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Oddly enough Finley seemed to me a good name for a Dragon. But "Bomb" ?? A nickname from military jobs possibly but seems in common use by family. Maybe Bomb accidently blew something up as a child? An eclectic group (based on name origin): Finley - Irish/Scottish Uther - Welsh Michael - Hebrew Alfred - English Yannik - French Bomb

Perhaps it's not "folks", but rather one person who also has the ability to influence people or things. But with a darker purpose.

A curiosity. If he can bend people to his will, why would he need Helen's money for the bus? Why not just go to the station and have the clerk hand him a free ticket. Or hasn't he thought of that yet? Second, does the tattoo change from 40 to 39? (I know, a bit weird) 😅

So timeline wise we seem to have jumped from a chapter in November 2019 to one in December 2022. Before getting too deeply into the storyline perhaps the author could share some thoughts on how the story may continue? I mean at 73 there is always the nagging thought I might not outlast any more significant delays. 😁 That would be too bad since it's an intriguing plot!! I find i was already following the story but don’t remember a thing. (Not too surprising, I guess).

Hmmm... Don cuts off the money supply. Hopefully that triggers Robbie into checking out his Trust Fund balance. We can see how Don has been managing it for Robbie. 🤯

It should be interesting as the inductees are from the 1940's. So a 1940's education and world view based on 1940's technology. If they are going to be at all functional in the far future there must be some significant brain "uploading" of info and skills on the way.

This moving back and forth in time is making me more than a bit queasy. 😁. And I have to admit I'm only grasping "who is who" with half the chaacters at the moment. Thank God we are only 7 chapters in. Always up for a challenge, I think I'll go back a bit and see if I can get myself re-oriented.

I can see already I am going to like this story! And i'm already disliking the "corporate" takeover of society. I'd like to go there just to be disruptive, but I suppose I'd soon be offed or otherwise marginalized... 🙂

Thanks for another chapter. A couple of comments: 1. I think the school problem/detention thing is getting old. 2. Perhaps someone needs to have a bit of a heart-to-heart chat with Cindy and impress on her how lonely middle/old age can get when you wake up one day and realize your son/daughter is over 18, gone out on their own, and really don't want to maintain much of a relationship with you anymore.

Right. A 30 Foot Sailboat. Named after Robbies Mom. Elizabeth's Legacy? I really wish Robbie would check his investment account balance once in awhile.

I've really enjoyed this story and have been waiting for the third book for some time. I've not found it the easiest to drop back into. To do it proper justice I've decided to go back and re-read Veil of Shadow and then move into this one. Back in a bit. 😁

I can't help thinking bird poop and costumes don't mix all that well !! 🥺 Maybe they're potty trained. 😁

I'm afraid to read the next chapter in fear that she is dead.

That Lex is fast too given that he left his horse behind and still got to Syrin first............... 😁

A very enjoyable tale !! Thank you very much. There are dozens of paths for a sequel to meander down. Perhaps they will take in an stray? Would need to build an addition on the house, tho.... ⛪