Wyndham
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Something has gone wrong with the font size at the end of chapter Five. Another good read.
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There's everything to like about this story. Cute guys, speedos, nudity, good humour and laughter. Well done.
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Quite right. Never saw that coming. Still living the story.
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Don't apologise. You are setting the place just right. Still living the story.
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I'm really getting into this story. Well written, thank you.
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Such a pity that this story appears to have been abandoned. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first chapter not least because of the good grammar and spelling, something sorely lacking in many online stories.
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Nikki: The Citadel of M'Vokagola
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Nikki: The Citadel of M'Vokagola
Difficult chapter this with so much going on. At least the good guys seem to be okay. -
Nikki: Professional Crammer
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Nikki: Professional Crammer
Crazy, but I enjoyed this chapter. I love the idea of being able to absorb knowledge after reading once, and quickly. -
Chance: It's Easier To Be Evil
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: It's Easier To Be Evil
At last. The boys should be really satisfied now that they came out to other, with an apparently satisfactory sealing of the event. -
Chance: Should Have Learned Parkour
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Should Have Learned Parkour
A rather Satanic offer for Chance. -
Nikki: Teachers Really Love Deadlines
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Nikki: Teachers Really Love Deadlines
Mr Evans is easy to hate. One of the nice things about this story is that the plotline is so untypical that it's impossible, for me at least, to guess what is going to happen next. This makes the story so much more interesting. Thank you Solus Magnus. -
Chance: Spellcasting For Dummies
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Spellcasting For Dummies
The plot thickens with another character. -
Chance: Reizal of the Vladimir
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Reizal of the Vladimir
What a complex story. I continue to be astonished at your imagination. -
Nikki: Liars Go To Death
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Nikki: Liars Go To Death
I'm getting a bit lost with the different characters. Hopefully everything will become clearer as the story progresses. -
Chance: Another Side, Another Story
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Another Side, Another Story
Another good chapter, although I don't like Venus. He seems a bit flakey, providing vague information to someone supposedly his best friend. -
Chance: Fast-learners Are Not Cool
Wyndham commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Fast-learners Are Not Cool
Just wow..! Great imagination from Solus Magus. I'm enjoying it. drsawzall is correct in what he writes but don't be downhearted as I am sure it was well intentioned. Bad grammar can spoil even a good story. You have the potential to be a great writer so keep going. Best wishes. -
What an imagination. The story rollicks along. Wish I could have been in that delightful world, though such gifts are never really free. Just hope the cost is not too high
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The excitement gathers apace. I'm astounded by the level of detail in the story which for me makes it all the more believable as a story. With all the politics there I'm not sure how long I would have survived.
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I expected this story to be fun and so it turns out to be. What is going to happen with the young prince? Expect drama and more...
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What a refreshing change of setting, both historical as well as location. I'm in bed, needing to go to sleep but unable to put my iPad down. I've not quite mastered the characters of the two boys but am already drawn to them, so well done on the character development in this story. I am also enjoying the story for its own sake which promises to be quite full of fun and excitement
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A lovely story developing here. I note the authors comment about Nick, but I detect an adventurous and mischievous streak there. Who knows what could happen. The main event of course is James who has just had his world shaken. What will happen? Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you author 🤓
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I am entranced by Roku. He is going to be a lovely character in this story which has already grabbed my attention. I sometimes wonder what it would be like to be a mage and am a little envious of Adan. Cracking story, thank you.
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I’m amazed at how you juggle all the characters and technical details (and keep them straight) while spinning a gripping tale at the same time. I’m looking forward to seeing what more Bill gets up to with his cadet...
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Not a word I use much, but that was awesome. I loved reading it, not least because there was only one mistaken word choice, and I enjoyed the good grammar too. Thank you
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Wow! This is intense. Great writing, love it...
