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that was great. I just these two. I may not review often but i had to tell you that I think this is my most favorite chapter yet.
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First of all I loved the chapter. Now for the rest, I get the feeling that Ethan is hiding something.Why wouldn't you want you boyfriend to come and comfort you in a time of need. And Roger I stand by my initial reaction to him.He's an ass out for himself. I wouldn't be surprised if Ethan and him are together at this time. As jacked up as that seems it could happen. I do agree with kj that Galen needs to break up with Ethan though. It will only get harder the longer he waits.
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Omg.. I knew it. Colton knew who took Zeke. I hope once they catch up to them he still has that determination to do what's needed. Maybe apologies to the bear shifter he use to know. Thanks for another great chapter.
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Okay first thing first.. yea.
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That's awesome.. I see a similarity to Thane and Harry's story. Freaking just awesome.
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First off, thank you for the wonderful chapter. The emotions of the characters are astounding. However the part that made me feel the most connected was when father and son hugged for the first time in what had to be many years,not just the 3. Having just recently reconnected with my own father, after 10 years, that first hug means a lot more than what someone not going through it could ever imagine. I'm happy that k and his dad got to feel and know the other still loves them.
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I wonder if Barney was the reason Billy Joe left. Hmmm I guess we'll find out. But great chapter. I think it's one of my favorites. I like how Barney made the selfless decision to hello out someone who couldn't help themselves. I also like his humble attitude about it. Thanks for another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Well now I see what Roger is about. That man is an ass. I hope Josh figures it out soon that he's being use. Josh is to sweet for that kind of craps.
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Lots of Secrets in This Bar
lmoline commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Lots of Secrets in This Bar
I like everyone else think the whole seen about them living together was great. My only question is why David didn't say that he was Barry's partner? Makes you think, you know. I wonder if something happened between Dave and Chuck? -
Thank you for a wonderful story. I've read,and reread this beautiful work many times. Every time is still a heart indearing, and sometimes sad read. The characters are so realistic that it makes you forget its not real.It makes you laugh and cry each time. This will forever be a favorite of mine.
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Lol.. unlike everyone else I read the short version so I'm not curious about Opie's pick. I am however wondering about Jonah's dad. Are you ever going to tell us what Opie plans to do about that? Anyway thanks for writing another great chapter.
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Prompt 392 - The Minor Part 5
lmoline commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 392 - The Minor Part 5
Way to go nate. I'm glad he beat the snot out of Brad,the dude is a major douche. Thanks for another great work of literature. I am sad though that there are places like the camp mentioned. He if my son comes to me one day and tells me " mommy I like boys" I'd probably jump for joy. His father not so much. This series just shows me even more that some people don't need to have children. He'll I'm a minister and I teach God loves everyone. I'd be an ass if I didn't plus I'm a bisexual woman at that. Again great job. More please. -
Thank you,thank you,thank you... I am glad that you have por a new installment on this story. I've been trying to be patient..lol. On a side note I love Jenny's mom. She is such a caring woman. I kinda wish she was my mom. At least he now understand and knows that someone outside of his dbag dad cares for him like a parent should.
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Chapter 8 - A Wedding Night for Seeon
lmoline commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 8 - A Wedding Night for Seeon
I have read and reread this story hoping you had come back to complete it. It's a great tale. I hope you come back and finish it soon. Would love to see what happens next. -
This chapter was a hard read. Christmas should have been a great time for Avery, but his dad being the selfish prick had to ruin it. I wish that donor would hurry and get what he deserves.o yeah Now on to the sheriff. How can he be so blind to Avery's situation. He seems to notice Matt right away.
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OMG.. it's grest that the captain has stepped up a bit more with Gabriel. I love to see their relationship getting better. Rule is so cute. I'm glad he got some cloclosure regarding the shot stain that cut off his wings. I'm also glad that Gabriel was the one to shut him up. That whole scene was spot on. thanks for writing this Iwas getting antsy waiting. I hope the next chapter is posted soon.
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I love your take on this classic tale. It happens to be one of my favorites. I believe you have do the tale justice.
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Hey. I love this story, but will be glad when it's finally finished.. I started reading it on another sight but it was never updated.. I hope you finish it soon. Can't wait to find out what happens to Jared and see if he and December last after he finds out what December and his family are.. so I'm begging " please, please, please" finish this story.
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Very disturbing, but a well written piece.
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This chapter reminds me of my own life story. It is a difficult chapter to read but I believe you have captured the essence of what a battered person, whether male or femal has gone through. I commend you for doing it so passionately. As well as making it clear that it is okay for a man to cry. Absolutely a brilliant piece of writing.
