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Both are sad in different ways, but the second seems to also have some hope. Like the others, I didn't notice anything amiss in the rhyming. In fact, I really enjoyed the way the poems flowed.

It's wonderful to catch up with Jay and Mikey again! And it's great to have you back, CG. I laughed so hard thinking of Miles' reaction to the movie. It would be overwhelming for a small town boy. I like the friend that's developing with the older boys. I like the two young men. They are great source of information, but they don't pressure their young friends into anything. I really respect that. The shopping trip was hilarious! Who knew Greg was such a great stylist I think Benny really enjoyed Cal's fashion show. And the invite for the weekend? that might be promising for Greg

lol well I think it might have been close, but I'm pretty sure J and M wanted it more, and enjoyed it more than we ever could Thank you for your review and your support, B.

haha yes, I suppose he did gift Jenson with his 'blood virginity' didn't he? Giving and taking blood in this world is a highly intimate act that requires a lot of trust. I think it's safe to say these two trust each other more than anyone else. Thank you for your review and your support, John

LOL yes, my guys were might have been more well behaved, but they were also apart more than your guys were. Distance makes it easy to keep their hands off of each other. Thank you for your review and support, Puppi.

There is a bit of sadness, with my happiness for having Crave come this far. I think next week will be a bit of mixed emotions for me. I think J and M have a real shot at true happiness too. Thank you for your review and your support, tim

As I said to Tim, Luda would have been devastated if his mate betrayed him that way. J and M needed that connection after everything they've been through since J finally decided to allow Merrick in. I think M enjoyed that bite so much he will get J out of apologizing pretty quickly Coming so close to the end of the story is bittersweet for me. Thank you for the review and staying with me for the ride.

Perfect? I do believe you're a little biased? You know how nervous I was about this chapter, so I am very relieved that you thought it worked. These two characters have waited a long time so I was happy to show that they finally got what they'd been desiring for so long... each other. Thank you for your review and your unwavering support, my friend.

I agree, I don't think Luda would have ever gotten over a betrayal like that. Elsan is the person he trusts the most not only on the planet, but in the galaxy. I'm really happy you like the M & K's 'connection.' It was a really tough scene for me to write. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim

I'm very pleased you've enjoyed the story so far. It's been a lot of fun for me to write. J and M are on well on their way. The next chapter and epilogue will see where we leave them. Thank you for your review and your support. I appreciate it.

That was a great ending, tim! I love that Tait actually stood up to Sean... asking him to leave, repeatedly. It was a great start to getting his power back, and Sean can't hurt him physically any more since he's in prison and will be deported as soon as he's been released. Now he has his job, friends, his painting and Phil, who might soon be his husband? I think his life is coming back together in ways he never hoped were possible when this first happened.

Chapter 27 Merrick felt a sharp twinge in his chest. He stopped in the busy corridor, and breathed through the pain. A strong set of arms wrapped around him, pulling him back against a muscular chest. “Is it getting bad again?” The deep, sexy voice next to his ear made him shiver. “I’m okay.” He took a deep breath as the discomfort subsided. “It’s passing already.” The doctors told him he should expect to feel the effects from his injury for several days after he left the hospital

I think it's safe to say both men enjoyed the whip demonstration I have the feeling it's only a matter of time before it stops becoming a demonstration and Oliver takes Silas somewhere private for a scene.

lol well I'm glad you're hooked and I hope the rest of the story keeps you just as interested Thank you for the review and your support

Both of these men still have demons lurking in their subconscious, ready to feed them doubt and fear at a moments notice. I get why Jared was scared when he woke up. Bad dreams can put you in a bad mindset before your brain has a chance to register what's going on around you. The good thing is, he told Craig what happened and seemed to get past it fairly quickly. Given the way Harlan died, I'm not surprised that Craig was upset about the 'Tarzan' nickname, but I was surprised by the depth of the fear he still has. I honestly think Jared may have had a bit of a death-wish without even realizing what his actions meant at the time, so Craig did have some cause for concern. I think both Jared and Craig are good for each other, but trust does take time. Luckily they have all the time in the world and both men aren't afraid to be honest with each other about their fears and their insecurities. Great job, Gary.

It's never too late to leave a review. Thank you for taking the time to read Crave. I hope you enjoy the story

I really enjoyed this. Sometimes love doesn't go, even if the relationship goes south. Like Gary said, we don't know the whys, but they're not important for this. Great job, tim.

Since there are only a few chapters left, I think you'll get your answers soon. And yes, I can hear Jenson lecturing Merrick too haha. Thank you for your support and your review, Drew.

lol well the reunion is coming up, so we'll see how sweet it is. I'm glad you like the twists and turns. Thank you for your review and your support, John

Feast after the famine, indeed. After being alone for so long Patrick not only has a man but a family now. Although the family feeling permeated the entire chapter, my favourite line was "Family comes first. You are the most important people in my life right now." Even Moster Grethe sounds like she's going to become an important part of Patrick's life. II am a little worried about how interfering Peter's mother and sister are going to be, but until I see otherwise, I will choose to believe they're going to be happy and supportive now that Peter and Michael have who loves them in their lives, just as Moster Grethe has been.

This made made me sad, but hopeful. There was sadness and disillusionment with someone who is supposed to care, but definite strength and determination here.

I think Rob enjoyed that WAY too much I can understand why Rob wants to move farther away for school. I think it's sweet that he originally wanted to stay close for Eric, but he's right, Eric has Nelson now. Rob needs to be able to spread his wings without his parents hovering, no matter how much he loves them.

There are some missing pieces, but some of those should be coming to light soon. I think Jenson is hoping Merrick has answers too. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim

Tait went through hell in that relationship. I find some of the best looking people I know have the most fragile self-esteems and can be made to question their own worth with only a few cruel words from someone they care about. Sean sounds like a predator who was able to sniff out and exploit Tait's weaknesses. I'm just glad that Tait is out of that situation now and is taking control of his life again.

Hahahaha the is kind of fun to use, I must admit I think everyone involved is waiting with bated breath to find out what Merrick knows. Thank you for the review and your support, Def.