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  1. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB III

    No matter what Ty and Randy may think, CJ and Owen are no dummies.
  2. The end of November approached and the Prospect Street house was again full of friends and relatives. CJ and Owen asked their realtor, Dasan Turner, to walk them through the house they were trying to purchase in the Capitol Hill neighborhood one more time. The owners had removed all remaining furniture and personal items; the place was empty and ready to be shown off to the Illinois and Florida relatives. Tyler Scott flew in from Chicago in late summer and coordinated his inspection of the p
  3. Some of our more casual members or visitors may not realize most of Gay Authors' staff are also authors. Or that @Renee Stevens, who I work closely with on these blog entries, is pregnant and will be taking some time off when Baby J's born. I'm running out of questions and she suggested something I'd like to do before she takes her break: An entire Ask an Author focused on staff authors. Let's make it happen. I have a question for @Cia I'll be sending her later today. How about y'all pitch in? Send me a question for any of our site administrators or moderators who have stories on GA and I'll push to get them answered and published next month.
  4. And we’re back! My inventory of questions is rapidly diminishing and unless I get some new ones, I may start making some up for myself. You wouldn’t want that would you? Pick an author we haven’t featured, ask a question, and let’s see what they have to say. Aren’t you curious about what type of sneakers someone wears? Or maybe how they go about naming chapters or characters? Anything except for XXX matters is fair game. @Hunter Thomson has agreed to a return engagement. Our politician/jock from the Great White North was gracious enough to share a bit more about himself. • Your stories tend to have a sporting theme or background, is this a reflection of your own experiences in high school? In other words, were you, or are you still a sportsman or like most of us, an armchair fan? • The short answer is yes, this is a reflection of my experiences in high school. I started playing baseball when I was four years old, and I retired from the sport once my high school days were over, as I did not make the cut on the university team I tried out for. I spend most of my curling now, and I've been doing that for the past fifteen years. There's no plans to write a curling based story right now, I don't think there's enough of a market for it either on Gay Authors or in the world at large, although I suppose if I did write a gay curling romance it would be the best-seller (only seller?) in its field. I'm actually heading to my third regional playdowns the December 9-11 weekend, so I still play rather competitively. • You can find Hunter’s stories here: https://www.gayauthors.org/author/hunter-thomson/ • • • • • @northie also returns for her second appearance in the rebooted Ask an Author. If you haven’t been following her Never Too Late, I suggest you check it out. Fairly well written, the story’s a look at the budding friendship between an older gay man and a younger one. No, you pervs, it’s not about sex. It’s about the plight of a closeted man in the sunset of his life. • Short stories seem to be your forte and you definitely have the knack, but it can be a challenge for a lot of authors to tell a complete story in a limited amount of words. I think that it takes a certain amount of discipline to write short stories; are you naturally quite a disciplined person? • Thanks for the compliment. Am I self-disciplined? Yes and no … If I'm working to any kind of deadline (at home or in my job), then, yes, I can be disciplined in how I operate. Otherwise, I'm dreadful. 'Tomorrow' is one of my favourite words. I aim to write something every day, whether that's original writing, writing up, editing, or otherwise making alterations. As for the stories, mine vary wildly in length. The shortest is 500 words ('An Uncommon Daisy') and the longest is something over 16,000 ('The Bard's Tale'). When there is an actual word limit imposed (as some of Cia's writing games do), that certainly adds self-discipline into the equation – the story can't just run its course, but must be planned, then contained, refined, reduced as necessary. • You can find northie’s stories here: https://www.gayauthors.org/author/northie/ • • • • • @MacGreg continues the trend. This is the second time we hear from him in the past few months. Previously, we heard about his story Dissonance. Mac’s one of those gifted authors who share stories and poems and this time around he talks about his poetry. • You write both prose and poetry. What do you feel that poetry does for you as an artist/author that prose doesn't? • Good question. Writing prose is creating a story. It involves building a scene, developing characters, pulling the reader into the moment and letting them stay there for a while as the plot unfolds. Like most authors, writing prose gives me a platform to express myself and create fictional people, places, and experiences to share with others. Poetry is a similar outlet for me – but the impetus for writing it comes from a very different place. It derives from a deeper, unconscious source and is much more emotion-driven. It allows me to express myself in a less-structured way than prose (I tend to forego poetry patterns like rhyme, line length, and meter - sorry, poets). Because of this free-form style, I’m able to expel what I’m feeling in short order, sort of like purging something. Get it out, move on, and maybe a few readers will find value in it along the way. • You can find Mac’s work here: https://www.gayauthors.org/author/macgreg/ • • • • • @AC Benus takes the prize, this is the third time he gets featured. I may be renaming the blog Ask AC if this continues. Not only is the man from San Francisco a prolific author, his fans are prolific inquisitors. • Among the 58 stories and poems that you have posted on GA are a few of screenplays. You have a done a remarkable job, but what made you decide to attempt these in the first place and how difficult were they to write? • Like most of us, I was exposed to Moby-Dick in high school, and lucky for me, one of the scenes we studied in detail is the overtly homoerotic “Counterpane” chapter. This is where the two heroes of the book wind up in bed and consummate a marriage as true and inspiring as any in literature. So years later, one day browsing the shelves of my local used book seller, I happened on an edition of the book Melville published right after Moby-Dick. As I was expecting an enjoyable read, I was completely befuddled by Pierre, or the Ambiguities. It was dense – so dense, I felt like a dunce – and I gave up trying to read it, even though I hate to lose any battle. After a while, I settled on a way to conquer Pierre; I would read Melville’s novels from the beginning. I found a copy of Typee (published when he was 24) and was off. If I thought Moby-Dick was open about its portrayal of same-sex love, I was blown away by the male couple in Typee. The book was a phenomenon when originally published, and Melville feared he’d only be remembered for having written it. As far as my filmscripts on GA, I suppose I’m still surprised when people tell me screenplays So, long story short, I did read all of author’s novels in sequence until I was finally able to return to Pierre. My strategy worked, as I could now breeze through this very challenging book. But after I was finished, I wanted to bring the remarkable sequence to life for others. That’s when I hit upon doing screenplays, and organizing them so they tell Melville’s own story, from being a ship’s ‘boy’ at age 19, until the devastatingly negative reviews came in for Moby-Dick’s open and far-too homoerotic love story. Are they difficult to write? I would say they are a fun challenge to write. Most films unfold over a sequence of 8 to 10 large sections, or Parts. Once you get in the mindset of seeing tales developed this way, it helps you structure novels you wish to write as well. There are several online guides on how to start, but be aware, there is an almost Byzantine code of do-and-don’ts to learn and keep in your head. Nonetheless, I’d recommend the exercise to any writer looking to expand their abilities. As far as my filmscripts on GA, I suppose I’m still surprised when people tell me screenplays are difficult to read. They are like any other form: you start at the top and read your way down the page. Scripts are meant to be evocative too, so you should be able to see the scene as if watching a movie unfurl. • You can read some of those countless posts here: https://www.gayauthors.org/author/ac-benus/ • • • • • We’ll see you back next month but only if you send me enough questions to pass along.
  5. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 21

    Way too short. Now I know how my readers feel at times.
  6. Dude, I'm so proud of you. You took my half-baked comments, ran with them, and did a great job. You're a good writer. As for dear old dad, I feel sorry for him. He's out of his depth and doesn't seem to have the tools to deal with his family. Much less his own PTSD. Keep it up, buddy.
  7. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    I'm sure CJ will be on his best behavior, but if anyone could make him lose his cool during his own wedding, it may be Damien.
  8. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Thank you. You've described exactly what I was trying to do with Damien. Unfortunately, he'll be back.
  9. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Maybe it was too subtle for most readers to catch, but Ken and Damien were part of a continuing arc. In the last chapter, CJ lost it and the only thing he regretted was it leading to his dad resigning. During the photo shoot, he felt regret and apologized to Ken and the photographer. By the time we get to Damien, likely influenced by the surroundings and the company, he used words instead of fists. Of course, Ozzie keeping him on a short leash may have had something to do with it.
  10. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Mine too! I was reminded of it while traveling last week. No 5-star hotels for me.
  11. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Thank you, sir!
  12. My personal guidelines- If you expose yourself, someone will laugh. If you share your art, someone will hate it. Write, paint, draw, photograph to please yourself. If others like it so much the better but you're the one person you must please. Accept criticism with grace. You don't have to agree with it, but there's no need to chew someone's head off because they express their opinion. No matter how wrong they may be
  13. Carlos Hazday

    Leopard Hunt

    Nice surprise to wake up to! Welcome back, Leopards.
  14. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB I

    I'll leave my outlines to somebody in case I don't live long enough. CJ established he's stubborn about certain things in the incident Cesar mentions. He refused to say the pledge of allegiance because of the words 'under God.' I thought his reaction might be similar with the anthem thing but he only became militant about it because of Trump's comments. I also liked the contrast with how rah-rah patriotic he can be about his support for the military. I keep trying to flesh out a character who isn't one-dimensional and who doesn't fit a specific mold. I'm working on a blog entry on friendship and I think you might enjoy reading it. Look for it most likely on Monday.
  15. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Chipper, eh? I'm so glad all my boys have their own rooting section. I haven't spent the time describing him but I envision him as handsome and obviously he's successful. He's older and Cristina may be searching for a daddy figure. He might be great in bed, Who knows why we fall for certain people. I've fallen for the wrong one myself even when my friends knew all along they were jerks.
  16. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    I totally forgot about that move. My, my, art imitating life imitating art. She was good, I'm looking at the "check" right now. I brought it home with me. Damien seems to hit a nerve with a lot of people. The model guy was just a horny toad (handsome and built but a toad.) If Myr, AJ, and crew ever get done with the updating and bug smashing maybe we can get a few more emoji.
  17. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    I thought you liked it when I spanked you. Come on, give it your best shot. I can handle it. ( insert the old dancing emoji)
  18. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB I

    Commentary has been interesting on the first two chapters
  19. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB I

    It's good to be back. We had technical difficulties last Friday. I initially wrote that line to elicit one of my editore's entertaining, smart-assed remarks. Then I realized it could easily be used as a synonym for fist-bump and decided to keep it. Congratulations! You were the first one to notice. Tells me your mind must reside in the same low place mine does.
  20. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB I

    Crap! I'm exhausted just thinking about plotting and writing all that. Imagine if I really had to do it! There won't be anything that over the top taking place. The last wedding I wrote was when the dads got hitched and it was a bare-bones chapter. I'm planning a bit more for this one, but I think flying the entire guest list to a private island in the Bahamas will have to suffice. There were technical difficulties last Friday
  21. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    LOL, sounds as if you've dealt with a Damien or two in your life!
  22. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Sorry you didn't find it interesting, Tony. Hopefully, future chapters will be more to your liking.
  23. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    LOL I'm liking the fact what I envisioned Damien as is coming through loud and clear. Thanks for sticking around, Wes.
  24. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    Damien has no idea who he's dealing with. He's so fixated on himself he can't conceive a 'kid' can handle money with grace.
  25. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB II

    I'm getting the feeling Damien's not going to be popular if he returns
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