will be, is he accepting. I have a bad feeling about this.
  19. Derek has a very high opinion of himself and he certainly isn´t a modest person. Wonder how he´ll react when he finds out that Charlie likes looking at boys. I like Charlie, but I´m not entirely sure about Derek at this point.
  20. “Are you my hero?” he asked shyly. I smiled a perfect and cheeky smile at him. “I guess I am.” Aren´t they cute
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    Chapter 20

    An anniversary they´ll remember for a long time, glad they could laugh about it all
  22. Hello and welcome!
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    Not Like Us

    This was funny
  24. Really sweet
  25. Starting a new life in a pub sounded very nice
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