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  1. Puppster
    URGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Just when I thought finally!! Now I have to wait another week. I know deep down Cray still loves his dad, and will want to meet him, and with Bob and Drew and Spike behind him, things will work out.
  2. Puppster
    It's great to hear some of the old names popping up. I think we might be in for a quick cross over meeting. I think that chapter could be Splashing in the Desert Sands. I'm very glad that Spike and Cray seem to be on the same wave length as far as their budding relationship is concerned. I wonder if his friends will pick up the change in Spike and Cray.
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    I don't think we'll see Cray and Spence getting together. He doesn't like that line of work. We've seen in the past that Cray had a crush on Spike, but he wanted him out of the business. I don't know if I can wait till chapter 13 for paths to cross Jack!
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    Hey Jack, It's good to be back in Vegas baby! I do have to agree with everyone else. Michael sure turned out to be a royal prick. If I was Cray, I would have gotten up and walked out and left Michael to fend for himself to get back to school. Glad to see Bob and Drew are there to support him, and their family bond is still growing and getting stronger. I know they'll need it for the upcoming things you have planned. Keep up the good work.
  5. Puppster
    Nice plug for your other stories mate The winter thaw has come, warm weather, green on the trees. The ending was very interesting one Jack. Like the others I almost thought they would all get away on the jet. Even after all the hell that went on and Rory setting up Thad, you did kinda feel bad for him missing out on his happy ending. It was very upright of him for protecting the two brothers. I can't wait for Vegas though. Ever since the ending with Cray's dad. It's just a build up for a wonderful moment. If you need a beta reader!!!! Sign me up
  6. Puppster
    Another great chapter Jack. I could almost need sunblock I do love the choice of background staff uniforms. How do I get an invite to one of these parties ? It's been raining all day here, and I could use some swim time in the sun.
  7. Puppster
    Anyone else have a feeling that maybe pvt Johnson is the scorpion ? We don't know his first name, and I just keep getting this bad bad feeling when ever he's around.
  8. Puppster
    Wow Jack, Another great chapter! I thought Andy was toast, but I know better from you I knew that switch was something. Lets hope it was on..
  9. Puppster
    I think maybe Eric needs a long talk with Keither and Jensen with (scary i know) Jon. Who else knows the other side better then those two Am I the only one other then the mercenaries touched by the Father Son reunion with the General and his son ? I know their in for a tough way to come, but still, I'm happy that the General got to see his son again.
  10. Puppster
    Wow Jack, glad to be pulled into their world again I just got that Andy was a nod to Drew I like this thrilling turn to the danger. Reminds me of the wild times of Las Vegas. Glad to hear that one will be comming soon, I've been waiting forever to get back to my favorite Vegas guys. Oh and this Chicago boy would be glad to have you back to the windy city!
  11. Puppster
    Well, if their not boyfriends, then I'm rooting for Jansen and Eric to have a nice dance at the wedding I just have this feeling about those two.
  12. Puppster
    Yeah, but to much has gone bad for Pete. It's time for some FAIRY magic!
  13. Puppster
    It just makes me angry for Pete, I know he's not in control of his emotions. I know he's afraid and gonna let it happen, but deep deep deep down I know something will happen. He'll grab Rob and rip his balls off, or Cameron will come knocking on the door. Come on Pete!
  14. Puppster
    I thought the sidebar was new. Looks good and makes it easy to access all your stuff. I also really liked this chapter. The dynamic between the guys and Eric is really nice. It's good that Eric is getting some new friends outside his brothers and Brandon. It's already clear that Jansen is comfortable with Eric as a friend, especially after he helped out at the club. I think Kieth just needs to get past this whole 'employer' thing and they'd all end up as great friends.
  15. Puppster
    I love what the General did. And I was too expecting Eric to yank down those boxers. Oh well, guess we'll have to wait for the strip show to find out. As for the evil cliff at the end of the chapter I think I for see two outcomes to George finding out about their secret strip show: 1. Slezey George sees what an idot he's been with the boys and sees how hot their show really is and takes on their ideas cause he's greedy or 2. Slezey George sees the flyer, finds out what happens and gives the boys the boot. Though that could be a good thing for them, maybe a kick start with this strip show to opening their own club with hot acts.
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    yeah, but I'm thinkin we'll be seeing more of Jacob, cause he's sure curious about Andy
  17. Puppster
    Thank goodness for pain bringing Brandon to his senses before it became more then just some torn jeans he'd need to explain. I'm glad things ended up with a good mood, but it's the calm before the storm that I fear. I was also pretty moved by Eric's true pain and regret at what he did. We now know Eric is definitely on a tightrope on that fence and he could fall either way soon.
  18. Puppster
    I love your writing and surprises , but when I realized it was the scar at the end of the chapter I just had to groan. Should I get some crackers now for that cheesy tactic :wacko:
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    I wonder if Bran isn't partially going to the consoling to also help himself with his own past. And like the others on here, Duncan, you are the master of capturing emotions. I can feel the longing, the hurt, the pain of all your characters. Though it is nice to have some happy moments in there to make us smile after all the tears! HINT HINT
  20. Puppster
    I don't like how the bad guys keep getting away. Dimitri keeps escaping to easily. Someone, anyone, just kill his a** already! If I have to sit through one more of his assassin monologue thoughts I think I'll kill MYSELF.
  21. Puppster
    Wow, so many things running through my head. Most of which would be inappropriate to post here. Lets just say that I almost yelled out the F bomb. Didn't stop me from chanting it over and over again in my head with the name CJ attached. And of course I had to take the goat bate and read the first bit of 44. I reserve all further judgment for CJ till the end of this story! Master of Evil
  22. Puppster
    I voted yes, I know ya'll hate me for that, but, it seems as if CJ has absolutely no love for the boys anymore. I'm sure Dimitri will end up dead, but only at the hands of the Scar as a means to tie all lose ends up.
  23. Puppster
    Gary, I just went back and re-read the first part of chapter one. It's not mentioned Jack as being Cray's dad by name, just that his real father 'abandoned' them. Now we know the truth and I for one am so look forward to whats going to happen. Jack doesn't know Cray is there just a lucky happenstance that he's being transfered. Who knows, maybe his great skills will come on the radar of Bob and Drew to lure him to the Barcelona.
  24. Puppster
    Wow Jack. Always an amazing story with a great ending and openings on the horizon. I can't wait for part 3. I know we are in for some SERIOUS roller coaster ups and downs with the prelude you ended with. Get Part 3 out soon. Sorry about this but, your title for part 3 just made me think of something funny: "Like the sands through the hour glass, these are the days of our Las Vegas lives" I never did put two and two together when I started reading this that It Stays in Vegas was part one, I'm glad I went back and re-read it.
  25. Puppster
    Wow, and when I was reading 19 I thought life was settling down for the boys of Vegas. Maybe the end of a great story. And then BAM the fast action of the hits. I love the way you go from semi-calm to action. I'm worried about Cray now. We know he should be safe, but this new mystery date of Michaels father, would be easy to try and get Cray to get to Bob and Drew and Nick. I'm glad the boys know Tai Chi and can take care of any problem that may come up!
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