Fae Briona
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Was hoping for an update on the xeno-phobe teacher and GSA in this chapter.
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Interesting end to the chapter. 😛
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So many things have happened to CJ in just one year, it's amazing he held it together as long as he has. And yep - known a few flamboyant men who's outrageous affectations are a mask to hide their fears.
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As someone else said, this is one time I can forgive CJ for thinking with his fists. Rational calm would not have been a realistic response to finding out douche had been planning on drugging and raping him. And looking forward to what happens with J-M. Sad that he was willing to go along with his cousin.
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"... whom they both doted on. Dallas knew many black children in the south were born in poverty, were raised in poverty, and died in poverty. Discrimination and lack of opportunity for the descendants of slaves was still common...." Who's Dallas? Or did the characters name change and that should be Flynn?
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Countin' on a Miracle
Fae Briona commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Countin' on a Miracle
I read it as something that probably wouldn't have happened if not for everything he'd been through the last several hours - on a normal day, when he wasn't so emotionally off-balance to begin with, he might have made a more responsible decision. But then he is 15 and male so..... lol -
CJ's conversation with his little brother makes it sound like bro is still not 100% filled in on why CJ moved.
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You'll Be Coming Down
Fae Briona commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in You'll Be Coming Down
Hm... it's not including the quote from headstall that I'd wanted to include. I agree with him on feeling the pain that Doc. is feeling. I've been in that place -- that last final hope that somehow, during this last final chance trip, you'll be able to reconnect to the person you think you still love. And the pain when you finally admit that's never going to happen. 😢 -
Nice upbeat end to a depressing middle. Thought the phone call was well written, and packed an emotional punch.
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The best families are the ones you make - not the ones you're born into.
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A couple of the comments mentioned "Lourdes". Her name hadn't been mentioned yet, so the comments made me go back through to see if I'd missed a paragraph or something. Found the answer when I started the next chapter. Original question was something along the lines of "who the heck is Lourdes?"
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[Edit: found answer to original question after opening of chapter 3; "Lourdes" isn't mentioned by name in this chapter or the 1st one - just "mom" or "his mother"
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Nasty extended relatives -- you just know they're behind it. Glad his plans have changed twice .
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Great start.
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Well that's.... ominous.
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Fae Briona commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
The grandfather.... some people are just evil, vindictive, and like making other people miserable in a failed effort to make them feel better about their own lives. -
TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Fae Briona commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Enjoying the story. Will be interesting to know what caused the estrangement. -
This actually through me completely out of the story. Interesting, but unlikely I will continue reading it.
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Interesting start. Would be nice to know if the "time rips" were something known or unknown before they launched.
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Oh the joy of parents..... <sigh> Family we make is almost always better than the family we're born with.
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Cute.
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Good to read this because when I read "The story-line kind of starts where 'Unexpected' is paused." I nearly closed the tab; but thought I'd check comments first.
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Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Fae Briona commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
I'm 6'2" and my first car was a blue honda civic. Watching me unfold from that thing was like watching someone get out of a clown car I was told. -
Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Fae Briona commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Oh man - hearing that you are the cause of someone nearly killing themselves can't be good. At least he knows he was an ass, and his reaction should have helped show Nessay's friends that his regret was real.
