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Wow! Impressive! That should jeep JAR occupied until at least Thursday. LOL And here I was thinking about a simple Isaac and Leo request... Maybe, they can pop in there somewhere? That would make me a very happy Metian!
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No, not the Matrix... I'm still not over that movie. Pseudo deep and Keanu too... Right now, it kind of feels like we're heading into David Lynch territory, but I'm hoping we don't end up with dancing dwarves.
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MetaExperience... Sounds like a roller coaster. Which in fact it is.
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Oh, right! There are no coincidences!
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Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
Yes, it sort of turned into something else, about loss but with a hope for reconnection. It's sometimes hard when things change... Thanks for your review! -
Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
Your review makes me so happy! I have been struggling with my staccato tendency, so I tried very hard to not break the poem up in separate lines. I'm so glad it showed! Reading them out loud is a good way to check the flow and also to see if the rhymes feel natural. Good rhymes (much like good men...) are hard to find. They can be awkward or too slick to leave the right impression. I try to make them almost unnoticeable, apart from the effect they have on flow. A lot to think about... -
Oh lordy! How are we supposed to wait days for the next chapter?!? Such torment should be illegal!
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Faris seems to know exactly how far he can push James... And a proposal will "buy" him a lot more room for annoying behaviour. Very nice gift for James (and of course Faris). I like how you focus on their interaction in your story. It says so much about these guys with us having to be told stuff.
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Funny coincidence at lunch today. A colleague said eating a lot of garlic elevates testosterone levels. Another colleague then added "Well, maybe that's why vampires are so feminine, with that hair and those frilly shirts?" I felt my work self collide with my GA self. Worlds merging...
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Kind of off topic and I'm not gay, so maybe I shouldn't try and speculate, but anyway... I think lesbian relationships are less threatening to society and perhaps straight men specifically since they pose no threat to the world order. A couple or group of women with no men present is viewed as simply waiting for a guy to come along. If they happen to "entertain" themsrlves while waiting it's no big deal. Nothing a good f**k can't "correct". I can't tell you how many times I've been with a group of female friends and a guy walks up and seriously asks "What are you doing here all alone?" So female interaction doesn't really count, unless it's for his arousal (which I think is also a reason for acceptance)... A bit harshly put, I know, but sometimes the straight male norm is so clear it almost hurts to watch.
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Yes, I find it very hard to yell at anyone at the moment. I'm more at the hugging stage. So very, very sad to feel like you have wasted precious time doing things that in the end doesn't matter. The guilt of surviving on top of that. I must agree with the review from Dr Paladin. Danny would never have wanted Morgan there. No sense in them both being killed. Although, I can understand the reaction. Especially from a man like Morgan, used to taking charge and doing things. He would feel like he could have done something if he was there.
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Ha, ha! I still giggle about that. We'll see if we'll regret egging JAR on... Heads might roll.
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And such delicious antidote it is... So I guess I taught you something? Not sure you wanted to learn, though... LOL
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Mouse (mus) is a very common word for something (usually) hairy on a woman's body...
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Mice...? That has my Swedish brain going Huh? You do know what that is slang for?
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Do you have any idea the difficulties to subdue a man mountain...? Oh, wait... Don't answer that.
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Yes, there is that. Just so hard to deliver payment...
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You're such a tease!
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Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 8 - Quatrains
This unexpectedly turned out a bit more personal than I planned, so I'm glad you could get something out of it anyway. But that's what so great about poetry, isn't it? I intend to say one thing, you hear another and that's not only ok, but amazing! Thanks for your review! -
He, he... That question got me over 1000 posts. Seems fitting. Learning all the time.
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Ok... This is one of those times I go hmm... Dare to educate me?
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I'd think you'd know if you'd bottomed... Otherwise, better luck next time...
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The anniversary was tough to read. All that sorrow... I almost found it hard to breath myself. Maybe it's time for Morgan to start living again? Even if it's difficult. And a discussion thread would be much appreciated by me at least...
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Oh, to have that goodbye possibly be the last time they see each other... Morgan could be just consumed by guilt for the rest of his life if Danny doesn't come back. Gives you perspective on how to prioritise in life.
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Mmmm... Sandwich...
