Wyndham
-
Posts
114 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Wyndham
-
This story is epic..! The characters are wonderfully drawn as is their interaction. I've seldom been drawn into a storyline as much as this one. I had to stop reading for a while as things were getting a bit too hot. Really sizzling. The sex with Ephraim was so well written I wanted to cry - like that. Also, bonus points for good grammar and spelling, it really does make a difference. Thank you.
-
What cereal do you eat? I could do with the boost it obviously gives. Is your writing based on personal experience..? Regardless, congratulations on fine writing. Thank you.
-
Just discovered this. What an excellent idea. May I request a Table of Contents..?
-
A great start to a story in my favourite genre, Harry and Malfoy. If the story countinues to be so well written (good grammar, spelling, word choice, layout and more) then it's sure to be a hit.
-
Another cracker of a story from Laura. So many plot twists and turns... Please tell me, how does a girl describe blissful male gay sex so well. Kudos.
-
This is an accomplished author with a flair for pulling you into the story. The characters were enjoyable and the plot absolutely bonkers. Just the sort of thing I used to dream about. Strongly recomended reading.
-
I think I'll just have a lie down. This is all getting too much.
- 34 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
-
Just when I wondered if you could match the fervour of the previous chapter you go and do it. I wonder how I will sleep tonight..? Thank you Laura. Keep up the sizzle.
-
Hi Laura, After spending a few months in hospital recovering from a broken back I was looking forward to getting back to this story. I did not expect it to sizzle in the way that you have written it. How is it that so many of the top gay authors, of which you are surely one, know the gay male psychic and sexuality so well? Not only that but your artistry at putting pen to paper (does anyone do that any more...) leaves me at least in awe of the skill displayed by so many scribes at Gay Authors. Thank you for the sunshine you have added to my life.
-
So much about your writing has impressed me. It is evident to me that you put in a great deal of research for the detail in the story. Even in the little places. It stands out as does the way the story flows easily. Thank you
-
Quite unrealistic but quite enjoyable all the same. I suspect more than a few readers will have had, or still have dreams of experiencing the same as Chipper. Tight storytelling, good grammar and spelling, likeable lead character, and more besides. Thoroughly good reading. Thank you.
-
As good as this chapter is I can't deny how much I have been blown away by Raul Malo. Lovely writing again. I'm getting addicted to that writing.
-
What a lovely sweet opening. Well paced and goes well with the Evening Jazz playlist I have on. All that is missing is a husband...
-
My school wasn't like this... Plenty of gorgeous guys and I never got hit on - sigh 🤍
-
What a superb chapter. You must have poured your heart into the story. The narrative works so well it's almost as if you are recounting something from your past. Either way, very good writing.
-
This story has me hooked, well and truly. I felt I could visualise the characters which were all taut (tight ass, tight arms and chest, tight abs: you get the idea) and heavenly to look at. Your progression of the characters was riveting. The plot is yet to make an appearance but I feel confident it will be great. One request, more nudity please.
-
What a fabulous first chapter. Plenty of eye candy to feast on, and a good collection of characters to inflame my imagination. Request: with all this talent at your fingertips, or is it under your fingertips, or even under your hands....? Please do populate future pages of this novella to undressing these boys. I mean nudity. Lots of it. That might fuel the fantasies of many of the boys, even if they don't realise it yet, unlike Maddox who seems to be on the verge of an awakening. Really looking forward to seeing the story develop. Oh, and thank you.
-
He needs to give Ali a chance. Gorgeous guys like the barman are too good looking to sustain a 'normal' relationship. This old cynic doesn't believe they could remain faithful for a start.
-
I should be so lucky..! Many, many years ago when going to the gym was still possible for me, I used to have dreams about meeting some of the guys in the gym. It almost worked out a few times, but, no luck.
-
Another fabulous chapter. Keep them coming
-
I'm stumped at what to write. All the best compliments have already been written. So all I can offer is a simple thank you for a great story, well written.
-
Me too. I'm really enjoying it, especially imagining the boys in their speedos. Swimming was always my favourite class at school even though the swimming master always worked us really hard.
-
I don't know how I would have copied if I had been in the same situation. We never had any high jinks in the swimming changing room at my school - pity!
-
Oh the anticipation..!
