Jason Rimbaud

That's an amazing story. I think many of us have stories in the same vein. Some end worse than others. My own version, I was also the best man in his wedding. But I was crushed for most of my thirties and moved all the way to San Francisco to escape him.

The end of a game and the beginning of a new one. .

If I hadn't promised Krista that I would only stay on topic in this chapter, I would so have words to say to your Mr. Dog. But I don't, so I'm going to not say anything.

I know I'm quoting myself, but this tickles me so much that no one seems to know this reference.

Straight boys, hard to play gay chicken with gay boys, we'd end up just having sex. That happened a few times as well.

That was not my intent. We must embrace Javin. I am team Javin.

I think you are going to hate the direction this story is heading towards. This is not a RomCom or a romance story. This is a silly Christmas story with two people playing a competitive game of gay chicken. So even the premise is silly. And though I will say emotions come into play further along in the story, ultimately that is not what this story is about. This is about absurd situations, hopefully amusing dialogue, fucked up characters who may or may not encounter a Christmas miracle. And just for fun, I threw in a bunch of absurd sex that gets even weirder with two characters who may or may not be reliable narrators. And have a habit of telling the reader one thing and then doing the exact opposite. I'm a silly author who writes silly stories. So if that sounds for you, the ride gets stranger. My christmas stories are absurd by design. It's my way to experiment. So you might actually not enjoy this story.

Firstly, you misspelled self loathing hypocrisy. I have had my share of bullies in my past. But I was never the target from the same person multiple times. Usually because I'd just fight back and most bullies moved on to other targets. But I've never understood the motivations of someone like Jax. The constant targeting, pushing every day, with their idiot friends laughin the background. Very pathetic. But Joel fighting back is the right thing. Though he should've thrown fists instead of riding the boys dick. What a bottom. And I disagree, if Jax suddenly becomes gay, that would be disappointing. I do like the fact we don't know why Jax is such an idiot. But then he's a jock, and that's par for the course. Besides, we don't need any more gay people in this story. The two we have don't behave like any gay boys I ever met. Let's not get distracted with other boys no matter how much I'd like to see Roy hook up with someone, maybe a threesome with Javin at the next lame Fletcher party.

Percy squirted the lotion all over Five’s back. Then he started to rub it in. He made sure to coat the skin evenly. When he finished with the back, he squeezed out one long line down the back of each leg. “That’s cold,” Five murmured as he shivered from the sudden chill. Percy started at the ankles and worked his way up. The closer he got to Five’s butt, the hotter the skin seemed. He stopped right at the bottom of Five’s cheeks. Then he used both hands to work the lotion into the ri

So I called it, Jax and Joel made up, just like I predicted. Fletcher parties can now be officially declared as crappy. Three parties, and zero blowjobs. Joel's declaration that Jax can't beat him was telling. Shows a mindset of determination with a mix of self sabotage. A behavior I can relate, I never knew when to fit into status quo and I never liked bullies. Plus I actually love confrontations. Colt's butt, who cares, the real story is Davin and his overly concerned nature. Though to be fair, all he wanted to do was have some alone with Joel. Though he seems to be a follower, and before Krista tries to explain the reasons why, it's because he's not a forceful person. For years he was in the shadow of Colt, hanging around, hoping for some love that dare not speak its name. It's his nature. He is hiding from his parents, hiding his sexuality, and that makes him careful. As it was said, get out of your own head. Joel was unlikable for the first time. Like drenched in self pity and self loathing. The boy should not drink. If Davin was smart, he'd go back chasing Colt. Though if Colt's behavior tonight was any indication of how he behaved around Davin, no wonder the boy stuck around drooling all these years. How you've written Colt this entire story, he would not have covered up his bits. He would have dared Joel to look. Fun chapter and we even got it early. So thanks fabulous Krista.

That was a Friends reference, After that comment, never mind. I had dirty thoughts for a moment

Sometimes Percy comes up with something witty.

I think the only people still pretending are P & F. . Everyone else knows what the deal is. Call to Tyler's Dilemma.

Hello, how you doing?

20 characters then. I can’t even sign my name anymore. It’s too long.

I’m boycotting commenting on this chapter until I read it. not a peep more until I do.

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And the straps and butons of overalls. It's all very slow and cumbersome.

Of course, you must collect your voucher in person. I'll wait.

Kind Mr. Dog, I believe you meant the fourth wall.

Quit toying with my emotions...I can't take this roller coaster ride of indecision. I say I love Jolt, you laugh and tell me its impossible. I say I'm on Javin, you laugh and give me hints that I'll someones wet butt in boxers. All lies to keep me dangling on the end of your string. But I'm onto you. You are going to do what you wish, and as the author, I don't understand why you can't write/right the story I want. bahwaaaaaaaaaa Okay, that's enough of that shit. I'll post my chapter tomorrow.

Don't listen to her, @Okiegrad she dangled promises to me and I bought in and she laughs as she disappears into the night. Run, far away and very fast. I don't want you to be broken like I have been.

It will be three by tomorrow, or late tonight. And its good that you aren't reading the comments. There not as high brow as the ones in your story. I'm pretty sure I came up with that one. At least I'm taking credit until the real culprit surfaces. I'm so over Colt, he was yesterday's crush. I am fully marching along to Javin, the real pairing we didn't ask for but happily deserve.

I think you won all the comments in this chapter with that hard hitting expose.

I do not want to put words in anyone's mouth. So I'll say we rock paper scissors for that honor. I won.