Carlos Hazday

Damn technology! I'd replace the iPod with a phone or streaming service during revisions. LOl Otherwise, this was pretty clean. I'm in beta mode!

@JeffreyL Guess I accomplished my goal. I wanted something touching but not a tear jerker. I dislike reading those so I won't write them LOL Misty eyed is good. I do it often while reading my own stuff!.

@JeffreyL The Goodson and Hill stories were two I enjoyed and tried to give a shout out to. Unfortunately, I was never able to establish contact the way I did with McNally. Maybe one day someone will read CJ and tell him about it.

@JeffreyL I'm still hoping one day I can have CJ and Owen meet Tyson and Mike in a short story. My problem's been the CJ series is very time specific and it could screw up McNally's timeline if he ever decides to write a third installment. Maybe when they're all old and retired LOL

Someone's reading the story again and leaving comments which leads me to read a few others each chapter. Yours made me smile. Ya think I gave CJ someone to date or do I need to keep looking?

@JeffreyL Wait until Autumn and we'll add a few more characters to that list LOL

@JeffreyL Thank you! Summer was my first ever creative fiction. I published a few other things on GA while it was being edited but it's still the first thing I wrote. A lot (and I mean A LOT) of the cleanliness and clarity of the story owes its thanks to Mann. The current chapters he's editing are about twice as long as these early ones but the corrections and comments he leaves are about half as much as they used to be. Let's be honest, I had no idea what I was doing! He saw something in my writing and offered help. Without him, this may not have been going on for as long as it has.

Damn! I went back and read it over and found two things to change. I really need to start doing a little cleaning in Summer.

@JeffreyL CJ confronting the biker is still one of my favorite scenes. He was so naive! The body and the emotions were there but he had so much to learn. And he needed to relax! So uptight in that scene.

@JeffreyL Chatri will make several appearances in the remainder of Georgetown. He was the first friend CJ made in DC and even though he's older they mesh well together. I remember the Ritchie call was tough to write. I wanted to show the love between them without getting all mushy since after all, they were teen males not prone to showing a lot of emotion. I have a brother who's 13 years younger so I used some of my experiences with him when writing about Ritchie. The worst one was teaching him how to drive stick shift. I didn't put CJ quite through the same torture LOL

I'd like to remind everyone I'm looking for questions for the authors of your favorite GA romance story. Help me prepare a Valentine's Day (month) Ask An Author feature!

Someone privately objected to my use of a racial slur in Hunting Season and a couple of readers about the use of a demeaning term aimed at women in particular in an early chapter of the CJ series. Both are words people use in daily speech and my stories are based on real life. My reply in all cases has been the use of those words was warranted at the time. If someone wants to think I'm glorifying or normalizing them, they should hang out with a bunch of guys (outside the brie and chardonnay crowd.) I've heard worse. Considering my character stuck a gun in the face of the racist guy, I think I made my opinion of anyone using racist insults quite clear.

That's NOT an author's responsibility. Unless they choose to make it part of their story. You have to realize this is coming from someone who has dealt with myriad social issues in my own stories. But that has been my choice. We write for many reasons and not all of them need be education. Hell, I had a gay couple talk about their sexual practices and PrEP with a gay 15 yo in an early chapter and there was pushback from a couple of readers. I explained what I wanted to accomplish and that the conversation was realistic in the setting. But I kept on writing what I wanted to write. I featured safe sex, multiple partners and even had the 15yo forget about condoms once when he screwed a guy against the wall. Some ignored that little episode, others wanted more. He supported Hillary Clinton but I have readers who backed Trump and stuck it out. I always tried to portray an honest scenario because that's what I wanted to write. We preach to new authors they should write the story they want to tell and not worry about negative comments. Unless they're of a technical nature, of course. LOL I'll paste a warning on a story if I'm required to but will do so reluctantly. Reminds me too much of those IMO idiotic Parental Warnings on music Tipper Gore championed years ago.

Warnings suck. This is just more liberal political correctness. If anyone finds something they don't like in a story, they should stop reading. And if as an author I don't like comments by readers I should stop publishing. What the hell happened to personal responsibility and thinking for ourselves?

id you read the story on GA the first time? If you caught it elsewhere it may account for the lack of comments. Not to worry, my friend. You're making up for it this time around

Although I'm constantly reading bits and pieces of the story, I've yet to sit down and revisit the entire story. I think I need to set a weekend aside and binge on CJ. I'm so glad you notice the change in our hero. I've tried to show him learning from personal experiences aided by guidance from his fathers and their friends. Had the character remained static, it would have been a much poorer tale, this is, after all, a coming-of-age story.

Guess that was a bug that's been squashed LOL

@AC BenusThe title and or any images associated with a story can be incorporated into a banner. Each story's allowed to have it's own and I've used the feature instead of creating covers since the upgrade. Maybe that can help with part of what you want to do. @Myr May not like this, but you could pre-load the entire story. Last time I did it, unpublished chapters showed up on the table of contents but with a clockface next to them to show they were scheduled to go live at a later date.

I get the feeling old bugs from the conversion and new ones are across most platforms.

@AC Benus You're welcome. It's fun except for the begging-for-questions part. LOL

@Myr This morning I posted a new story and the first chapter and set it to publish at a later date. The story shows up at the bottom of the Forums page as the latest one on GA. Is this how it's meant to be? Shouldn't it show up there after it goes live? Am I or the staff going to be bombarded with questions about readers being unable to open it?

Nope. As many as you like. If I can't fit all questions and answers in next month's feature I'll save them for future use. I'm trying to build an inventory and feature as many different authors as possible.

Thanks, Y'all! For those of you who like this feature, I'd like you to think about your favorite love story on GA. Let's find out something about its author. Send me a question and I'll pass it along and feature the responses on the next blog entry.

Happy New Year! We are back and this month our blog entry focuses on poets. Figures my first themed entry would be about a subject I rarely understand and often avoid. However, I’m here to pass your questions along, not to editorialize on what I like. So let’s get to it. • • • • • This month’s first question is for asamvav111. Hailing from India, he’s an example of GA’s worldwide reach and membership. Don’t you all think GA should underwrite my travels so I can ask future questions in person? A member since 2012, this young man posted his first collection of poems in 2017 and has quickly garnered a solid fan base. • There is a certainty and deep conciousness that comes from your poems. What does poetry do for you? Is there a poet that you recommend we all read? • Poetry as an art has so many facets, it is difficult to choose one. In my poetry, I always try to capture a mental state or an emotional response & give it flesh. Poetry begins with poesy, the act of creation itself. Everyone of us are creating our own reality, commissioning our own funhouse of mirrors, every day, every moment. I just use words to give others a glimpse into the one inside me. I think, we should read every material we can get our hands on, because it helps develop our own art & our own critique. Beside all the old masters like Wordsworth, Whitman, Baudelaire, Frost etc, I would suggest to read our very own AC Benus, Parker Owens, Mikiesboy. And also join us in Live-Poets-Society where we have wonderful discussions on every possible aspect of poetry & showcase our work. • • • • • Asamvav111 recommends three GA poets so let’s hear from them. Mikiesboy’s one of those members everyone seems to like. His friendly and thoughtful disposition when dealing with others has endeared him to many. Adept at poetry and prose, I’m not sure how he finds the time to write, edit, and beta read for others, and participate in his Drop in Center forum thread. • Why does free verse appeal more than anything else? • Free verse may sound free but it isn't, there are still poetic rules that apply. There must be flow, meter is important even in free verse, and it must be written poetically. You can't just write down sentences and call it a free verse poem. Why do i choose it? Well, it suits my mood normally. I don't always want or even like rhymes. One exception is the Rubaiyat, it's a form i really enjoy writing and i like the rhyming pattern of : a-a-b-a; b-b-c-b; c-c-d-c; d-d-e-d; e-e-f-e. This is a real challenge. But free verse lets my thoughts flow more than other forms that are more restrictive. • • • • • Parker Owens asked me to beta read one of his stories earlier this year and I can’t thank him enough for it. It was a pleasure to do so and I discovered Parker was open to criticism and suggestions unlike some authors. However, his writing is not limited to prose; his poetry collections have earned him the respect of other poets as we saw in the first entry on this blog. • Do you think your math skills and musical ability contribute to your innate sense of form and meter in your poems? Your ability to look at your surroundings and use mathematical and scientific principles as allegories to love and life is quite remarkable and definitely unique. Do you look at an object or read a mathematical concept and see the poetry within? Or do you have a poem in your head and look for a concept to fit it? • I wish there were an easy description of how music and mathematics relate to what I write. Often, it has their interplay that conveys to me a sense of balance and sound to each line or couplet. If I listen to what gets scrawled in my notebook, I hope to hear something as compelling as my favorite music, or as true as any axiom. Frequently, I am taken by the sound of a scientific or mathematical word, and a poem gets built around that. Words like implicit differentiation and lanthanide series have their own rhythms and stories to tell. A few times, someone has dared me to write about a concept that was foreign to me - such challenges have proved irresistible. Often enough, it is what I see my students reviewing in their study halls that plants those words in my mind. Thank you for asking! • • • • • We visit again with AC Benus in this installment. Last month he answered a question about his Christmas at Famous-Barr series; in this entry, he addresses his poetry. Poems are more prominent on the site than when I first joined and a lot of the credit goes to AC. He’s encouraged, prodded, and mentored poets to the point they have become a vibrant subset of the community. • You write sonnets beautifully. What advice would you give someone starting out? Are you self-taught? If yes, what did you do to become such a good poet? • The answer to am I self-taught is yes. As for advice, I’d say listen to your heart and what moves you. Poetry is all around us at all times, in song lyrics, in jingles, in the lessons we learn in school, but maybe one day something will break through and make you go ‘wow.’ That happened to me the first year of high school. There was something about Keats’ Ode to a Grecian Urn, and particularly the concluding lines "Beauty is truth, truth beauty – that is all we know on earth, and all we need to know," that made me wake up and want to write myself. So I’d look for that moment and that piece of poetry, in any style or form, that makes you go “Oh…”. Learn from it and figure out what exactly the poet did to shake you up. After that, read as much as you can, and get busy writing. Thanks for a great question, and I will post a longer answer in Live-Poets Society, so please look for it. • • • • • That’s it for this month. Hope you all had a wonderful Holiday Season and the New Year brings you health and peace. Remember to send me your questions so we can discover more about our authors, their lives, and how they craft their stories. How about we focus on the authors of your favorite love stories next time around?

Somehow missed replying when you posted your comment. You're the only who caught that slip of the tongue! It'll all be made clear in a few weeks.