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lmoline

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  1. lmoline

    I Started Thinking

    Thank you RJ, I appreciate your words of encouragement. I had been doing a lot of thinking about whether or not to post my poems here and I am glad that it has been well received. Yeah, I will agree that Gary is just plain awesome... As always, Have a sweet day... Lmoline and again.
  2. lmoline

    Wishes and Dreams

    Thanks Gary, you're right about dreams and wishes from childhood being the beginning of self. Although in my childhood hood my support system was't very supportive, so my dreams and most of who I am now is learned. That aspect is not what I want for my son. Truth is I have never really been a child. So watching my son and all of my nieces and nephews grow is my biggest dream. As always, Have a sweet day... Lmoline and thank you.
  3. When I was young I had dreamed of the future I would wish on stars like the song said, hoping for that dream would eventually come true I would stare out my window at the stars that shined bright Wondering when I’d see the first star of the night When I was young I had dreams of the future, I dreamed of mostly silly things, however they were real to me then I would say to myself, “I am going to be a singer”, but that dream had to end I dreamed of one day
  4. lmoline

    I Started Thinking

    Thanks Daddydavek, I wish I had that answer for you, and me both. I know that I may never give my son all that he wants but at least he'll know I gave him what he needs. I try on a daily basis to lead by example and he seems to understand.. As always, Have a sweet day....lmoline and
  5. lmoline

    I Started Thinking

    Thank you both, for reading the poem. I'll tell you a secret I haven't written in so long I almost forgot how.lol This poem is a very heartfelt and cathartic release for me and I am grateful that you can understand the emotions in it. I am hopefull that with next poem I post it will do the same. Again Gary, thanks for the encouragement and advice. Have a sweet day ...lmoline
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    I Started Thinking

    Thank you for your thoughts and kind words Val. I never thought about the poem sounding more like a song. As always have a sweet day.. Lmoline
  7. I started thinking I started thinking about the way my life has turned out This wasn’t the life I wanted, is what I want to shout I have lived the life I was handed and never said a word What was the point anyway, when my voice would not be heard I started thinking I started thinking about the way my life has turned out Maybe I have fooled myself into believing there is something better out there, I wonder if all my dreaming is why there is no o
  8. Just some of my thoughts in poetic form.
  9. lmoline

    For Life

    That is very understandable, however I think you did a great job. An congrats on your new hubby. 😊
  10. lmoline

    For Life

    this chapter. Thank you for continuing. I can't wait for the next..hopefully sooner then later...
  11. Here I go quoting myself but I neglected to comind you on tying in Eli from the first book. That I didn't see coming.
  12. I am so glad you posted this. I have been wondering what happened in counseling. Thanks for giving us a start on his recovery.
  13. I'm glad you started up again.. Welcome back. looking forward to the next chapter.
  14. lmoline

    Chapter 21

    So,so sad.
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    Chapter 20

    My heart hurts for Galen. So much pain and yet he still doesn't want the help he needs. I hope Liam can get through to him and has him see someone. Another great chapter Val, can not wait till the next one.
  16. Happy Birthday! I hope it's magical.
  17. lmoline

    Evolution pt. 1

    can't wait for the next chapter.
  18. lmoline

    Moon's Rising

    Loving the start of this story, however still wondering when are you going to add to it? I hope to read more soon.
  19. loved this story. Riley is a brave young man. Although you did have me in tears at the end, it is still an excellent tail.
  20. Awesome chapter. looking forward o the next.
  21. lmoline

    Journal 1

    Great start for this next phase. I always wondered how Chris became the ass he was in book 1. I'm glad you started it up again. Now I'll try to be patient and wait for more..
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    The Stone Wall

    Okay,I don't make a lot of comments on the stories I have read but I have to say that this is by far my favorite chapter thus far. Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. ?
  23. lmoline

    Chapter 19

    I hate to say this but I actually think that Josh was just that damn blind. I mean when he originally met that disgusting piece of worthless trash he had just found out his bf at the time was cheating on him and was devastated. I can see why he didn't see the depravity of Roger: Rebound Guy. And after being with him for so long and being miss treated when he was around is all that he knew. Sounds a lot like domestic abuse to me. Roger never really showed Josh just how twisted he really as. I have some friends and I myself have fallen into similar situations with prior lovers, its hard to tell when someone you think you know is that F'd up. I Feel sorry for him finding out what a monster his now ex- murderous boyfriend is this way. I feel eve more sorrow for what Galein had to endure before he was rescued and all the therapy he is going to need to be able to cope with just getting through even his day to day life. I know he will survive this ordeal and be stronger for it but he will never be the same, nor will anyone else for that matter. Liam will continue to have guilt over not checking up on Galein sooner, Josh will have guilt for not really knowing what and who Roger really was. Its all just a big ass cluster fuck at this point. I will say this I they the give that douchebag, psycho the chair though, but I will be as patient as I be and wait for the next chapter. Great job on this chapter and all of the ones before it. Laura
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    Chapter 14

    Corey, Corey, Corey . I swear if he was real I'd want to strangle him..Poor Jason tried so hard to show him the difference years can make and that fool still doesn't see....How sad.
  25. lmoline

    Chapter 50

    I am not one for long drawn out reviews but I will and can say this: With this one story, you have been elevated to my favorite authors list. Congratulations with the story and I hope to read more in the near future.
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