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  1. @akascrubber - I think it is Bunny who is ass up over Jamie, not vice versa. Jamie is very self-aware in so many ways. Bunny may well be starting to question his relationship with his brother and father.
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    Chapter 25

    Such a great start to a relationship as opposed to his treatment by Mike and Animal.
  3. The focused attempt to make nudity natural for the kids is very good and knowing when to be clothed is as beneficial. As said above, the overall relaxing theme of this chapter was needed by all of them! We learned that Hansi did not benefit from her husband's stupidity, just as Ludo did not from Jackie's . And now...on to dinner with Marcus...
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    Acceptance

    How you manage to make each chapter even more powerful is a tribute to your talent, @empath! A new "family" is being formed which will be the foundation on which growth of each individual can find solid support. Daniel and Juan will be forming their own family too! What a wonderful story!
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    Chapter 24

    I wanted to leave two emojis: love (which I did leave) and wow! Mike definitely needs to step forward as he may well be in Animal's crosshairs! Oli is simply wonderful! Now on to Raffa and Gray building their relationship!
  6. pvtguy

    Christmas plans

    As you've demonstrated in this story, @Robert Hugill, "breaking free" is an on-going process of reflection, confronting held beliefs, and moving forward. Thankfully, Ralph had the support of friends, Nolan, and his daughters, as well as his ex-wife eventually. I do agree: Therese also is in the process of breaking free, amazingly supported by her catty friends. I do encourage more stories so that the questions/scenarios you mention, can be addressed and we can continue to enjoy these delightful characters.
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    Chapter 39

    I second @Flip-Flop;s sentiment! This is a world I will never enjoy, but one I have enjoyed vicariously through your brilliant writing, @Andre Delport. Thankfully, I have not gained 30 lbs vicariously in reading about all the delicious foods you have described! Looking forward to the next installment!
  8. pvtguy

    Chapter 23

    A lighter (emotionally) chapter after so much heaviness for Grayson! I do hope the perpetrators can be identified!
  9. This story could well be turned into a soap opera with all its twists and turns. At long last, there is a HEA.
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    No Longer Alone

    And now we have another thread in this tale you are weaving. Arturo may well learn that he is not alone any more. Talk about PTSD! There is a lot of work to be done with all these "brothers" as indicated by Thomas' and Qian's breakdowns. Travis now realizes he has a new purpose. Another excellent chapter!
  11. pvtguy

    Chapter 22

    First off - Grayson! You are not supposed to drive when you take pain medication! However, it was necessary and all is good. Dad definitely needs to get some professional assistance, but I'm sure he will work through this. Gray's life is getting better with the support he is receiving...and will receive from Raffa!
  12. I tend to hope that reevaluation of her life has changed Jackie who will still face the consequences of her actions. She may never be the warm/fuzzy person, but she does love Damian (even though she woefully neglected him!). I'm not sure she will ever understand the hurt and loss she has caused, but if she can establish a relationship with him that is based on the present and future, there may be hope for a positive future with him. I love the relationship between Ludo and Arthur: they can be totally open with one another and always are supportive of each other. I'm glad that they are proceeding with getting a therapist for Damian.. They will continue to provide support and a place where Damian can be open and get honesty as a basis in his life, but a therapist can help him look at issues without any emotional connection. That is much needed (perhaps by all!)....
  13. Is Bunny's "help" a form of manipulation too? Jamie truly is either naive or simply aloof (perhaps a combination). Poor Bunny is being browbeat by his bully older brother, Wencel. Was Hearst his name or simply a referral to the famous publisher? Interesting chapter which solidifies my idea of "reality" shows.
  14. pvtguy

    Chapter 21

    So...Dad isn't so bad after all! I'm sorry he was abused but also glad that his love of his family is stronger than his guilt and feeling he might be at fault.
  15. This was not unexpected. Now to see if Dexter can be found and Jeremy and the boys are safe.
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    New Foundations

    It seems that Rocky's unconventional means of interrogation are gaining big results! Good for him! The scum that participated in the pedophile ring deserve what is happening! Peter is doing the right thing after his "education" in one afternoon. Would that he could and would force a divorce between John and Rebecca. She needs to live alone in the hell she has created. So much good happening for the boys, for the adults who are interacting with them. Each powerful chapter just keeps getting better and better! Thank you, @empath! I can only imagine the effect it has on you writing this!
  17. I'll only reinforce @Philippe's summary/comment: Where is Dexter? Why haven't we heard from him?
  18. pvtguy

    Chapter 20

    Grayson doesn't seem to get a break from the bullies. I do hope the cops can determine the culprits. Raffa is taking chances that could end up hurting him as well as Grayson. The workplace is not the place for such behavior, though I will count it up to youth and hormones.
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    Homecoming

    There is nothing I can add to the erudition of the comments already made! Superb chapter and superb comments!
  20. pvtguy

    Moving on

    Having lived through separation and divorce and being the single parent to my son, the relationship of Ludo and Damian resonates deeply with me. It is a journey fraught with doubt, uncertainty, yet much excitement at building a life free of the tension that created the situation. Ludo is amazing as a parent! He has wonderful friends who are assisting him with providing experiences for the boys and very fortunate in a really supportive partner in Arthur (something I did not have). @Summerabbacat correctly points out that the working out of what furniture to keep, what personal mementos to keep, and the promise of a future where Damian can still have a relationship with his mother as Ludo will maintain a friendly relationship with Jackie, but that the new family that includes Arthur and Adam, serves as the best therapy. The afternoon that Arthur and Ludo spend together has deepened enhanced their relationship. Well done, @Robert Hugill.
  21. pvtguy

    Homecoming

    A wonderful way to end Saturday evening for me! Powerful emotions of joy for the Whites as well as the brothers, a hint at what Travis and Jennifer may do to help, satisfaction to see some "family" justice resolving a problem in Vegas, Juan and Daniel finding each other, and yet sad for John as he faces Rebecca... @empath, you are one powerful writer!
  22. pvtguy

    Chapter 19

    Such job perks! Still, I'm glad Gray is following through with testing. I still get anxious when I go for testing for my own peace of mind! Gray is finding a very supporting community in his work!
  23. Ok...I'm totally confused as to how Laura shot Carter time and again and there was blood, yet then the film played back? I need to re-read a few times to see if I can understand these twists and turns. Glad Laura is now in custody and waiting for her lackey, Dexter, to get his comeuppance!
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    Training Day

    It would be interesting to know how Bunny knows this stuff. He does seem to truly be interested in protecting Jamie from the "wolves" and Jamie's naivete. Jamie is showing how naive he is by trusting what he's been told to get him to agree to do the show and placing his trust in the producer. The mystery continues...
  25. pvtguy

    Chapter 18

    I don't think Grayson has anything to worry about as far as work goes. I do agree with @chris191070- I believe Animal's company is goint to get a call and that Gray is going to get the full-time position. Glad he is going to get tested! And I do hope those results are negative!
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