mutch71
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I loved this story, but I just can't believe the result?? You both loved each other so much! You could've made it if you both tried.... long distance relationships do work if both parties will work on it. Sounds like you both just gave up on each other after the decision was made
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Ahhh cliffhangers suck!
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WOW, great chapter, great story!
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What a great uplifting story. Sure the beginning had some awful moments of hurt, betrayal and horrific beatings, not to mention the lonely and sometimes terrifying trip stefan took while he found himself a home. Meeting Zander and their group of friends and a loving home with Zanders family was uplifting and a story worth reading, one I would enjoy following.... Seeing how they make their life on their farm, with their new charge & what becomes of them as a family. Thank you. Matt G.
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Wow! More! More! More! Please :-) A great story mixed with fantasy and drama. Like everyone else, I thought this chapter was a bit rushed.... But, I'm so looking forward to the epilogue. I agree too, that a second series showing a mix of both Jonas & Lu's worlds could be very interesting. Thanks, Matt G.
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Chapter 15 – Justice Really is Blind
mutch71 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 15 – Justice Really is Blind
Wow! What a great read & an ending I never expected. I wish for the day that parents will teach their children nothing but love, perhaps one day people will lean to understand tolerance and understanding and treat everyone as equals. -
Sometimes You Get What You Need
mutch71 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Sometimes You Get What You Need
Great story Sacha - I wanted it to go on for so much more :-) -
WOW! What a fantastic read CJ :-) From start to finish you had me hooked! I couldn't put it down & every spare moment I had was used to read your fantastic tale. Being a sandgroper, I loved all the bits about my home state & the Aussie humour from Shane. Great story. Thanks
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Another great story :-) I'm always looking forward to your next adventure. Thanks!
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Wow! Excellent chapter, but so sad for everyone :-(
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What a great adventure :-) The boys are doing exactly what they should be... Be boys :-) Inquisitive & hungry for exploration and adventure :-) Is yirgy's warning too late? Will al the boys get out of this attach on them unscathed? I really do hope so... I hope Yirgy's response is quick & decisive & gives the aggressors a warning they will never forget! Btw, how did the attackers get into Australia without Yirgy knowing about it, I till it was too late?
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Devastating ending! A love gone unquenched for so long, with such a bitter ending. I don't think Con could go on with such loss, especially knowing at the end what he really missed out on and that he was loved so fiercely in return. Such cruel fate to live and be left with.
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Another great chapter Fast paced with plenty of info & character interaction. So much going on and so much time elapses, sometimes I wish we could have more..... Everything :-)
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After the second read through, this is still one of my favourite stories. Thanks :-) Matt G.
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Great story! From beginning to end. I couldn't put it down. Thanks. Matt G.
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What a great adventure. Once again your characters come to life and draw us in. I think these boys are fast becoming inseparable friends :-) Looking forward to reading many more chapters :-) Thanks IarwIn Matt G.
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Ok I'm hooked & waiting with anticipation for the next chapter/s ;-) Again you have started a story with interesting character development, that has me wanting to know more about them & how they will grow & interact. I've sId it before to you, but I'm always amazed how you bring out the innocence of your characters. You did it in Attunga with the trio & it looks like you will do the same here. :-) Being an Aussie too, helps me to visualise your landscapes & animals, which is a bonus for me ;-) that your overseas readers can't enjoy to the full. I can't wait to see the next posting ;-) Matt G.
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Fantastic story. Thank you :-) Matt G.
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Another great chapter, thanks. Please keep them coming :-)
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Terrifying!! Sacha is really stronger than he thinks he is. I hope they don't have to suffer for too long. Matt G.
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OMFG!!! I can't wait to see where this goes While I think James needs a big wake up call, no one deserves what he is about to endure. I just hope they both get out of this predicament without too many scars. Like everyone else, what the hell was Frank & Lacey thinking taking Sacha out in public without security are they complete idiots?? And how is it everyone is so stupid they can't have an idea why Sacha is so complient when he's been a prisoner so long.... Are they really that naieve.... Bring on the next chapter ;-)
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Great story! Loved all the highs & lows, you made the characters come to life. Any chance ther is a summer/college story for this story on the cards? Would love to read more about these guys ;-) Matt G.
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Another enjoyable story :-) Who would have thought Zu was all marshmallow inside that tough exterior?? Only for his pretty boy of course, but still such a lovely story. Thanks. Matt G.
