Miles Long
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It was only a matter of time and getting his stuff was like shaking the wasps nest.
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This chapter was a little confusing, what's Somerset's deal? He did bring up a good point about Rover's father maybe not being so willing to let go.
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Wouldn't Somerset's place be one of the first places his dad would look?
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It's a wonder a Rover was conscious as long as he was with the day he had.
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Interesting new friend Rover has found. His father's goons are relentless, I hope this works.
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We finally come full circle and what a circle...my fingers are crossed that Rover's luck turns around.
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Yikes, scary to contemplate that Rover lives in a house full of people paid to look the other way.
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The tension created in this chapter is enough to give one an ulcer.
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Coming home shouldn't be a cliff hanger but Rover's dread sure makes it feels like one.
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Rover is definitely having an unenviable day. Good story pacing so far.
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This is definitely the kind of story start that drives me to want to skip reviewing and jump right in. Yet my desire to compliment the author is too strong. Thanks.
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Thank you for JJ chapter. As much as I enjoy all the perspectives I consider the JJ chapters extra special treats.
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Ahh...what a great chapter. Thank you for both my fixes and giving us a happy feet chapter to kick off the weekend.
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No surprise that Lady Elgin is linked to the Guild. I would have thought Granger had guessed that by now. Good thing Granger figured her scheme out and Lord Elgin all but gave George confirmation. At least Elgin has a plan to nip his wife's antics in the bud and hopefully with Granger's help they will be successful.
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The mysterious ending continue. Nice job on pacing and leaving the reader wanting more.
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It starts with a beating
Miles Long commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in It starts with a beating
Painfully short chapter, but full of action and enough mystery to compel me to continue. My compliments to the author on the inaugural posting. -
Relief washes over me that Brad and Cody are in a better place. I hope it gives Cody the strength and kick Alex Danvers to the proverbial (or literal) curb and go after who he wants. The relief continues with Zach just having a sprain. Part of the grace of sports like football and hockey are how players can soar in environments that have high risk for personal injury. Thanks for the update.
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I am always glad for a happy ending, but there are still so many open endings like the creepy blood Mage Lord referred to earlier. Thanks for introducing me to this world. I look forward to reading the source story that inspired this twist.
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I've fallen so far out of the loop I'm not sure what's going on with the Dalen/Gavin love connection. Hmm, no matter the rest if the story has enough meat.
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I don't want to be nervous but I'm feeling wary about Gavin. His bonafides seem in order but his appearance is awfully convenient.
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Whew hoo Dalen...it's about time. Although I had hoped he and Bart would connect. C'est la vie.
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Dalen needs to get laid. Badly. I hope Bard Carl can help him out.
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Challenging issues facing the new administration. It will be an interesting read as they solve the problems facing them and save the land.
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Dalen's loyalty to his mother is sweet, though completely undeserved, but it's hard to write one's parents. It's was nice opening the chapter with Bart and ending it with Dalen's father.
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This is a big revelation, scary too.
