Thank you so much for your comments. This is one prompt I was never quite happy with, and your comments made my day. I have so many other things on my plate, I doubt I'll revisit this, but you never know.
I'm heading out of town for a few days So I might end up missing our milestone I'll have sporadic internet access, but should be able to check in occasionally.
Yes, they do. Well, I do still let them 'happen', but then go back and edit.
@Renee Stevens I really enjoy these posts, so I hope you'll continue to come up with questions.
This prompt inspired my first completed, multi-chapter story "Penguin". There's also a couple of short stories featuring Penguin and crew too. Thanks for reading
Eric is just going to want more and more money. I don't see this keeping him quiet for long. I'm glad Travis got to the hospital in time, although he's not out of the woods yet. It was great seeing another chapter. Next one soon... right?
These are all great, Parker, written with your usual finesse. The first makes me picture fairies or birds playing in spring puddles. The last line of the second packs a powerful punch. I want to see the tie you wore on April 3rd I loved the repetition in four and the unique view of the bird feeder. Five brings me back to school daze and wanting to be anywhere but on the wrong side of that glass. I think my favorite is the pines of number six. And I love the imagery of the willow. I'm wrong... I think the horse on the hill is my favorite. Well done I can't wait to see what the rest of the month brings.