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  1. Carlos Hazday
    Harley will be out of the picture for a couple of years. Chipper will be away for at least 4 and may not return to DC. Brad will be in basic training by the time CJ starts college and who knows when or if he'll return. They still have about 6 months together so let's see what happens.
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    @dughlas Take a look at one of my previous responses. This was the third NYE I've written for the story and the next one is in rough outline form already. I didn't want Ritchie to be a clone of CJ so I've tried to bring him along slowly. Hiwever, after 6 months with his brother, the dads, and the Squad, I think he may be coming out of his shell. For the record: I do not write cliffhangers and I do not write happy, sappy romance stuff. Love ya back, mate
  3. Carlos Hazday
    @tabaqui All in a day's work for your friendly, neighborhood, supplier. I like addicts like you.
  4. Carlos Hazday
    @BlindAmbition Travis as a gym bunny ski bum was exactly what I was shooting for. Glad that worked. I wanted the chapter to be fun and full of humor and having CJ and Randy start it off on the plane while still on the ground in Chicago set the stage for it. The relationship between those two is similar to the one I have with my brothers. Our inappropriate comments always drove our mother crazy. CJ spent NYE 2013 with Owen; 2014 with Ritchie, and now 2015 with both of them. Sydney, Miami, and now Vail. Not sure if he'll ever welcome the new year in Washington, I already know he'll be out of town again in December 2016!
  5. Carlos Hazday
    I suspected a few readers would have some sort of reaction to the final scene so imagine my dismay when I was unable to post the chapter at its regular time. I admit I was curious as to what the comments would be like
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    Kissus interruptus? Sounds like the title of a story or poem! I don't want to bring to much attention to the final scene, I'm afraid of what @spikey582 may have to say! But it was interesting reading over the chapters when CJ and Owen first met this past week. It took Owen 2 days to tell CJ how he felt and it took CJ two years. I kept trying to put it off but the damn kid wouldn't listen to me. I blame CJ for the sappy stuff.
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    Although there were plenty of non-stop flights between Washington and Denver, César and Brett booked one with a stop at Chicago’s O’Hare International Airport. The short layover allowed Randy and Tyler to join them. Traveling together avoided the possibility of weather related delays leaving part of the group stranded. As soon as Randy walked into the Business Class section, CJ―sitting in the last row next to Owen―began humming “Here Comes The Bride.” Brett, Rod, and a couple of the other g
  8. Carlos Hazday
    First! Awesome news and a well deserved promotion. Welcome to the purple, tim. Fantastic addition to the club. Giant hugs and please tell a certain cop to give you a kiss on my behalf.
  9. Carlos Hazday
    Best wishes for a great day, bud!
  10. Carlos Hazday
    You've been evicted from the purple and have moved up in the world, Adi. Get used to it!
  11. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks for sharing your experience, bud. It's interesting to see how events sometimes make us aee things in a different light. Since the CJ series is firmly rooted in real life, I like to highlight what I think are worthy organizations. The Names Project's one of them and I'm glad so many readers have had a positive reaction to its inclusion in this chapter!
  12. Carlos Hazday
    LOL You and your broken legs! Next chapter's all about Colorado so you may still get your cheap thrill!
  13. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, Bill. Ritchie seems to have adapted so far and is fitting in well. Considering he's surrounded by older guys most of the time (much like CJ was when he first moved to DC) we can only hope he benefits from those relationships as much as his brother did.
  14. Carlos Hazday
    You haven't heard my definition of 'good boy'!
  15. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, Tor!
  16. Carlos Hazday
    With every birthday I've tried to show some growth in CJ. Some of it is based on experience (like dealing with all his connections and being able to interact with a president. Some is pushed on him by Cesar and Brett. They've been slowly integrating him into the family finances. I wish at 18 my family had had a net worth over 1B too! Not sure I would have dealt with so much money as well as CJ does but his actions are based on a couple of friends of mine who had a similar outlook on money. Next chapter's pure sillyness. What else can you expect from a bunch of young men spending a week in Colorado skiing.
  17. Carlos Hazday
    I enjoy all reader feedback. Positive, negative, and sarcastic! There was a lot in this chapter, wasn't there? It's one of the reason I split the month over two chapters. The next half will be dedicated entirely to the Colorado ski trip. EDIT: Yes, the Forbes Grill is a real place! And think of an older, gray-haired Richard Gere as the maitre'd
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    Although many wealthy individuals use charitable foundations to benefit themselves, neither Cesar nor Brett are that money hungry so it follows their son would adopt their views. They have enough money on their own they don't need to milk the foundation. I'm hoping Harley got laid and it helps relax him.
  19. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, bud!
  20. Carlos Hazday
    Oh, oh.... did you miss the line where CJ tells the dads Harley was out on a date? LOL Next chapter we find out the plans for the graduating seniors.
  21. Carlos Hazday
    Glad you enjoyed that! It was emotional and we had a little drama but next chapter will be all fun and games. I mean, it's going to be a party! Funny I don't exactly recall my 18th birthday but then again I didn't go skiing with a bunch of hunky men. Hell I was so closeted back then I couldn't see daylight hiding behind all those clothes.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    November 2015

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in November 2015

    ROTFLMAO I did drag it out, didn't I? But realistically the reveal had to wait until he had gotten used to having Ritchie around on a full time basis. I think that was a bigger factor than Owen, the dads, or the comforts of home. Even if the latter is a big attraction compared to sharing a tiny dorm room!
  23. Carlos Hazday
    All that damn matchmaking! I swear they're as bad as bloody readers!
  24. Carlos Hazday
    LOL- Some of my foreshadowing can be obscure. I originally thought about Yale and Clinton would have still been appropriate. But then I realized CJ wouldn't want to leave DC. Even if he doesn't say it out loud, I don't think the three years he would have had with the dads when he started college would have been enough for him. Check out the images of the quilt I posted in my gallery.
  25. Carlos Hazday
    You liked the cow thingy? I've been waiting forever to use the line! I first volunteered for the Quilt back in 1992 when there was a big display in Miami. Since then I've been around it a few times and each time it's as emotional an experience as the first time. Never seen it in its entirety, missed a trip to DC when I got into a huge argument with my ex. That must have been an incredible experience.
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