Fae Briona
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A couple of the comments mentioned "Lourdes". Her name hadn't been mentioned yet, so the comments made me go back through to see if I'd missed a paragraph or something. Found the answer when I started the next chapter. Original question was something along the lines of "who the heck is Lourdes?"
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[Edit: found answer to original question after opening of chapter 3; "Lourdes" isn't mentioned by name in this chapter or the 1st one - just "mom" or "his mother"
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Nasty extended relatives -- you just know they're behind it. Glad his plans have changed twice .
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Great start.
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Well that's.... ominous.
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Fae Briona commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
The grandfather.... some people are just evil, vindictive, and like making other people miserable in a failed effort to make them feel better about their own lives. -
TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Fae Briona commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Enjoying the story. Will be interesting to know what caused the estrangement. -
This actually through me completely out of the story. Interesting, but unlikely I will continue reading it.
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Interesting start. Would be nice to know if the "time rips" were something known or unknown before they launched.
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Oh the joy of parents..... <sigh> Family we make is almost always better than the family we're born with.
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Cute.
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Good to read this because when I read "The story-line kind of starts where 'Unexpected' is paused." I nearly closed the tab; but thought I'd check comments first.
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Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Fae Briona commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
I'm 6'2" and my first car was a blue honda civic. Watching me unfold from that thing was like watching someone get out of a clown car I was told. -
Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Fae Briona commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Sore Nuts, A giant, and A yellow bug... Oh My!
Oh man - hearing that you are the cause of someone nearly killing themselves can't be good. At least he knows he was an ass, and his reaction should have helped show Nessay's friends that his regret was real. -
Chapter 1 - Who Says You Can't Go Home
Fae Briona commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Who Says You Can't Go Home
Great start. -
Chapter 18 Nature abhors a vacuum
Fae Briona commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 18 Nature abhors a vacuum
loved the chapter; with parents like that growing up it would be a miracle if the boy didn't have some behavioral issues -
Also glad Cas is ok. Loved Phen in this one - would be nice to see Phen back on his home planet and how his family interacts w. him and his large family.
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Love this. Feel bad for Jasper - he's going to need a lot of counseling; and a lot of love from his Bei - both emotionally and physically (which I don't think will be a problem).
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Hoping for the next chapter soon!
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Amazing story. The wonder of the boys and the loneliness of Difris really comes through.
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Cute, sweet, lovely, hot. Loved this chapter!
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Another good piece. For too many of us still, queer is trying to find a way to survive in neighborhood/city/state/country that wants us dead. Growing up instinctively twisting language (as subtly as possible) into gender-neutral phrases.
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Chapter 3: The Personals and I Envision Myself
Fae Briona commented on BDANR's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Personals and I Envision Myself
I have a very good friend who is young, black, and "articulate" -- and who was told (by his mother, of all people) that he "wasn't black enough" because of the way he spoke. We had a long conversation one day about his often feeling like he didn't have a group he belonged to. Most of his friends were white, but he often still felt like "the black guy" and he didn't really feel at home in the black community either, in part because of statements like the one his mother made and in part because of his sexuality. What Du Bois referred to as "double consciousness." -
Chapter 3: The Personals and I Envision Myself
Fae Briona commented on BDANR's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Personals and I Envision Myself
The pairing of the two makes a great contrast.
