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Thanks Valkyrie, This month has been hard to deal with so far, but I'll make it through. I do appreciate the support though. Have a sweet day. Lmoline
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The Phrase by L. Moline Screaming the same phrase Hearing the same reply, Seeing the results are identical I wish I had never come to this place I wish I would have known what I know now I wish I hadn’t drunk so much, or my friends would have cut me off Now I lay here crying in pain Screaming the same phrase, Hearing the same reply Seeing the results are identical He told me you will never be free I will always be w
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Thank you.
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I thank you, Cyrus, for your kind words. I also thank you for letting us share in your art. From one artist to another you are appreciated.
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I love this chapter, it's nice seeing how shy Wes and Chase are around each other. And of course more of the cutest kid alive in my mind.. Benny, you will never go wrong with him..
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I love Adam as a new dad. i also love the new grandparents, however I'm still wondering about Anna. Since you brought in the psychologist A.K.A "the Shrink" I'm now wondering if Anna suffers from an undiagnosed mental illness. Even if that is the case she does not need to be in Rileys' life.. Now with the guys bringing in a new addition to the group of cute kids, when is Benny coming back.
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Great beginnings to a lovely story, however I do hope the parental units get what's coming to them... lol.
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Chapter 6 - Little Bit More Than Friends
lmoline commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Little Bit More Than Friends
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Thank you, Brian, for sending love, it is always nice to know someone cares. Now as for the poem it is a reflection of the emotions that had built up over the last couple of months. Some of the build up was do to my therapist bring up things that I was not and had not dealt with, hence the name of the poem. Although , I guess writing it was my way of surviving all over again. Thank you again for your support, Have a sweet day.. Laura
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I have read and reread this story several times and still get caught up in action. It is a story of love on different levels, it also has comedy, action. For those who like a well rounded story this is one I wholeheartedly recommend.
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Thanks BDANR, I appreciate it greatly. Yes this poem is very melancholic. It is a poem of wishing for a better life than I had. Thank you again and have a sweet day..Lmoline
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Man, dude just won't take the hint.. I wonder if they will ever get it together?
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Thank you, Gary. This piece was very hard to write, but at the same time it was a necessary release. You are right about life being a challenge and it's not easy to get through. As always thank you for your constant support. Have a sweet day. Lmoline
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thank you RJ , I'm definitely going to try. I just realized that the first initials of your name are the same as my sons. Lol anyhow, thank you for reading and commenting on the poem, it means a lot to me. As always, Have a sweet day.. Lmoline
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A powerful piece of storytelling. A beautiful but also heart wrenching display of true friendship.
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Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It shows people that even someone who is considered a good friend can take things too far. It also shows what a true friend will do to protect each other both mentally and physically. In the case of this particular story and so many like it the emotional connection you created will be felt by many, including myself, a survivor. I give you my thanks.
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Thank you Bryant, for reading my poem. I am grateful for the support. I am currently reading a few different stories at the moment but you are next on my reading list. 😁
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Well Val, the last couple of months have been very trying to say the least. I will say this,however I am still here. Thank you for your support.
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Trying not to drown Trying hard not to drown Feeling like the world is out to break me I’ve been shaken to the core Now I worry even more. Trying not to drown Trying to stay above ground Therapy is supposed to help However, I still feel I need more help. Trying not to drown Feeling like a ticking clock Knowing when the chime rings, it could be the end of me Hoping that his plans for me is to continue.
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Thank you Parker for your honesty and kind words. This poem is pretty tough on some people and easy for others. As you say " spoilsport nerds" can have their own opinion on it. I should know, I am one.. however this poem was meant to make people think about, whether they can live their life to the fullest extent of their being. I am glad that you understood that. As always, Have a sweet day.. Lmoline and
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Thank you Lit lover, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. Sorry that it has taken me this long to get back to you, but just know that I do appreciate your support. As always, Have a sweet day.. Lmoline and
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Valkyrie, I am sorry to hear of your recent losses and you search for answers. I hope this poem has helped a little to let you know that, as long as you are living in your dream everything will be okay. I know I too have asked myself the same questions, but answer is not one i could fine on my own. You will get there eventually by being shown by the Big G. He is how I make it through days like today. The poem itself is about making the life you have been given your own and just living to your fullest existence. As always, Have a sweet day....Lmoline and oh and p.s. I did have a song stuck in my head when i wrote this one...
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Life Life is living in your dreams Being who you are Never stopping in your believing, that you are who you are Life Life is living in your dreams Watching people around you But knowing your own self Life Life is living in your dreams Keeping faith in your plan Always moving forward and never looking back again If looking back is all you do, what kind of life have you lived Has your life been a fulfilling one
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Thank you Val, you are so right. Regret is where most of us tend to get stuck at, but you still have to keep moving forward. Being who I am now would not be who I am if some of those dreams and wishes had come true. Who know that may be the same for all of humanity. As always, Have a sweet day...... Lmoline and
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You are most definitely right about that.Without feeling anything the question becomes are you really alive? This particular pom was me just trying to work out what my dreams are now verses what I wished they had been. I am glad you like the poem and understood the underlying message..Thank you for the continued support. And as aways, Have a sweet day..... Lmoline and
