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    Is there light at the end of the tunnel or is it a train? Ludo has survived the attempt to implicate him and maybe the young journalist will write an article that will help exonerate Ludo. Good luck and perhaps there will be a wedding in the future!
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    They aren’t paying enough attention to their relationship. Strong and silent is just stupid when love is involved! Talk boys, talk! Another emotional chapter with sad then happy tears. Luckily the tissues are nearby.
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    The Love of Money

    gmc commented on empath's story chapter in The Love of Money

    Wow it just builds and builds! It’s time to help the children. Begin healing physical and emotional wounds. The family is evolving. This is very well written. Good job and next please!
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    Agitation

    gmc commented on empath's story chapter in Agitation

    What a great story, every chapter reveals more about the disgusting child sex trade and we know more about the men and women who are attempting to thwart it. So many situations are building, what will happen next? I am looking forward to reading the next installment.
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    Chapter 3

    gmc commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 3

    They will have to work to communicate with each other. They are both isolated for different reasons and spend a lot of effort hiding their feelings when strangers react to them. How often do either of them make new friends or let themselves feel more? We know where this is leading, but it seems like it’s going to be a rewarding journey. What a great beginning! I think Mickey and Drew will be epic!
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    Chapter 7

    gmc commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Marc seems to be on the right path in transitioning Sasha from boyfriend to friend. I would never consider that pathway, but Marc evidently Sasha correctly. He is definitely growing his mining venture and gaining a workforce! Way to go Marc!
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    One family expanded with love another severed by intolerance! Manny and Robby do need to talk. Obviously Robby’s background includes suppressing emotions in favor of appearances, but real love requires showing your feelings to each other. Even if Robby expected his parents to disapprove, he must be devastated by the reality of the rift. That being said, Robby was firm in his choice of Manny as his family and I doubt he has regrets. They do need to communicate in order to heal! Great job! I can feel the strength of their partnership.
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    Ralph is spreading his wings and shrinking his love handles! A public kiss! Ralph and Nolan are really good together. I think it’s time to make amends to Douglas. I look forward to meeting of the no longer teenage men! Good build.
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    What a beautiful experience! I hope they build on this and reveal their vulnerabilities to each other. Manny and Robby have become truly intimate and their partnership begun to flourish. Nice!
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    Chapter 6

    gmc commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Marc’s love life always seems problematic. He makes his intentions clear and emphasizes his limitations, yet his partners hope for more! Surely there must be like minded young men who would like to be friends with benefits. At least his business deals seem to be working as well as his education! I hope this new plan with Sasha works instead of making the heartbreak worse. I don’t think it is the best idea, but maybe… Let the adventures continue!
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    Awakening

    gmc commented on empath's story chapter in Awakening

    It’s a great story, well written and intricate. I’m glad Roger is feeling better about himself. I know he has the means and the ability to help these unfortunate boys entrapped by the psychotic mafioso crime lord. I hope the task force can rescue the boy being taken to Uncle Charlie’s lair!
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    Marc Sievres

    gmc commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Marc Sievres

    What a revelation! I can’t wait for the sharing. Will Fab enjoy learning about the sexual encounters between his father and Will’s family? I love these delightful surprises! Great just great!
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    Chapter 1

    gmc commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A great beginning!
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    Manny and Robby are learning to find a balance between their personal and scholastic lives which will hopefully make both stronger. I think Manny should not have let his parents assume that his relationship with Cindy romantic. It will only confuse the issue. He would be better served by talking about his friendship with Robby and their professional plans for the future. I think this story rings tru. Great job!
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    We're Home!

    gmc commented on R. Eric's story chapter in We're Home!

    The new world is a welcoming home. Every day brings a new beginning. Even the communications from Earth and Mars seem less disturbing. Joel and Hank have done an excellent job. Now as their world flourishes, will they be able to offer some assistance to those left behind or will any contact be too dangerous?
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    Ludo’s sex life saved him! What a lovely twist in a completely twisty frame perpetuated by his spouse. Now where are the culprits? Still lost in the murky waters they have stirred, but the police their goggles trained in the right direction at last. That is the ultimate betrayal within a marriage. How long has this been going on? Poor Ludo! Damian is the only remaining evidence that his marriage was not a complete sham!
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    What a sweet beginning to an intimate relationship. The “gates” have opened!
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    This chapter had a feel of familiarity to me. It reminded me of my last summer at home after my freshman year at university. My hometown in west Texas was so small after the school year in Austin. Even though I loved my parents, after that long uncomfortable summer, I attended summer school sessions and only visited on Christmas break between semesters. Thanks for the reminder. Your writing is authentic! Great job!
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    It’s a small world after all!
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    I hope this means everyone is moving forward. Enough angst, now it’s time to build relationships that last with foundations built on trust. Roger and Mason are definitely leading the way. What a well written story!
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    Enemies and Allies

    gmc commented on empath's story chapter in Enemies and Allies

    What an exciting multifaceted story! I love it!
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    It’s time to grow up. Everyone ends to put on their big boy pants and do the best they can. I guess Cindy is allowed a dress if she prefers, but she is no better than the boys manufacturing a romantic relationship because someone is polite and enjoys her company surely she noticed at least in retrospect Mason never made any attempt to be intimate.
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    Chapter 5

    gmc commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Marc had a good run and his is about to be able to use his expertise as a bargaining chip to improve his mining ship. Sasha will soon be enjoying another aspect of Marc’s expertise! Good chapter!
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    Mason is strong! He proved that during high school. This is different because now he has outed himself because he could no longer hide. As hard as this seems for Mason now, he can now be honest with Robby. Perhaps given a little time his real friends will accept him!
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    Rejoice in the Sun

    gmc commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Rejoice in the Sun

    A future so bright you have to wear shades, but some unsettling messages are out there! Is their haven really safe? Joel is vigilant and Ark II is prepared for confrontation, at least we hope! What a wonderful story!
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