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Thank you for a really heartwarming story - I looked forward to every chapter - please give us more - a follow up or another story
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Hi, May I just add a note - “it’s” with apostrophe nearly always means “it is” - if it belongs ( the clock adds its own voice) it doesn’t need the apostrophe. So well written - it’s a pity to spoil the story with a careless grammatical error.
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wonderful story - please more like this
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Wonderful story - please remember to check apostrophes - eg “dads” - most “s” are normal plurals - don’t need apostrophes - “it’s” always means it is . Careless use of apostrophes just spoils the story. Sorry to be picky!!
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Wonderful story - please remember to check apostrophes - eg “dads” - most “s” are normal plurals - don’t need apostrophes
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Good start - Edinburgh is the capital of Scotland
