Hey, ranchered! It's good to hear from you, and I appreciate you letting me know what you thought of this story. As far as 'religious claptrap', I take your point, but there is nothing in this story that promotes religion... at all. Personally, I have no use for religion, but I am a serious writer and I research extensively before I tackle any story. One of the things that surprised me in doing so was how important faith was to so many cowboys and frontiersmen. For the sake of accuracy, I chose to show how it affected their thinking and their daily lives with these particular characters. Many cowboys were isolated for months at a time, and a belief in God got them through some desolate times.
As a side benefit, showing this gave me a chance to show the folly and warped-ness of religion... a subtle (and not so subtle) bit of soapbox points if you will , which you would have seen had you stuck with this story. I'm sorry my depiction of that time turned you off, but I am immensely proud of this effort. It is an accurate and entertaining portrayal of life in the Old West, which most readers enjoyed enough to ask for a sequel, which I delivered. I hope you change your mind and continue reading, but that is totally your choice. Cheers... Gary....