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Fae Briona

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  1. Link to the " Snowflake Musical Outline" leads to a Page Not Found error.
  2. Glad there was a core of something decent in James that could be salvaged and nurtured.
  3. Have a feeling that Gramps isn't someone you'd want to have "disappointed" in you.
  4. Liking the story so far. Very intense chapter.
  5. Fae Briona

    04

    man... what a wonderful way to be distracted!!!
  6. Nice chapter, but it does seem a bit rushed from first meeting to "come home and meet the parents"
  7. Loving the story so far. I've known people like the main character - having been told they're worthless so many times they start to believe it. I hope he finds happyness (at least for awhile) w. Derrick.
  8. Fae Briona

    Story

    Wonderful and sweet.
  9. Fae Briona

    Chapter 1

    An interesting start to the story.
  10. Fae Briona

    Chapter 26

    A sequel / spinoff with the soon-to-be-ex thieves would be neat.
  11. Fae Briona

    Chapter 26

    slow updates but good are better than fast and bleh Loving the story.
  12. Fae Briona

    Chapter 22

    You have this wonderful ability to write scenes that are both hot and sentimental at the same time.
  13. Fae Briona

    Chapter 20

    Yea for Nix! (and the rest of the gang) And poor Sifta. Self-loathing from being constantly told you are less - that can be so destructive, and something a lot of us on here probably have some experience with. Either with ourselves or with our friends.
  14. Fae Briona

    Chapter 17

    I envision a long, slow, and very painful death for Khan before his body disappears.
  15. Fae Briona

    Chapter 13

    Scene w. Rios and Nix nearly made me cry. Such a change from hot to tender and sweet vulnerability.
  16. Fae Briona

    Chapter 12

    Yea..... makes you wonder just how those slavers got that close to him if their security is all that tight.
  17. Fae Briona

    Chapter 7

    Yep - 'delightfully naughty and playful' sums it up I think.
  18. Only on chapter 5 and hooked. Wonderful story and very vivid descriptions.
  19. Fae Briona

    Chapter 5

    Definitely a kinky little fox, isn't he?
  20. Fae Briona

    Chapter 4

    It does seem like Etsu is the only one that cares for Caspin (other than his parents, who's caring is rather, well, 'parental') And I can confirm that the last born will ALWAYS be the baby to mothers.
  21. Fae Briona

    Chapter 2

    Will be interesting to see if the views of the Kaynen are lingering species-ism or if there is something more too them.
  22. Fae Briona

    01

    An adorable start to the story.
  23. A bit gruesome, but I'd agree w. Gabriella -- I'd have to see it to really know it was over with.
  24. Possibly the wrong spot but seems like a good one: What I'm seeing most on my notifications is "Author posted chapter # to chapter #." There are a few that say "...chapter # to story" but most do not. That is making it very difficult to catch updates to the stories I'm following, if I'm following the author as well.
  25. Fae Briona

    Chapter 1

    Great start to the story. I'm an odd one with a body temperature that is normally just under 97. Had nurses argue with me when I say that 99 for me is a fever.
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